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- Qualidade de Escrita
- Estabilidade das atualizações
- Desenvolvimento de Histórias
- Design de Personagens
- Antecedentes do mundo
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Actually judged the book by its cover and started reading. 😂 Not disappointed! Currently only 6 chs. but a very intriguing start that’s full of mystery and building suspense. It feels like the author has done his research, but the story is also written to be enjoyed by anyone. (If you’re a history buff or familiar with the real world details, you’ll appreciate the author’s extra effort. 🫡) Really well written. Can’t think of any errors that stood out. I’ve enjoyed the natural dialog and descriptions that paint a picture but don’t belabor the point. All in all, I think there’s a great adventure ahead and a story that lives up to the title. Nice start! 🙌
I just read the first three chapters, but the plot, dialogue, and overall storytelling's simply sublime. 10/10 would recommend.
banger! I am really looking forward to what OakFlame has in store for us. The first two chapters are already hooking and reflective of his mastery, can't wait for more.
A real thriller that unites us vehicles alike for its great message. From sports cars to bicycles, to even factories and aircraft carriers, all of the mechanical world's gears and mechanisms is filled with friction for its engine-pounding , missile-launching and electrifying storyline! A true and powerful story indeed. 5 Stars.
Revelar Spoiler Actually judged the book by its cover and started reading. 😂 Not disappointed! Currently only 6 chs. but a very intriguing start that’s full of mystery and building suspense. It feels like the author has done his research, but the story is also written to be enjoyed by anyone. (If you’re a history buff or familiar with the real world details, you’ll appreciate the author’s extra effort. 🫡) Really well written. Can’t think of any errors that stood out. I’ve enjoyed the natural dialog and descriptions that paint a picture but don’t belabor the point. All in all, I think there’s a great adventure ahead and a story that lives up to the title. Nice start! 🙌
I just read the first three chapters, but the plot, dialogue, and overall storytelling's simply sublime. 10/10 would recommend.
banger! I am really looking forward to what OakFlame has in store for us. The first two chapters are already hooking and reflective of his mastery, can't wait for more.
A real thriller that unites us vehicles alike for its great message. From sports cars to bicycles, to even factories and aircraft carriers, all of the mechanical world's gears and mechanisms is filled with friction for its engine-pounding , missile-launching and electrifying storyline! A true and powerful story indeed. 5 Stars.
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