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Attention: I originally wrote this review in Spanish so you may find some inconsistencies and spelling mistakes. To be honest, it's a pretty good work, although it's true that the development of the protagonist can be a bit "emo" at the beginning, it's understandable because of the context/story of the MC, even so his personality develops and improves until he manages to open up to Irina for the first time. The development of the protagonist's power seems perfect to me, neither too slow nor too fast. I like how the author develops the emotions of the MC and the secondary characters, giving them a very pleasant and unforced touch. The power system is not the typical one so that's a plus. The secondary characters, despite not being perfect in development, have their history, traumas, tastes and personalities and we get to know more about them as the chapters go by. It is possible that some people find the beginning a bit tedious, but I totally recommend reading the work, it is much better than most of the works you can currently find on Webnovel. ps: Author, I beg you not to abandon the novel even if some liars and inexperienced people criticize the novel (I recommend you pin my message, it is a very good and realistic opinion).
I like it's story , in starting it was somewhat similar to author's pov but then it was different
Really good start to the novel, very interesting premise. After about 500 chapters it just devolves into a weird romance love triangle story though. The story also has way too much detail in some cases, where half a chapter is a lesson on team formats when it is not very necessary. I’d say the novel could be almost half the amount of chapters with how much extra is added The switching between POV is also annoying, and sometimes overused. Other than that it has good potential. A bit of editing to get rid of some of the unnecessary bits would make it a lot better.
thumbs up for this novel, may it be pacing of the story, the battle and especially the character development(really like the few normal academic life here and there hoping for more haha). Everything is just good, for once mc is not actually a forbidden arts user or something were one wrong move and mc becomes a evil or becomes a demon or something similar, practically every transmigrated to extra novel I read right now is were MC has monologue about who he is or how how mc is not actually who he is or some bullshit reason. Anyway 5 stars for this novel, good luck to the author really like the book and hope for more similar works in the future.[img=update]
i have read up to 330 chapters and reading.. at first it was little bit boring.. but wait.. the special quotes you are giving.. time to time with the development of the story are really great.. i am keeping those in my note for future reference.. Thanks Author for your priceless efforts.. Keep writing man..
I haven't started it yet so can I have some info about about the mc?! 1.Is his main weapon a gun? 2.Is he the type who hides his power all the time? 3.How many in the harem?! 4. and shamelessy, is he handsome?😂😂
Hello brother kindly restart Erotic RPG: I am in the Game world, But My Heroines are Villainesses novel please... We are waiting please consider my opinion you are good novel writer...
Say author, You plagiarize(steal) contents and ideas from other authors don't you? I actually liked the world building but got fed-up with the edgy mc and dropped; to think even the world building was stolen material! I recently started "the author's pov"(that was released 2 years before this one) and I felt de-ja-vu and i am not talking about clinches, the character that transports the mc to his first dungeon in black market in both the novels are exactly same (identical description, same attitude towards colleagues and the mc, even similar dialogue). you only changed the names to tom & jerry from timothy 1&2 and to marcus from edward. ofcourse also making the whole interactions worse. even the chapter names are same. Kudos for the Author, Entrail_JI who even humbly explained that his work was inspired from the novel's extra and there may be similarities in the beginning even though there were not many yet; where as you! You just shamelessly stole the whole chapter, characters and interactions! I don't know, may be even the other settings and characters in other chapters are stolen too where you just copy, degrade the things with your poor story telling and paste it as your own?
It’s a good novel, and everything is written good. I like the romance between Astron and Irena, but the stuff with maya is a little off putting and I honestly just find Sylvie to be a nuisance, and I just want Astron and Irena to just clarify their relationship at this point without unessesary crao with the other girls interfering
fully written by ai (gpt) if you see flowery words as one of the people gave an example of in one of the reviews. then it means it was written by ai. be aware of what u read. some only take help in editing from ai but this story is 3 lines from the author which are then converted to 4 paragraphs that only contain those three lines of actual content followed by filler flowery 🌺🌹 words.
