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It's only 4 chapters but I know this fanfic has huge potential, I'm really jealous of your ability to write stories author-san, I hope you can continue this story to the end 🙏🥳
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honesty reading this left me so drained that I can't even form a proper review, the writing and stuff are good I'll give you that, but the characters and the mc especially are just so annoying that it makes the whole thing just meh, literally everything he does from the way he was complaining at the beginning, his thought process, actions, and the way he speaks in general, to his self-righteous nonsense that is as overbearing as the author's other character from danmachi and their similar mentality are just annoying, tbh I can't say more than this without just sounding rude or outright hostile for no reason, so am just gonna stop here and wish you all enjoy this story because i simply couldn't.
Five stars because I enjoyed his previous works! I am sure this one will be good too!
Revelar Spoiler
Though only 3 chapters at the moment I can say that this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍
Gua berharap gak drop shadow of the m yang lebih baik dari segi empat modern by the m yang lebih baik dari segi empat modern by the copyright holder yang lebih baik dari segi empat modern by the copyright holder yang
Great story !!!!! Wish for more chapters. It has a great story line and compared to other mushoku tensei fanfics it covers a when new area , thereby giving us a new refreshing feeling.
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I hope this doesn't end up like the dxd fic from this author with 4 chapters then nothing for months
It's a very good novel my friend, I waiting for more 👍🏻. Please let me do the f***** review. Mother of god, hemp me, finally I swear, Jesus Christ
Out of all 3 of authors works this will be either my favourite or a very close second, I’ll be honest I don’t really like the Danmachi fanfic he has done can’t get past chapter 22 so I don’t know if it gets better but I really like his DxD and this fanfic which is kinda sad since these are just side projects. at the time I’m writing this there’s only 3 chapters so not an awful lot to judge on but the writing quality is good, no blatant grammer, spelling or punctuation mistakes. The future plot of the story looks like it will be enjoyable an the characters are a fresh air from the constant edgy loner tropes. The only thing that could be a problem I. The future is update stability and I also like that the author isn’ doing massive 10k word chapters like his other novels.
As long as the story continues getting updated it has the potential to become the top fanfiction for Mushoku Tensei
100% faith in author. Marry Roxy, she is 5 years older than paul.... and i worry about you burning yourself. University/Collage +danmachi novel is already hard... if you add mushoku tensei AND dxd... you will tire yourself out and the quality of all 3 novels will drop. Personally i prefer you prepare these novels for later and focus on Danmachi.
havent even started the read yet but i already know this will be a wonderful novel from your last works im just waiting for it to simmer and have more chapters to read.
An excellent start. I am looking forward to reading this. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
A very good start, amazing to show all characters and their development. One of the best you can get for Paul's character. Hope for getting regular updates.
It's only 4 chapters but I know this fanfic has huge potential, I'm really jealous of your ability to write stories author-san, I hope you can continue this story to the end 🙏🥳
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honesty reading this left me so drained that I can't even form a proper review, the writing and stuff are good I'll give you that, but the characters and the mc especially are just so annoying that it makes the whole thing just meh, literally everything he does from the way he was complaining at the beginning, his thought process, actions, and the way he speaks in general, to his self-righteous nonsense that is as overbearing as the author's other character from danmachi and their similar mentality are just annoying, tbh I can't say more than this without just sounding rude or outright hostile for no reason, so am just gonna stop here and wish you all enjoy this story because i simply couldn't.
Five stars because I enjoyed his previous works! I am sure this one will be good too!
Revelar Spoiler Though only 3 chapters at the moment I can say that this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍
Gua berharap gak drop shadow of the m yang lebih baik dari segi empat modern by the m yang lebih baik dari segi empat modern by the copyright holder yang lebih baik dari segi empat modern by the copyright holder yang
Great story !!!!! Wish for more chapters. It has a great story line and compared to other mushoku tensei fanfics it covers a when new area , thereby giving us a new refreshing feeling.
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smart llllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll
I hope this doesn't end up like the dxd fic from this author with 4 chapters then nothing for months
It's a very good novel my friend, I waiting for more 👍🏻. Please let me do the f***** review. Mother of god, hemp me, finally I swear, Jesus Christ
Out of all 3 of authors works this will be either my favourite or a very close second, I’ll be honest I don’t really like the Danmachi fanfic he has done can’t get past chapter 22 so I don’t know if it gets better but I really like his DxD and this fanfic which is kinda sad since these are just side projects. at the time I’m writing this there’s only 3 chapters so not an awful lot to judge on but the writing quality is good, no blatant grammer, spelling or punctuation mistakes. The future plot of the story looks like it will be enjoyable an the characters are a fresh air from the constant edgy loner tropes. The only thing that could be a problem I. The future is update stability and I also like that the author isn’ doing massive 10k word chapters like his other novels.
As long as the story continues getting updated it has the potential to become the top fanfiction for Mushoku Tensei
100% faith in author. Marry Roxy, she is 5 years older than paul.... and i worry about you burning yourself. University/Collage +danmachi novel is already hard... if you add mushoku tensei AND dxd... you will tire yourself out and the quality of all 3 novels will drop. Personally i prefer you prepare these novels for later and focus on Danmachi.
havent even started the read yet but i already know this will be a wonderful novel from your last works im just waiting for it to simmer and have more chapters to read.
An excellent start. I am looking forward to reading this. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
A very good start, amazing to show all characters and their development. One of the best you can get for Paul's character. Hope for getting regular updates.