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- Qualidade de Escrita
- Estabilidade das atualizações
- Desenvolvimento de Histórias
- Design de Personagens
- Antecedentes do mundo
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Apart from the fast pace and the lack of depth in Mc's personality (at least in the beginning, I thought he got used to the new reality very quickly) other than that it's very good I'm using the translator
man you said he was impervious to weapons and armor pearcing are affecting him.
hey man at least release 10 chapter at the start then continue releasing as usual.
The Story starts out great and is very thrilling and exciting for the first 15-20 chapters but as soon as Mary Jane introduced the author completely forgot about the story and wasted 10 or more chapters with almost no story progression. Also for having such a smart and capable MC who is a #Villian it’s disappointing to see our MC do so much for Mary Jane when in fact he has no feelings for her and also he lacks intelligence overal but supposedly has so much intelligence he gained telepathy lol. You need a smart author to write MC. There many instances when the MC could’ve used his brain but instead he’s dumbfounded allows situations to occur for no reason.
Apart from the fast pace and the lack of depth in Mc's personality (at least in the beginning, I thought he got used to the new reality very quickly) other than that it's very good I'm using the translator
man you said he was impervious to weapons and armor pearcing are affecting him.
hey man at least release 10 chapter at the start then continue releasing as usual.
The Story starts out great and is very thrilling and exciting for the first 15-20 chapters but as soon as Mary Jane introduced the author completely forgot about the story and wasted 10 or more chapters with almost no story progression. Also for having such a smart and capable MC who is a #Villian it’s disappointing to see our MC do so much for Mary Jane when in fact he has no feelings for her and also he lacks intelligence overal but supposedly has so much intelligence he gained telepathy lol. You need a smart author to write MC. There many instances when the MC could’ve used his brain but instead he’s dumbfounded allows situations to occur for no reason.