Having not liked the novel until the end of volume 1 I forced myself to read the sequel and frankly I do not regret. The dialogues are much more fluid and pleasant to read since the arc of the vampire the secondary characters have received a very good development (Erina and Sylvie). the pace of the story moves faster with a main character not too broken the only problem that I have mybe the world building can be a little more developed. This is a modification compared to the first review and I thank you for greatly improving the novel
My favourite novel, everything in this novel is perfect. Main characther, who is getting stronger and smarter, he uses his knowledge to get benefits and her isnt scared of butterfly effect and affect and change the plot. He also takes some good girls, i hope he make harem. Real man must have vast heart. The development of the story, the world background, the characters, everyone plays a role in this novel. Every small details has point.
I would say from any generic fantasy isekai I be ever read maybe exclude SS. this has more detailed romance I ever seen. usually an author write a heroine just for the sake to spread leg to MC. no significant development romance. the only thing I didn't like is why the chapter often had repeated paragraph, it's like want to extend word count as high as possible.
One of the best novels I've ever read👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥!
robotic writing sometimes, chapters take too long on meaningless/boring stuff that can be skipped, some chapters just feel like its just an info dump, making it a pain to read. Still, ill give it 5 stars, the slow chapters do build a foundation for when it gets good and it really feels like the world is real, no matter what cheats astron is getting, it doesn't let him blitz through everyone and become the strongest immediately, the effort really is necessary. The author likes to add a lot of psychology stuff which i definitely enjoy, also the irina romance is peak. Seriously though, i do not care about the ecosystem of the hidden dungeon which is the habitat of time-related monsters and how astron is studying it. Skip most of that shi 👹
Apart from the negative comments below, I love this story. I enjoy the interactions between each character. The author doesn't introduce too many characters. The original story isn't a harem, so there's no NTR involving the MC. Irina doesn't even like Ethan, the original protagonist. She likes Victor, but as mentioned in the story, she never ends up with him in the original timeline, even after Julia rejects him. All the original main cast are childhood friends—Ethan, Lucas, Carl, Irina, Julia, Lilia—and they sort of view each other as siblings, so it's a bit odd for them to develop romantic feelings for one another. Even Ethan likes Jane. As others have mentioned, it's a typical weak-to-strong MC story. The MC starts out as a third-rate villain seeking revenge for his sister's death and becomes powerful through a pact with the devil. But thanks to the MC's memories from his life on Earth, he seeks power and revenge in a different way. Honestly, I prefer for the MC to end up with only Irina rather than the interactions between the MC and his senior, Maya, as well as the pure-hearted future saintess, Sylvie. Yeah, the MC has three potential romantic interests. The MC is a bit edgy but also a handsome man who is close his heart to the people around him at start of story. Irina is a strong, determined, and proud girl. They both have one similarity they don't like to obey others easily, which leads to them bickering and fighting. Throughout the story, they start to open up to each other and change each other for the better. Some criticism for the novel. I hope the author also develops the other main cast characters. Honestly, I also feel the story has problem with slow pace, and I think there are parts that could be cut. At the same time, I feel the character development for the MC, Irina, Maya, Sylvie, and Ethan is too fast. After reading almost 700 chapters, I thought it had been 1-2 years at the academy, but it’s only been one semester
For anyone who hates harem and annoying relationships and is looking for a MC with a developed and neutral personality, this is not for you unfortunately, I am saving you from wasting your time in 700 chapters like I wasted it
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The novel has a great world build and the character development is good until chapter 476. unfortunately on that chapter the author chooses to follow the asshole harem protagonist route, contradicting entirely the character he had built. he forgot yo add the harem tag to the novel after that. please add this so not to waste readers time. it is really uncomfortable to like a history and be taken by surprise by something like this without warning. even more in the asshole way it happened like nothing is wrong with this. it makes a normal person with normal morals want to puke. i know the author dont care so this message is a warning to the readers that dont like harem, if you are not that reader, you can read this novel that you ill like it very much. for the author: For the battles with unknown gender, please avoid using "they" to refer to a single person, it makes the battles really confusing and we have to read it again many times to understand that you are talking about just one of them and this destroy the battle dynamics. if you ill follow this advice, i really dont care anymore. good luck with your emotionless harem hobby.
