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Great story, character development is good, hope the author update more regularly.
I have no idea how to rate this fanfiction. The story is all over the place- it is made too complicated for no reason at all. At the start it was fine, but then it quickly went downhill when Author introduced ridiculous stuff like war of omniverses, levels of omniverses, and levels of omnipotence. Romance is also.... kinda messed up. In the simulation, the MC has so many wives, yet he never brings them out to reality, even when he could do that. The only person he brought out was Yue.... For some random reason, I guess? There is also the fact that he cares about a normal girl who only had a past in his memories alone. We are given no development whatsoever, their love for each other exists, and we are only given one flashback to explain that. Also, that same girl was kidnapped to another omniverse by some higher-level existence... for some reason? That whole situation was honestly so forced, that it made no sense all. MC also becomes really dumb at times. He makes stupid decisions, and doesn't even properly utilize his powers. He only relies on his system, and whenever he needs to do some work himself, he gives up because it is 'too much trouble' or 'too tiresome'. The only positive about this fic are the simulations, and the worlds that were chosen for those simulations, as they were fun and interesting.
what da hell author you want me to travel to the goblin slayer world as a helpless village girl without the goblin slayer?!?! that deserves a one star but I'll hold that for now and give it a read 😤
HONEST REVIEW!! Let me say this fic is a decent read if you think Of it as a pass the time book. The mc isn’t as crazy as I thought him to be based on his character profile and turns out to be somewhat decent guy with flaws that work for him. And he stays like that while also growing, Slowly, but growing. CONS: the simulation system somewhat destroys any fun from the worlds he visits but at the same time makes you want to continue reading to see where he changes things. However the biggest problem is that the simulation worlds feels like filler and the mc breezes through some for no reason other than rewards. Another issue is the power system it’s horrendous. While the mc keeps some powers he rarely uses most of them to the point where it feels like he doesn’t have them. Another thing is the Evolution part of skills makes it really confusing to keep up with everything. then when the mc is finally Strong the author introduces the Omniverse War which further complicates things and makes the mc seem exstreamly weak. THE WORST THING FOR ME: the worst thing is the amount of time the mc is in simulation worlds instead of his own. 60-70 chapters in and it feels like he has been in his own world for no more than 1-week and the most he has done is have a basketball game and reunite with his childhood friend. That’s it the rest he is in simulations sometimes doing nothing and getting rewards. OVERALL: I don’t hate it nor like this fic it’s good to pass the time but that’s it
Well the only reason I started reading this is because the Author threatened me but after reading this well I can definitely say it was worth it. Also author plz maintain the updates aside from that this is gold. Definitely good
Came because of author-san's threat, stayed because of the plot. Though there are some grammar mistakes, it isn't enough to deter me from this awesome fanfic. Also minor spoiler ================================================================== Pretty funny how this is an omniverse story and yet the girls on the cover aren't in the fanfic (yet) ((probably))
Best of best fan fic where you can enjoy the journey of mc and it has best elements in it
Only reading this cause I was threatened with the death of my family and being gay :’( jk it’s actually pretty good
hahahahagah... Uf youvare a.man and dont like it. you are G... if you are a woman you get teleported to goblin slayer world with no GS... savage!!!!. i like it hahsha
A very nice topic. More chapters. Come on. More chapters. Thank you for the topic. More chapters
I like it cant wait to see what happens next now im gonn spam emoji so it will go through 👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍
interesting... to see how this story continues, currently I read the only 2 chapters available and I liked them : ) // interesante... ver como es que prosigue esta historia, actualmente me lei los unicos 2 capitulos disponibles y me gustaron : )
It's a really nice story according to me. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Great story, character development is good, hope the author update more regularly.
I have no idea how to rate this fanfiction. The story is all over the place- it is made too complicated for no reason at all. At the start it was fine, but then it quickly went downhill when Author introduced ridiculous stuff like war of omniverses, levels of omniverses, and levels of omnipotence. Romance is also.... kinda messed up. In the simulation, the MC has so many wives, yet he never brings them out to reality, even when he could do that. The only person he brought out was Yue.... For some random reason, I guess? There is also the fact that he cares about a normal girl who only had a past in his memories alone. We are given no development whatsoever, their love for each other exists, and we are only given one flashback to explain that. Also, that same girl was kidnapped to another omniverse by some higher-level existence... for some reason? That whole situation was honestly so forced, that it made no sense all. MC also becomes really dumb at times. He makes stupid decisions, and doesn't even properly utilize his powers. He only relies on his system, and whenever he needs to do some work himself, he gives up because it is 'too much trouble' or 'too tiresome'. The only positive about this fic are the simulations, and the worlds that were chosen for those simulations, as they were fun and interesting.
what da hell author you want me to travel to the goblin slayer world as a helpless village girl without the goblin slayer?!?! that deserves a one star but I'll hold that for now and give it a read 😤
HONEST REVIEW!! Let me say this fic is a decent read if you think Of it as a pass the time book. The mc isn’t as crazy as I thought him to be based on his character profile and turns out to be somewhat decent guy with flaws that work for him. And he stays like that while also growing, Slowly, but growing. CONS: the simulation system somewhat destroys any fun from the worlds he visits but at the same time makes you want to continue reading to see where he changes things. However the biggest problem is that the simulation worlds feels like filler and the mc breezes through some for no reason other than rewards. Another issue is the power system it’s horrendous. While the mc keeps some powers he rarely uses most of them to the point where it feels like he doesn’t have them. Another thing is the Evolution part of skills makes it really confusing to keep up with everything. then when the mc is finally Strong the author introduces the Omniverse War which further complicates things and makes the mc seem exstreamly weak. THE WORST THING FOR ME: the worst thing is the amount of time the mc is in simulation worlds instead of his own. 60-70 chapters in and it feels like he has been in his own world for no more than 1-week and the most he has done is have a basketball game and reunite with his childhood friend. That’s it the rest he is in simulations sometimes doing nothing and getting rewards. OVERALL: I don’t hate it nor like this fic it’s good to pass the time but that’s it
Well the only reason I started reading this is because the Author threatened me but after reading this well I can definitely say it was worth it. Also author plz maintain the updates aside from that this is gold. Definitely good
Came because of author-san's threat, stayed because of the plot. Though there are some grammar mistakes, it isn't enough to deter me from this awesome fanfic. Also minor spoiler ================================================================== Pretty funny how this is an omniverse story and yet the girls on the cover aren't in the fanfic (yet) ((probably))
Best of best fan fic where you can enjoy the journey of mc and it has best elements in it
Only reading this cause I was threatened with the death of my family and being gay :’( jk it’s actually pretty good
hahahahagah... Uf youvare a.man and dont like it. you are G... if you are a woman you get teleported to goblin slayer world with no GS... savage!!!!. i like it hahsha
A very nice topic. More chapters. Come on. More chapters. Thank you for the topic. More chapters
I like it cant wait to see what happens next now im gonn spam emoji so it will go through 👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍
interesting... to see how this story continues, currently I read the only 2 chapters available and I liked them : ) // interesante... ver como es que prosigue esta historia, actualmente me lei los unicos 2 capitulos disponibles y me gustaron : )
It's a really nice story according to me. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
One of the best fanfic I have read recently. It's very engaging.