Reviews of FAIRY TAIL: GAMER PATH by Jovami6729 - Webnovel

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3.79

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Gaal_Gul

фанфик хороший че давать ему 1 звезду я хз................................................................................................................

1mth
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Daniel_Sciacco

Buena historia, me gustó mucho. Tanto el trasfondo mundial, como el desarrollo y personalidad del MC están bien desarrollados. El desarrollo de la historia también está bien hecho y es entretenido. Aunque hay un par de cosas que podrían haberse hecho mejor. El desarrollo del romance fue "apagado" a falta de una palabra mejor, y al final se sintió forzado, se mostraron muchas interacciones con algunos personajes como Levy o Lucy que indicaban romance pero las dejaste olvidadas o las descartaste. También hay algunos errores en los nombres. En cuanto a las recompensas también me decepcionó, al principio estaban bien, eran Teigus u objetos poderosos que le servirían, pero después le seguiste dando armas que no usaría nunca ni le servirían para nada. Lo mismo con esas Lacrimas que solo aumentaban sus atributos cuando las equipaba, me parecieron premios inútiles, si las hubiera absorbido o algo así habría estado mejor pero la mayoría de esas Lacrimas no le servían para nada. Las personalidades y desarrollos de otros personajes también estuvieron bien hechos, excepto Mira, parecía haber recuperado la personalidad peleadora e insoportable que tenía de niña y no me gustó.

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2mth
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Aaron_Hand_4795

The grammar 🫣… probably abit unfair to rate this so low, after only the first few chapters, but I couldn’t get through it.

4mth
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hyuse888

Ybubibi i i i i i i i i i i I i k k i

6mth
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hyuse888

Gybuhibububu unininibibi u ibu i i u u u u

6mth
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John9999000000

nice author San pls create more if possible

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Dylan_Duru

thank you for this generous gift of a fanfic. it is a rare gem in the Fairy tail section

10mth
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guarek03

This story is great so far. I can't wait to read more..................................................................................................

12mth
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Humbuub

The writing has way too many mistakes that never improved. Story is basically a more vanilla rehash, you might as well rewatch the anime. Characters are more dumb since they like the MC. Updates are okay.

12mth
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cafreine

*sigh, so many people have trash taste nowaday..

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12mth
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Zakfiel_03

Despite everything, I like the story, and what others complain about is valid, but in my opinion the story is well written, it is fun and entertaining, only if I would like it to have more romance with the people or if the protagonist didn't He is so half a princess but he has his touch

1yr
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Khons
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The Mc is mentally impaired. I do not recommend that you read this.

1yr
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Alfajarog_3000

can you please a Add Harem tag its more fun and enjoyable that way.

1yr
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Riel_the_One

I would say that this book is actually one of the best fanfics I've read so far. The way the author combines the action, comedy and romance makes it worthwhile to read. Keep up the good work author.

1yr
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Asdrendor

Harem?????...............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

1yr
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Kennchan

His Writing is decent but Did he really need to secretly develop his Story into a Harem. He made every girls in the story love guy.....ugh. I felt like I wasted my time for nothing. I hate authors that purposely don't include harem tags

1yr
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Woftdragon

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1yr
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ivan_Espinosa

👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 Muy buena la historia espero más capítulos ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………

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1yr
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Arnab_Panday

I don't like you dumping info in a fanfic but without it, it takes away the words to write. So, I am not going to complain about it. But, why are you making your fanfic frustrating to read?! The main Virgo, the MC made many drama with it. He goes as far as telling why he needs her but in the end the results: [ Your < Mana Manipulation> level is not sufficient.]!! And gave the key to Lusy. If I didn't know any better, I would say this is NTR. If any experienced readers are reading this review of mine then be warned: this fanfic will test your patients. And if new readers then be prepared to go in experienced readers group.

1yr
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Ncc_Buaiqu

nice :) ............................................................................................. .............................................................................................

1yr
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Nilo_dgg

i dont care what people say i liked the story ..................................................................................................................................

1yr
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stark69_

this is one of the best fairy tail fan fiction

1yr
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Mahbub2001

This fanfiction is one good one. A gamer fic with a not so Instant op mc.The mc's character is also likeable. Of course, the turn off is too many teigu and magical artifects and giving mc plot armour like faiy heart. A good fairy tail fiction worth reading.

1yr
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Gaal_Gul

:)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

1yr
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Lox_Of_Sins

Nope on this one buddy, I myself am a amateur author, but I actually slowly improve my writing you however just stick to the jumbled up mess and headache inducing grammar, place get better for yourself and the naive people who actually read this…

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1yr
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Gaal_Gul

5 звезд (потому что мне нравится), ну а теперь о плохом слишком СЛИШКОМ много предметов. Пусть mc развивается с некоторым количеством предметов это было бы интереснее!

1yr
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Daniel_Alejandro_W

Empezó raro, pero valió la pena seguir leyendo, queda un poco en el aire cuál es la verdadera fuerza del MC, aunque encaja muy bien con la temática del anime

1yr
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Dragenki

Amazing story! ! Please Keep on writing! ! ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

1yr
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Kirito_Kirigaia

it different it aight. The author improved his craft more. i like how it going cause i want him to bang angel,erza,mira or cana

1yr
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King4422

awesome story. Thanks for the story 😀😀😀

1yr
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Gaal_Gul

фанфик хороший че давать ему 1 звезду я хз................................................................................................................