It's good In phantom land arc the demon claws mc from behind but after some next chapter he is fine very intersting i think I don't know why is he keeping secret of strength who knows and heroines always thinks about mc
I've read many transmigrated ml novels and being villian or extra in the story but this is quite good. I love that it is not just focus on the mc however I don't like the romance part (I'm rooting for the girl with first authority because she's the one that always on the side with mc). I also like Irina but her attitude towards mc on thier first meet kinda annoyed me. This kinda reminds me of novel's extra on some parts.
This novel is good, I can’t say it’s the best in the genre, but I can see some unique. But I had to gave up on this novel, because of the harem, I read the story till the kiss with Maya, but after its was over for me, another harem. I have a question for people, why authors always bring up harem, I can’t understand this, this is the most annoying genre, all the point of harem is to make story about female character and mc to save her, and of course girl will fall in love with our mc. It will be repetetive with the difference only with female characters.
It's a great book love the very dark past. it forms a great connection between characters and the reader. I also love the chemistry between the characters that have been portrait
Revelar Spoiler
Patience of steel is name of the game for this book. You will want to drop it multiple times but trust me, with every chapter and arc it get better and better. I have written so many hate comments on this book and every time I come back. At this point I would consider myself a fanboy of this book. It has one of the best written side characters and romance out there. I am so used to shallow female leads and side characters that this book was a slap in the face for how good they are written. It’s a very slow story but man the author is so good at writing it . If you approach it with a mentality of taking it slow, you will really appreciate this book. It’s a book that makes me happy inside and that rarely happens with most books.
Hello author Hope u give a reply for it all are asking about if the story is harem or not. If its harem y didn’t u tag it so most of them including me does not have to ask this question. I have read 772 chapters till now but if its romance story y its going the plot line to harem ??? As per maya she is becoming obsessed with astron she is a vampire girl which is very bad for to fight next to mc is their a point for mc to be his side but may be one day if she supress her inner demon she might help him. But what esettla said she does not want her near her brother so one day she has to say it to her brother this. Even mc said in finding dungeon chapter he doesn’t want to play anchor role to anyone. So im asking when he is going to tell her I don’t have any feelings to her??? As per irina and mc their chemistry is good most lovable compared to others characters after 150 chapters I guess in small talk after train chapter mc even told he is so comfortable to talk with irina and in do not push chapter he said I want to be here which met he wants to be with her and even before chapter chamber of emberheart he said I don’t regret the decision but why he is becoming a play boy now he doesn’t want to get attached to anyone at the start now he is acting all like a playboy what’s the point of being a loner for almost 500 chapters. Mc knows she has feelings for him but now all she has done to open his heart now he become playboy kissing behind her back before her date plans what a pathetic way I feel bad for irina she fought with her mother like never before and she kept trust in him and even told her she choose wrong partner for herself and now here she choose astron to herself who he becoming a playboy after his charm increased. Its like he told in broadcast not the lie but not the entire truth he is playing same line here with irina. What happens if she learns truth about him and if she looses trust in him she is main character in game plot how she going to help him in the end very bad plot this. Well saintess is saintess she is just a side character till 770 chapters I don’t in future but i hope she deserve other lead character or some one else. I have read like 5 times most chapters. Is it a harem or a romance novel is he going to end with one fl or 3 people i know its a spoiler that’s the reason u r not replying to most of the comments which mentioned about harrm or not but its already near to 800 chapters only other half is remained as u mentioned 1700 chapters so can u please clarify us 🤞🙏🙏🙏🙏
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Waste of time it's another harem trash where 200 chapter is dedicated to one girl and then you never heard of her again and f you for not adding harem tag and I know you're father is unfaithful to your mother no need to make your character like him
Excellent novel, awesome MC and character development. my only wish is to be more fast pace, seem like there are many chapters could be condensed into a couple of chapters,
The single best novel I’ve read on this platform after Why Should I Stop Being a Villain (dropped). I look forward to a new chapter every day. It’s almost become an essential daily routine. Keep up the good work!
