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I could not say more about this piece of work. You're doing great with this novel. The nature of the main character is very satisfying, he is not crazy about women and even though he doesn't have a system, he uses what he has to deal with the protagonist.Anyway, It's so cool he has Zeus's martial spirit, couldn't wait for more chapter!
That's it, being dropped again by author, the same as author other unfinished novel. I suggest new potential reader to skip wasting your time reading and waiting for updates. This novel like author other novel will never be completed. Author have no persistence in finishing his novel.
Don’t read this if your looking for a real villian by chapter 25 this “villian” keeps getting disrespected and lied to and acts as if it’s nothing don’t waste your time.
Update fast please author i really like this book and the more fast u update the more golden tickets u get thanks :)
First thing First the villain novels this author makes are awesome...but Idk why but he drops the novel at the end of every previous works...the thing is the story progresses too fast and the main character becomes too overpowered within 300 chapters,hence the story stops there...the character making and design are good no doubt...just the stability of chapters are the main problem
I can even write a whole essay regarding how OP the writing quality, charecter development, world development, and the character is overpowered yet balanced ❤ Please continue this story and don't leave it on Hiatus, it has a bright future ahead ❤[img=update][img=recommend]
so, when will be the next update. .. it's been 6 days U know ................ 🥲[img=update]
hey author, who is the female lead?? is it liu Qian or li yue or the beauty in the jade of the mc ??
Please no pokemon harem👃🏻, also would love to see more chapters per update 😋,thanks for the wonderful story
Really good story with a unique concept. I actually enjoyed this so much I didn't even realise I had binged the entire novel to date.
I really enjoyed it, very well written. However, there was one aspect of the plot that slightly puzzled me: the main character, after several initial chapters, does not seem to increase his improvement. I understand that he is strengthening his foundation and gaining strength without increasing his cultivation, but still, to only increase 1-2 secondary levels over 200 chapters seems somewhat implausible, especially considering all the resources he has used during this time. It's a minor detail that doesn't affect the plot, but in my opinion, it stands out a bit. Otherwise, the novel is good. 1. The MC is intelligent and doesn't act stupidly, at least from what I've noticed. 2. The romantic storylines are also believable (there's no instant 'love' like in Chinese novels where characters have s€x and then are suddenly willing to give their lives for each other). 3. The plot develops at a steady pace, with no overly boring moments that make you want to skip ahead. 4. The main character doesn't hesitate to kill his enemies. 5. There's also something akin to a harem here, but it's not really a harem. He has two girls, one of whom he's in a stable relationship with, while he's in a conflict with the second. By the 200th chapter, he reconciles with the second girl, but their relationship status as a 'threesome' has not been explicitly discussed yet; they haven't even had a proper conversation together. In short, I recommend reading it.
I just started reading it and am already in love with the novel ...... just hope that it's not heram 😊
It's truly a masterpiece. I love the character of the hero. It is true that it has some minor errors, but the way it is told makes you forget that
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A very enjoyable novel that you will never tire of reading...... ..... . ........... . ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... .........
at last, no system. getting a bit tired of them. hope there will be no harem too. lover and love rival are fine but harems really put me off.
Was intrigued from the comments but sadly this is a modern cultivation novel big bummer Was intrigued from the comments but sadly this is a modern cultivation novel big bummer
no malogres poniendo waifus pordoquier, porque un harem grande es aburrido, feo. y si no hay harem, entonces habra puras decepciones amorosas???¡
I have honestly never felt the need to write a review for any story as they’ve never captivated me like this one has. It has a few spelling errors but aside from that I give it a 5 out of 5. The protagonist knows when to take an opportunity and has the means and connections to get it done. He takes every piece of knowledge he can get from the original storyline of the novel he read and uses it to his advantage, taking away the opportunities of the original protagonist. The author has done an amazing job at showcasing this and all of the luck the cliche original protagonists get. Normally I would drop a story if a main character wasn’t as cruel as I’d like them to be but once again the author does an amazing job at balancing this out with the transmigrators cunning mind causing me to become addicted to this and continue on my reading.
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So far an all around enjoyable read I hope this continues to get updates definitely something to put on your list
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I really like it. The story and the character are interesting and most of all with a powerful systemless mc . I really like the fact that there are no internal affairs within the family and all are ready to do anything for the mc
I could not say more about this piece of work. You're doing great with this novel. The nature of the main character is very satisfying, he is not crazy about women and even though he doesn't have a system, he uses what he has to deal with the protagonist.Anyway, It's so cool he has Zeus's martial spirit, couldn't wait for more chapter!