1mth
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Daniel_Sciacco

Buena historia, me gustó mucho. Tanto el trasfondo mundial, como el desarrollo y personalidad del MC están bien desarrollados. El desarrollo de la historia también está bien hecho y es entretenido. Aunque hay un par de cosas que podrían haberse hecho mejor. El desarrollo del romance fue "apagado" a falta de una palabra mejor, y al final se sintió forzado, se mostraron muchas interacciones con algunos personajes como Levy o Lucy que indicaban romance pero las dejaste olvidadas o las descartaste. También hay algunos errores en los nombres. En cuanto a las recompensas también me decepcionó, al principio estaban bien, eran Teigus u objetos poderosos que le servirían, pero después le seguiste dando armas que no usaría nunca ni le servirían para nada. Lo mismo con esas Lacrimas que solo aumentaban sus atributos cuando las equipaba, me parecieron premios inútiles, si las hubiera absorbido o algo así habría estado mejor pero la mayoría de esas Lacrimas no le servían para nada. Las personalidades y desarrollos de otros personajes también estuvieron bien hechos, excepto Mira, parecía haber recuperado la personalidad peleadora e insoportable que tenía de niña y no me gustó.

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2mth
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Aaron_Hand_4795

The grammar 🫣… probably abit unfair to rate this so low, after only the first few chapters, but I couldn’t get through it.

4mth
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hyuse888

Ybubibi i i i i i i i i i i I i k k i

6mth
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hyuse888

Gybuhibububu unininibibi u ibu i i u u u u

6mth
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John9999000000

nice author San pls create more if possible

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10mth
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Dylan_Duru

thank you for this generous gift of a fanfic. it is a rare gem in the Fairy tail section

10mth
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guarek03

This story is great so far. I can't wait to read more..................................................................................................

12mth
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Humbuub

The writing has way too many mistakes that never improved. Story is basically a more vanilla rehash, you might as well rewatch the anime. Characters are more dumb since they like the MC. Updates are okay.

12mth
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cafreine

*sigh, so many people have trash taste nowaday..

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12mth
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Zakfiel_03

Despite everything, I like the story, and what others complain about is valid, but in my opinion the story is well written, it is fun and entertaining, only if I would like it to have more romance with the people or if the protagonist didn't He is so half a princess but he has his touch

1yr
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Khons
LV 14 Badge

The Mc is mentally impaired. I do not recommend that you read this.

1yr
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Alfajarog_3000

can you please a Add Harem tag its more fun and enjoyable that way.

1yr
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Riel_the_One

I would say that this book is actually one of the best fanfics I've read so far. The way the author combines the action, comedy and romance makes it worthwhile to read. Keep up the good work author.

1yr
Ver 0 Respostas
Asdrendor

Harem?????...............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

1yr
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Kennchan

His Writing is decent but Did he really need to secretly develop his Story into a Harem. He made every girls in the story love guy.....ugh. I felt like I wasted my time for nothing. I hate authors that purposely don't include harem tags

1yr
Ver 0 Respostas
Woftdragon

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1yr
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ivan_Espinosa

👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 Muy buena la historia espero más capítulos ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………

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1yr
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Arnab_Panday

I don't like you dumping info in a fanfic but without it, it takes away the words to write. So, I am not going to complain about it. But, why are you making your fanfic frustrating to read?! The main Virgo, the MC made many drama with it. He goes as far as telling why he needs her but in the end the results: [ Your < Mana Manipulation> level is not sufficient.]!! And gave the key to Lusy. If I didn't know any better, I would say this is NTR. If any experienced readers are reading this review of mine then be warned: this fanfic will test your patients. And if new readers then be prepared to go in experienced readers group.

1yr
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Ncc_Buaiqu

nice :) ............................................................................................. .............................................................................................

1yr
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Nilo_dgg

i dont care what people say i liked the story ..................................................................................................................................

1yr
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stark69_

this is one of the best fairy tail fan fiction

1yr
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Mahbub2001

This fanfiction is one good one. A gamer fic with a not so Instant op mc.The mc's character is also likeable. Of course, the turn off is too many teigu and magical artifects and giving mc plot armour like faiy heart. A good fairy tail fiction worth reading.

1yr
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Gaal_Gul

:)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

1yr
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Lox_Of_Sins

Nope on this one buddy, I myself am a amateur author, but I actually slowly improve my writing you however just stick to the jumbled up mess and headache inducing grammar, place get better for yourself and the naive people who actually read this…

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1yr
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Gaal_Gul

5 звезд (потому что мне нравится), ну а теперь о плохом слишком СЛИШКОМ много предметов. Пусть mc развивается с некоторым количеством предметов это было бы интереснее!

1yr
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Daniel_Alejandro_W

Empezó raro, pero valió la pena seguir leyendo, queda un poco en el aire cuál es la verdadera fuerza del MC, aunque encaja muy bien con la temática del anime

1yr
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Dragenki

Amazing story! ! Please Keep on writing! ! ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

1yr
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Kirito_Kirigaia

it different it aight. The author improved his craft more. i like how it going cause i want him to bang angel,erza,mira or cana

1yr
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King4422

awesome story. Thanks for the story 😀😀😀

1yr
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