I had to read almost 600 chapters before dropping when the author decided to make a harem out of it. I don't see how this will work, considering how the characters of Irina and Maya were written. Please add the “harem” tag to not mislead people
the story is the typical weak to strong attempt, keyword attempt, because this genre usually tries to add in a sense of realness to it, thus the story either ends being really good or the lowest form of trash possible that makes it unreadable. The mc at the start is weaker than an average normal human on basically all parameters and he doesnt even have mana, yet despite being weaker than you and I he somehow managed to get in a school for super humans... how you may ask? no reason lol, he doesnt even have any sort of connection, money or academic ability, but its not like this author cares about logic, thus this story fails right at chapter 1. Anyways I didnt start reading this expecting a masterpiece so I preserved and turned a blind eye to all the stupidity and cliches right till (spoiler) the classic girl turned into a vampire arc cus vampires are cool and edgy, this arc was just too stupid and braindead to the point that I cant endure this torture anymore -_- in this arc the author went way out of his way to break the already almost non existent logic in this story, from mc letting villains injure him because a demon is seeing through them? although this was not an issue with the other villains who are even ranked higher, but if he didnt get injured the random vampire wouldnt have found his blood on the street to get a power up for by licking the blood that is somehow still fresh and get the power to turn magical girl into a vampire -_- summary: typical trash story that pretends to not be a trash story, so it doesnt offer any sort of enjoyment. And to the author if youre reading this please find another career this is really not it -_-
Attention: I originally wrote this review in Spanish so you may find some inconsistencies and spelling mistakes. To be honest, it's a pretty good work, although it's true that the development of the protagonist can be a bit "emo" at the beginning, it's understandable because of the context/story of the MC, even so his personality develops and improves until he manages to open up to Irina for the first time. The development of the protagonist's power seems perfect to me, neither too slow nor too fast. I like how the author develops the emotions of the MC and the secondary characters, giving them a very pleasant and unforced touch. The power system is not the typical one so that's a plus. The secondary characters, despite not being perfect in development, have their history, traumas, tastes and personalities and we get to know more about them as the chapters go by. It is possible that some people find the beginning a bit tedious, but I totally recommend reading the work, it is much better than most of the works you can currently find on Webnovel. ps: Author, I beg you not to abandon the novel even if some liars and inexperienced people criticize the novel (I recommend you pin my message, it is a very good and realistic opinion).
I like it's story , in starting it was somewhat similar to author's pov but then it was different
Really good start to the novel, very interesting premise. After about 500 chapters it just devolves into a weird romance love triangle story though. The story also has way too much detail in some cases, where half a chapter is a lesson on team formats when it is not very necessary. I’d say the novel could be almost half the amount of chapters with how much extra is added The switching between POV is also annoying, and sometimes overused. Other than that it has good potential. A bit of editing to get rid of some of the unnecessary bits would make it a lot better.
thumbs up for this novel, may it be pacing of the story, the battle and especially the character development(really like the few normal academic life here and there hoping for more haha). Everything is just good, for once mc is not actually a forbidden arts user or something were one wrong move and mc becomes a evil or becomes a demon or something similar, practically every transmigrated to extra novel I read right now is were MC has monologue about who he is or how how mc is not actually who he is or some bullshit reason. Anyway 5 stars for this novel, good luck to the author really like the book and hope for more similar works in the future.[img=update]
i have read up to 330 chapters and reading.. at first it was little bit boring.. but wait.. the special quotes you are giving.. time to time with the development of the story are really great.. i am keeping those in my note for future reference.. Thanks Author for your priceless efforts.. Keep writing man..