That's it, being dropped again by author, the same as author other unfinished novel. I suggest new potential reader to skip wasting your time reading and waiting for updates. This novel like author other novel will never be completed. Author have no persistence in finishing his novel.
Don’t read this if your looking for a real villian by chapter 25 this “villian” keeps getting disrespected and lied to and acts as if it’s nothing don’t waste your time.
Update fast please author i really like this book and the more fast u update the more golden tickets u get thanks :)
First thing First the villain novels this author makes are awesome...but Idk why but he drops the novel at the end of every previous works...the thing is the story progresses too fast and the main character becomes too overpowered within 300 chapters,hence the story stops there...the character making and design are good no doubt...just the stability of chapters are the main problem
I can even write a whole essay regarding how OP the writing quality, charecter development, world development, and the character is overpowered yet balanced ❤ Please continue this story and don't leave it on Hiatus, it has a bright future ahead ❤[img=update][img=recommend]
so, when will be the next update. .. it's been 6 days U know ................ 🥲[img=update]
hey author, who is the female lead?? is it liu Qian or li yue or the beauty in the jade of the mc ??
Please no pokemon harem👃🏻, also would love to see more chapters per update 😋,thanks for the wonderful story
Really good story with a unique concept. I actually enjoyed this so much I didn't even realise I had binged the entire novel to date.
I really enjoyed it, very well written. However, there was one aspect of the plot that slightly puzzled me: the main character, after several initial chapters, does not seem to increase his improvement. I understand that he is strengthening his foundation and gaining strength without increasing his cultivation, but still, to only increase 1-2 secondary levels over 200 chapters seems somewhat implausible, especially considering all the resources he has used during this time. It's a minor detail that doesn't affect the plot, but in my opinion, it stands out a bit. Otherwise, the novel is good. 1. The MC is intelligent and doesn't act stupidly, at least from what I've noticed. 2. The romantic storylines are also believable (there's no instant 'love' like in Chinese novels where characters have s€x and then are suddenly willing to give their lives for each other). 3. The plot develops at a steady pace, with no overly boring moments that make you want to skip ahead. 4. The main character doesn't hesitate to kill his enemies. 5. There's also something akin to a harem here, but it's not really a harem. He has two girls, one of whom he's in a stable relationship with, while he's in a conflict with the second. By the 200th chapter, he reconciles with the second girl, but their relationship status as a 'threesome' has not been explicitly discussed yet; they haven't even had a proper conversation together. In short, I recommend reading it.
I just started reading it and am already in love with the novel ...... just hope that it's not heram 😊
It's truly a masterpiece. I love the character of the hero. It is true that it has some minor errors, but the way it is told makes you forget that
......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... .........
Revelar Spoiler A very enjoyable novel that you will never tire of reading...... ..... . ........... . ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... .........
at last, no system. getting a bit tired of them. hope there will be no harem too. lover and love rival are fine but harems really put me off.
Was intrigued from the comments but sadly this is a modern cultivation novel big bummer Was intrigued from the comments but sadly this is a modern cultivation novel big bummer
no malogres poniendo waifus pordoquier, porque un harem grande es aburrido, feo. y si no hay harem, entonces habra puras decepciones amorosas???¡
I have honestly never felt the need to write a review for any story as they’ve never captivated me like this one has. It has a few spelling errors but aside from that I give it a 5 out of 5. The protagonist knows when to take an opportunity and has the means and connections to get it done. He takes every piece of knowledge he can get from the original storyline of the novel he read and uses it to his advantage, taking away the opportunities of the original protagonist. The author has done an amazing job at showcasing this and all of the luck the cliche original protagonists get. Normally I would drop a story if a main character wasn’t as cruel as I’d like them to be but once again the author does an amazing job at balancing this out with the transmigrators cunning mind causing me to become addicted to this and continue on my reading.
Xaxaax xxaxaxa xxaxaxa xaxaax xxaxaxa xxaxaxa xaxaax xxaxaxa xxaxaxa xaxaax xxaxaxa xxaxaxa xaxaax xxaxaxa xxaxaxa xaxaax xxaxaxa xxaxaxa xaxaax xxaxaxa xxaxaxa
So far an all around enjoyable read I hope this continues to get updates definitely something to put on your list
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I really like it. The story and the character are interesting and most of all with a powerful systemless mc . I really like the fact that there are no internal affairs within the family and all are ready to do anything for the mc