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Author-san may I ask what the system meant when it said Travel to another world like is it referring to the God realm or???
It could be better but the fact that MC is a weakling isn't good at all, he didn't advance for 150+ chapters and focused on teaching others that himself
Ayooo this is peak story writing I'm looking forward to more chapters please keep up the good work
Writing quality is good enough but the plot sucks ballz. It is pretty much canon after a while. Our MC became just another member of Shrek seven devils. And it is filled with endless word padding chapters. A random fight between Zuqing Rongrong team against a noname team from the Battle Arena lasted for 3 chapters. The constant slice of life with long long fight scenes make this story a very boring shounen story. BTW the MC looks like he is aromantic/asexual. There was no romance in 150 chapters.
Nice story so far but editor need more editing about soul rank in this story But this story make 746 chapter still not complete yet I hope editor can do something about it Jdjxjxndjxjejdjxdkkdckdjndeidoxjhdxbxjdkjxjxdjjxxjjddjxjcjjcdkkdosixjxjdjdjxkxkxkxkxkxkxkxkdkdjxjxjxjdkdkxjxjxjxkxkxkxkxkxkxkxkxkxkxkxkdixjxjxjskkxhxidkwjxjxjxkxkdkxkxkxkkxjdkxkxkxkxjxjxjjxjdjdkdkxkdkxkxk
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Story is nice for an MTL novel but so slooooowww... From chapter 100 something to 200+ Mc gain like 4 soul level... Sad cuz the idea is nice but the pace is just to slow for me :/
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Good quality writing, shame tht the story development is trash. As of chapter 50 until chapter 200 plus, mc never get anymore power up. So expect to see him getting manhandled every time a strong adversary appears. Didn't like reading this events one bit.
The mc is braindead, the system asspulls often, got a little over a dozen chapters and couldn't deal with the stupid,mc is directionless as an irritating gag, he's always "alone" so there's nothing to offset the annoyance,his personality is luffy meets a goldfish,the update rate is good and it's perfectly legible, just personally found the mc nauseating
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I’ve recently strted reading this novel and it’s pretty good but I’m not sure if I can continue after I read the part where he absorbed a 800 year spirit ring when his first in over 1000 thousand, why did the auther have to make it like that, it just ruines the configuration and shock value and when he shows it off won’t poeple think he’s an idiot
I'm enjoying the character interactions, especially the mc who has no sense of direction
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Pretty good novel, i strongly recommend reading it, too lazy to write more as usual.
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Muito bom obg a história está se passando no ritmo ótimo a personalidade do personagem muito boa gostei muito continue assim está super ótimo....
Até agora eu estou gostando da fanfic ao todo, mais eu estou gostando mais do mc especificamente, eu gosto bastante da personalidade dele........
The translation is pretty good, and the story is light but quite funny. Keep up the good work TL-san! Why can't I just leave a small review?
I like it. When I looked at it I thought it would be boring, but I gave it a chance and skipped the first chapter (sorry author). It started off calmly and is slowly moving forward, there isn't much filler, which I'm happy about, and the plot is, in my humble opinion, engaging, and since it's a fanfic, it more or less follows the Soul Land chronology. (P.S. I hope zhu zhu will be with MC)
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I would say that the story is excellent, and it’s translation quality in a very enjoyable read, overall with a rather likable main character. I wouldn’t say he has some incredible amount of talent with cultivation, but he does have a very decent amount of talent, he’s a hard worker, and directionally challenged lol. I highly suggest giving it a try at least.
Author-san may I ask what the system meant when it said Travel to another world like is it referring to the God realm or???
It could be better but the fact that MC is a weakling isn't good at all, he didn't advance for 150+ chapters and focused on teaching others that himself
Ayooo this is peak story writing I'm looking forward to more chapters please keep up the good work
Writing quality is good enough but the plot sucks ballz. It is pretty much canon after a while. Our MC became just another member of Shrek seven devils. And it is filled with endless word padding chapters. A random fight between Zuqing Rongrong team against a noname team from the Battle Arena lasted for 3 chapters. The constant slice of life with long long fight scenes make this story a very boring shounen story. BTW the MC looks like he is aromantic/asexual. There was no romance in 150 chapters.
Nice story so far but editor need more editing about soul rank in this story But this story make 746 chapter still not complete yet I hope editor can do something about it Jdjxjxndjxjejdjxdkkdckdjndeidoxjhdxbxjdkjxjxdjjxxjjddjxjcjjcdkkdosixjxjdjdjxkxkxkxkxkxkxkxkdkdjxjxjxjdkdkxjxjxjxkxkxkxkxkxkxkxkxkxkxkxkdixjxjxjskkxhxidkwjxjxjxkxkdkxkxkxkkxjdkxkxkxkxjxjxjjxjdjdkdkxkdkxkxk
Revelar Spoiler Story is nice for an MTL novel but so slooooowww... From chapter 100 something to 200+ Mc gain like 4 soul level... Sad cuz the idea is nice but the pace is just to slow for me :/
Revelar Spoiler Good quality writing, shame tht the story development is trash. As of chapter 50 until chapter 200 plus, mc never get anymore power up. So expect to see him getting manhandled every time a strong adversary appears. Didn't like reading this events one bit.
The mc is braindead, the system asspulls often, got a little over a dozen chapters and couldn't deal with the stupid,mc is directionless as an irritating gag, he's always "alone" so there's nothing to offset the annoyance,his personality is luffy meets a goldfish,the update rate is good and it's perfectly legible, just personally found the mc nauseating
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I’ve recently strted reading this novel and it’s pretty good but I’m not sure if I can continue after I read the part where he absorbed a 800 year spirit ring when his first in over 1000 thousand, why did the auther have to make it like that, it just ruines the configuration and shock value and when he shows it off won’t poeple think he’s an idiot
I'm enjoying the character interactions, especially the mc who has no sense of direction
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Pretty good novel, i strongly recommend reading it, too lazy to write more as usual.
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Muito bom obg a história está se passando no ritmo ótimo a personalidade do personagem muito boa gostei muito continue assim está super ótimo....
Até agora eu estou gostando da fanfic ao todo, mais eu estou gostando mais do mc especificamente, eu gosto bastante da personalidade dele........
The translation is pretty good, and the story is light but quite funny. Keep up the good work TL-san! Why can't I just leave a small review?
I like it. When I looked at it I thought it would be boring, but I gave it a chance and skipped the first chapter (sorry author). It started off calmly and is slowly moving forward, there isn't much filler, which I'm happy about, and the plot is, in my humble opinion, engaging, and since it's a fanfic, it more or less follows the Soul Land chronology. (P.S. I hope zhu zhu will be with MC)
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I would say that the story is excellent, and it’s translation quality in a very enjoyable read, overall with a rather likable main character. I wouldn’t say he has some incredible amount of talent with cultivation, but he does have a very decent amount of talent, he’s a hard worker, and directionally challenged lol. I highly suggest giving it a try at least.