I haven't started it yet so can I have some info about about the mc?! 1.Is his main weapon a gun? 2.Is he the type who hides his power all the time? 3.How many in the harem?! 4. and shamelessy, is he handsome?😂😂
Hello brother kindly restart Erotic RPG: I am in the Game world, But My Heroines are Villainesses novel please... We are waiting please consider my opinion you are good novel writer...
Say author, You plagiarize(steal) contents and ideas from other authors don't you? I actually liked the world building but got fed-up with the edgy mc and dropped; to think even the world building was stolen material! I recently started "the author's pov"(that was released 2 years before this one) and I felt de-ja-vu and i am not talking about clinches, the character that transports the mc to his first dungeon in black market in both the novels are exactly same (identical description, same attitude towards colleagues and the mc, even similar dialogue). you only changed the names to tom & jerry from timothy 1&2 and to marcus from edward. ofcourse also making the whole interactions worse. even the chapter names are same. Kudos for the Author, Entrail_JI who even humbly explained that his work was inspired from the novel's extra and there may be similarities in the beginning even though there were not many yet; where as you! You just shamelessly stole the whole chapter, characters and interactions! I don't know, may be even the other settings and characters in other chapters are stolen too where you just copy, degrade the things with your poor story telling and paste it as your own?
It’s a good novel, and everything is written good. I like the romance between Astron and Irena, but the stuff with maya is a little off putting and I honestly just find Sylvie to be a nuisance, and I just want Astron and Irena to just clarify their relationship at this point without unessesary crao with the other girls interfering
fully written by ai (gpt) if you see flowery words as one of the people gave an example of in one of the reviews. then it means it was written by ai. be aware of what u read. some only take help in editing from ai but this story is 3 lines from the author which are then converted to 4 paragraphs that only contain those three lines of actual content followed by filler flowery 🌺🌹 words.
Having not liked the novel until the end of volume 1 I forced myself to read the sequel and frankly I do not regret. The dialogues are much more fluid and pleasant to read since the arc of the vampire the secondary characters have received a very good development (Erina and Sylvie). the pace of the story moves faster with a main character not too broken the only problem that I have mybe the world building can be a little more developed. This is a modification compared to the first review and I thank you for greatly improving the novel
My favourite novel, everything in this novel is perfect. Main characther, who is getting stronger and smarter, he uses his knowledge to get benefits and her isnt scared of butterfly effect and affect and change the plot. He also takes some good girls, i hope he make harem. Real man must have vast heart. The development of the story, the world background, the characters, everyone plays a role in this novel. Every small details has point.
I would say from any generic fantasy isekai I be ever read maybe exclude SS. this has more detailed romance I ever seen. usually an author write a heroine just for the sake to spread leg to MC. no significant development romance. the only thing I didn't like is why the chapter often had repeated paragraph, it's like want to extend word count as high as possible.
One of the best novels I've ever read👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥!
