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very good fanfic [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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4-star. overall nice and fun to read. .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . 140 characterslimit140 characterslimit140 characterslimit140 characterslimit
This was one of the best marvel fanfics until overwatch wa created. MC uses it openly for his own benefits and no one complains
Pretty decent read, no actually its quite good depends on people. Although mc is a bit bland but its in good way, no wishy washy beta mc or a egoistic psychotic mass murderer chinese mc. Though there are some mistake is writing, not really breaker for me, i wish the author write more interesting pov on mc’s doing. No comment on plot, its fanfic after all, always the same plot with some alteration from mc. Nothing worth mentioning.
Writing quality is ok...flow could have been betterMain problem is character of MC...i mean it is the same problem with all Chinese...after transmigration they starts to show off without considering long term incidence even if they were average in their previous life...it is their inferiority complex that ruin the novels...
TA bueno, algunas veces sientes que se olvida del sistema pero solo esta dejando acumulando XD, y dentro de todo es algo como op mc Autor tené cuidado que le haces a la reina roja 👀 ( XD )
I was the Air Force intelligence chief for Southern Sweden. I covered a lot of bases. But my biggest accomplishment was making sure that my guys could use the Spaghetti-Os if they got captured. One night we were walking through the mountains, and we had a long discussion about the value of intelligence. And one of our soldiers got pretty frustrated. He complained that the enemy was using spaghetti-Os to communicate with our soldiers. I overheard our soldiers talking behind a bush about how the enemy was using earplugs. The guy kept walking, then when I heard him say it, I stepped in front of him, screamed: ‘You’re using earplugs! You’re using earplugs!’ And I had the biggest moment of my life
what is the link and original name of the novel?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
I am NOT the author of this fanfic, I am just translating it. Original Title: 无限抽卡的漫威天使 Author: 有否晨曦 Please let me know if you see any mistakes, I usually fix them quickly. [img=recommend]
very good fanfic [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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4-star. overall nice and fun to read. .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . 140 characterslimit140 characterslimit140 characterslimit140 characterslimit
This was one of the best marvel fanfics until overwatch wa created. MC uses it openly for his own benefits and no one complains
Pretty decent read, no actually its quite good depends on people. Although mc is a bit bland but its in good way, no wishy washy beta mc or a egoistic psychotic mass murderer chinese mc. Though there are some mistake is writing, not really breaker for me, i wish the author write more interesting pov on mc’s doing. No comment on plot, its fanfic after all, always the same plot with some alteration from mc. Nothing worth mentioning.
Writing quality is ok...flow could have been betterMain problem is character of MC...i mean it is the same problem with all Chinese...after transmigration they starts to show off without considering long term incidence even if they were average in their previous life...it is their inferiority complex that ruin the novels...
TA bueno, algunas veces sientes que se olvida del sistema pero solo esta dejando acumulando XD, y dentro de todo es algo como op mc Autor tené cuidado que le haces a la reina roja 👀 ( XD )
I was the Air Force intelligence chief for Southern Sweden. I covered a lot of bases. But my biggest accomplishment was making sure that my guys could use the Spaghetti-Os if they got captured. One night we were walking through the mountains, and we had a long discussion about the value of intelligence. And one of our soldiers got pretty frustrated. He complained that the enemy was using spaghetti-Os to communicate with our soldiers. I overheard our soldiers talking behind a bush about how the enemy was using earplugs. The guy kept walking, then when I heard him say it, I stepped in front of him, screamed: ‘You’re using earplugs! You’re using earplugs!’ And I had the biggest moment of my life
what is the link and original name of the novel?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
I am NOT the author of this fanfic, I am just translating it. Original Title: 无限抽卡的漫威天使 Author: 有否晨曦 Please let me know if you see any mistakes, I usually fix them quickly. [img=recommend]