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LV 4

Dark_PersonJJ

I was wondering, will use Light Novel to.?Since Anime is dead.? And great chapter with Akeno btw

1yr 54

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LV 4

Mcho_

Well its that bad you just need to turn you brain off when reading. Its okay if you have time to waste, tho the grammar and the use of pronouns is wrong sometimes, but its still readable Was going to complain to it has too much 18+ chapters but just by the title alone, story is waste Eventho he said that he hate mind control skills. And that his phromone and stuff are just suggestion and just make him like-able but still looks like a mind control just a mild one and not direct. And all the heroines are a little force in relationship. Who would accept accept having sx with someone you just met its so pure bs. Would have believed it if like a week passed but no. In the get go when they meet MC they already spread their legs to him

1yr 22

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LV 5

BIT_Gaming

excelent story 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 . 1000/1000. Even beter than the story The Supreme Perfect Being.

1yr 14

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LV 13

Axel_ace

I've only read a few chapters and so far its ok, the update is pretty consistent, the plot(?) is kind of mid ngl, and the grammar is really bad, its still readable, so thats good.👍

1yr 12

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LV 3

Gabichu_Yeah

We know why we are here, since I am going to enjoy reading I will at least give 5 stars in gratitude. .....................................................................................................................................................................................................................

1yr 7

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LV 3

AbsoluteDegeneracy

I made it to chapter 49, and well, some annoyances. My first problem with the story is how repetitive the intimate scenes with the harem members are. All of the girls, for the most part, lose their individuality during the intimate scenes and they all turn into a generic begging dog. All of the "first time" chapters for the girls are almost exactly the same in routine, giving the feeling that the protagonist is just going through the motions. This is the same feeling that I am getting from most of the intimate scenes recently. There needs to be uniqueness in conversation, dirty-talk, and the "order of operation". Make the girls feel like a they aren't all clones of a generic soulless doll. Too much intimacy. Surprisingly this is a thing. With the repetitive writing throughout the first 49 chapters, I am getting bored of reading the same thing constantly. This would not be such an issue if at the same time the women in the harem showed individual characteristics, however it seems like they all act the exact same in these scenes, say similar things, and have a lack of IQ. It can't be fun to write about our MC banging a blowup doll with a voice-box that only has 10 lines it says. Cringe. A lot of things the MC says is rough. Some is alright. Some may be necessary to get the point across about the MC's character, but to the point where he says some variations of "I love you too, I loved you since i first saw you," to every heroine? That is the tip of the cringe-iceberg. If the MC wasn't a wannabe shonen protagonist screaming, "take it all inside you" five times a chapter like he just had a plot-armor power-up, i would be more eager to read. -Return the heroines IQ (can still 'love' mc even if they have a brain) -Slow down on the cringe (no tips just do it) -Spice it up (I don't want to read the protagonist and the heroine using the same positions in the same order moaning the same words at each-other each intimate scene) -If you don't spice it up, cut down on the 18+ (so spice it up) {This is an 18+ work. Give the heroines and mc a real relationship and individuality. They shouldn't all act like the same screaming dog in bed.}

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9mth 5

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LV 2

GOOD_NIGHT

I was actually liking this fanfic, but in the part where Irina and Xenovia appear I stopped reading, because to me it doesn't make sense that MC still wants to have relationships with people who literally want to kill, for me it was a reason to stop reading read, for people who read this review I ask you to read the fanfic and see if it is to your liking. 👍

1yr 4

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pingvinchik

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1yr 4

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LV 4

John_Rex_98

this awesome!!! peak degenerate novel!!! add Testament New devil girls in this

9mth 3

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LV 4

Amannensen

boy I have read many fanfics but this one is one of the best. I hope u won't drop it like many but be one of the few who shows a good ending . And personal request please update more chap a day

1yr 3

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LV 2

Orion_Ridge

It's a bit rough around the edges but great for a wish-fulfillment fanfic. (This type of fanfic is one of my favorites, so 👍) ..................

1yr 3

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LV 2

Pol_L

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1yr 3

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LV 3

Schaar3811

Tis my first review The romance is cringe and fast paced..... But the best part is the guts.....the author gives the extremely rare dxd yokai oyakodon....and more...if u have cringe immunity read this .....hats off author

8mth 2

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LV 1

Korkyros

While this is not originally written in English there are several translation errors through the story but they are relatively obvious and easy to understand. Why I scored it so low was due to the fact that MC has knowledge he shouldn't and to really enjoy it you have to turn off your brain.

11mth 2

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LV 13

Adithya_Padmakumar

love the story so far I just wanted to know if the mc will be going back to the dxd world anytime soon

11mth 2

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LV 3

WuPeMi

Grammar is pretty mid (I'm on 13 chapter so maybe later is better), pretty fast put i like that, i don't want write more so I will just summary, pretty solid fanfic and go read it

1yr 2

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LV 14

Dracoking

its's a story I think you should update the story 2 times a day

1yr 2

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LV 2

Bloodnight

I don't mind if you give a 3 star review or even 2 or 1 but please don't say things like "I don't like because is bad", no, i want a reason, please refrain from doing that, thanks. I'm saying this because there are people that says that my fic is bad without give me a reason, i'm warning you, i'll remove the review if you do that so think about a reason before give me a review, like i said i don't mind if you give me a 1 star review if you give me a reason, thanks for reading this fic.

1yr 2

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LV 1

Kiriga000

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1yr 2

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LV 14

Dracoking

This is some good work just wondering if you can make some longer chapters

1yr 2

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