robotic writing sometimes, chapters take too long on meaningless/boring stuff that can be skipped, some chapters just feel like its just an info dump, making it a pain to read. Still, ill give it 5 stars, the slow chapters do build a foundation for when it gets good and it really feels like the world is real, no matter what cheats astron is getting, it doesn't let him blitz through everyone and become the strongest immediately, the effort really is necessary. The author likes to add a lot of psychology stuff which i definitely enjoy, also the irina romance is peak. Seriously though, i do not care about the ecosystem of the hidden dungeon which is the habitat of time-related monsters and how astron is studying it. Skip most of that shi 👹
Apart from the negative comments below, I love this story. I enjoy the interactions between each character. The author doesn't introduce too many characters. The original story isn't a harem, so there's no NTR involving the MC. Irina doesn't even like Ethan, the original protagonist. She likes Victor, but as mentioned in the story, she never ends up with him in the original timeline, even after Julia rejects him. All the original main cast are childhood friends—Ethan, Lucas, Carl, Irina, Julia, Lilia—and they sort of view each other as siblings, so it's a bit odd for them to develop romantic feelings for one another. Even Ethan likes Jane. As others have mentioned, it's a typical weak-to-strong MC story. The MC starts out as a third-rate villain seeking revenge for his sister's death and becomes powerful through a pact with the devil. But thanks to the MC's memories from his life on Earth, he seeks power and revenge in a different way. Honestly, I prefer for the MC to end up with only Irina rather than the interactions between the MC and his senior, Maya, as well as the pure-hearted future saintess, Sylvie. Yeah, the MC has three potential romantic interests. The MC is a bit edgy but also a handsome man who is close his heart to the people around him at start of story. Irina is a strong, determined, and proud girl. They both have one similarity they don't like to obey others easily, which leads to them bickering and fighting. Throughout the story, they start to open up to each other and change each other for the better. Some criticism for the novel. I hope the author also develops the other main cast characters. Honestly, I also feel the story has problem with slow pace, and I think there are parts that could be cut. At the same time, I feel the character development for the MC, Irina, Maya, Sylvie, and Ethan is too fast. After reading almost 700 chapters, I thought it had been 1-2 years at the academy, but it’s only been one semester
For anyone who hates harem and annoying relationships and is looking for a MC with a developed and neutral personality, this is not for you unfortunately, I am saving you from wasting your time in 700 chapters like I wasted it
NOTY NOTY NOTY NOTY NOTY NOTY NOTY NOTY NOTY NOTY NOTY NOTY NOTY NOTY NOTY NOTY NOTY NOTY NOTY NOTY NOTY NOTY NOTY NOTY NOTY NOTY NOTY NOTY NOTY NOTY NOTY NOTY NOTY NOTY NOTY NOTY NOTY NOTY NOTY NOTY NOTY NOTY
Revelar Spoiler The novel has a great world build and the character development is good until chapter 476. unfortunately on that chapter the author chooses to follow the asshole harem protagonist route, contradicting entirely the character he had built. he forgot yo add the harem tag to the novel after that. please add this so not to waste readers time. it is really uncomfortable to like a history and be taken by surprise by something like this without warning. even more in the asshole way it happened like nothing is wrong with this. it makes a normal person with normal morals want to puke. i know the author dont care so this message is a warning to the readers that dont like harem, if you are not that reader, you can read this novel that you ill like it very much. for the author: For the battles with unknown gender, please avoid using "they" to refer to a single person, it makes the battles really confusing and we have to read it again many times to understand that you are talking about just one of them and this destroy the battle dynamics. if you ill follow this advice, i really dont care anymore. good luck with your emotionless harem hobby.
It's good In phantom land arc the demon claws mc from behind but after some next chapter he is fine very intersting i think I don't know why is he keeping secret of strength who knows and heroines always thinks about mc
I've read many transmigrated ml novels and being villian or extra in the story but this is quite good. I love that it is not just focus on the mc however I don't like the romance part (I'm rooting for the girl with first authority because she's the one that always on the side with mc). I also like Irina but her attitude towards mc on thier first meet kinda annoyed me. This kinda reminds me of novel's extra on some parts.
This novel is good, I can’t say it’s the best in the genre, but I can see some unique. But I had to gave up on this novel, because of the harem, I read the story till the kiss with Maya, but after its was over for me, another harem. I have a question for people, why authors always bring up harem, I can’t understand this, this is the most annoying genre, all the point of harem is to make story about female character and mc to save her, and of course girl will fall in love with our mc. It will be repetetive with the difference only with female characters.
It's a great book love the very dark past. it forms a great connection between characters and the reader. I also love the chemistry between the characters that have been portrait
Revelar Spoiler Patience of steel is name of the game for this book. You will want to drop it multiple times but trust me, with every chapter and arc it get better and better. I have written so many hate comments on this book and every time I come back. At this point I would consider myself a fanboy of this book. It has one of the best written side characters and romance out there. I am so used to shallow female leads and side characters that this book was a slap in the face for how good they are written. It’s a very slow story but man the author is so good at writing it . If you approach it with a mentality of taking it slow, you will really appreciate this book. It’s a book that makes me happy inside and that rarely happens with most books.
Hello author Hope u give a reply for it all are asking about if the story is harem or not. If its harem y didn’t u tag it so most of them including me does not have to ask this question. I have read 772 chapters till now but if its romance story y its going the plot line to harem ??? As per maya she is becoming obsessed with astron she is a vampire girl which is very bad for to fight next to mc is their a point for mc to be his side but may be one day if she supress her inner demon she might help him. But what esettla said she does not want her near her brother so one day she has to say it to her brother this. Even mc said in finding dungeon chapter he doesn’t want to play anchor role to anyone. So im asking when he is going to tell her I don’t have any feelings to her??? As per irina and mc their chemistry is good most lovable compared to others characters after 150 chapters I guess in small talk after train chapter mc even told he is so comfortable to talk with irina and in do not push chapter he said I want to be here which met he wants to be with her and even before chapter chamber of emberheart he said I don’t regret the decision but why he is becoming a play boy now he doesn’t want to get attached to anyone at the start now he is acting all like a playboy what’s the point of being a loner for almost 500 chapters. Mc knows she has feelings for him but now all she has done to open his heart now he become playboy kissing behind her back before her date plans what a pathetic way I feel bad for irina she fought with her mother like never before and she kept trust in him and even told her she choose wrong partner for herself and now here she choose astron to herself who he becoming a playboy after his charm increased. Its like he told in broadcast not the lie but not the entire truth he is playing same line here with irina. What happens if she learns truth about him and if she looses trust in him she is main character in game plot how she going to help him in the end very bad plot this. Well saintess is saintess she is just a side character till 770 chapters I don’t in future but i hope she deserve other lead character or some one else. I have read like 5 times most chapters. Is it a harem or a romance novel is he going to end with one fl or 3 people i know its a spoiler that’s the reason u r not replying to most of the comments which mentioned about harrm or not but its already near to 800 chapters only other half is remained as u mentioned 1700 chapters so can u please clarify us 🤞🙏🙏🙏🙏
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Waste of time it's another harem trash where 200 chapter is dedicated to one girl and then you never heard of her again and f you for not adding harem tag and I know you're father is unfaithful to your mother no need to make your character like him
Excellent novel, awesome MC and character development. my only wish is to be more fast pace, seem like there are many chapters could be condensed into a couple of chapters,
The single best novel I’ve read on this platform after Why Should I Stop Being a Villain (dropped). I look forward to a new chapter every day. It’s almost become an essential daily routine. Keep up the good work!
I had to read almost 600 chapters before dropping when the author decided to make a harem out of it. I don't see how this will work, considering how the characters of Irina and Maya were written. Please add the “harem” tag to not mislead people
the story is the typical weak to strong attempt, keyword attempt, because this genre usually tries to add in a sense of realness to it, thus the story either ends being really good or the lowest form of trash possible that makes it unreadable. The mc at the start is weaker than an average normal human on basically all parameters and he doesnt even have mana, yet despite being weaker than you and I he somehow managed to get in a school for super humans... how you may ask? no reason lol, he doesnt even have any sort of connection, money or academic ability, but its not like this author cares about logic, thus this story fails right at chapter 1. Anyways I didnt start reading this expecting a masterpiece so I preserved and turned a blind eye to all the stupidity and cliches right till (spoiler) the classic girl turned into a vampire arc cus vampires are cool and edgy, this arc was just too stupid and braindead to the point that I cant endure this torture anymore -_- in this arc the author went way out of his way to break the already almost non existent logic in this story, from mc letting villains injure him because a demon is seeing through them? although this was not an issue with the other villains who are even ranked higher, but if he didnt get injured the random vampire wouldnt have found his blood on the street to get a power up for by licking the blood that is somehow still fresh and get the power to turn magical girl into a vampire -_- summary: typical trash story that pretends to not be a trash story, so it doesnt offer any sort of enjoyment. And to the author if youre reading this please find another career this is really not it -_-