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The sypnosis alone gave me great hope for the story and after reading it I can say my hope wasn’t misplaced. Great job love how the characters act so far, dialogue isn’t dry or robotic either. Can’t wait for more keep up the good work
All around excellent. The MC is not a pushover goody two shoes but also not a total psychopath. The author has solid grammar and is capable of writing believable dialogue. This story is worth following and will 100% head towards the top of the ratings if author keeps a consistent release schedule. Strong reccomend, has plenty of potential but is already enjoyable 10/10
quite liked this book. stopped looking at it for a while so it could build up chapters, I'm guessing that was a bad idea. but still loved the book.
Me encanta!!!! Es una lastima que la autora este constantemente ocupada y no pueda actualizar con frecuencia, Pero, Vale absolutamente la espera
Great story, this Fanfic renewed my love for the DC verse. This story has some of the best writing I've seen in fanfics while also introducing an interesting powerset for the MC
Me encanta la historia y honestamente solo no le doy calificacion perfecta es únicamente por el tiempo de actualización pero por lo demás sigue como hasta ahora autor 👍
Revelar Spoiler
This novel is not for me, so take this review as you will. I normally like to read these kinds of fanfics if the MC is OP, and i thought this one would be one. As his power comes from where EVERY lantern gets thiers. But based on some comments the author made, i see that's not where this is going. It's crazy to me that he has the ability to tap into a vast ocean of unending power only to get a minor boost in strength. This is kinda like just another batman side kick story. Only he's even more emotionless than batman. Without the upside of awesome power. It just feels there is no payoff for him, not having a personality. I dont need a completely unbeatable MC to love an op character. But based on the authors love of batman and some of the AN i can see, he's not gonna get the Green lantern level powers that he should have, maybe till the end of the fanfic. And waiting for payoff on fanfic that i read to blow off steam is not it for me.
great overal book. i love the mc and his relationships with the characters(especially Bruce:))
Well It’s seems I’ve joined at the perfect time got to read all that today. The first arc was amazing can’t wait to see you continue this
I have only been impressed by 2 fanmade webnovels so far, and that is including yours. I’m quite pleased with the story so far, and I think what you’ve done with Ben as a character has been nothing short of excellent. You are actively engaging with your readers making you an even more excellent author. I look forward to seeing your plans for the future. And I’d become a patreon too, if I weren’t broke. But with that said, keep up the good work! Stay say, stay healthy, I wish you nothing but success in your future endeavours. And congratulations on completing your first major arc!
I haven't read any DC fandom like this. The characters and their behaviour are just natural.
Love the story. Kind of slice of life with the ups and downs. Keeping up the high tension and cliffhangers. Hate I have to wait a whole week, but what can you do 🤷🏻♀️
Encore une fic débile ou le MC n'a pas ces souvenir [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
BRAVO one of the best if not the best dc young Justice I have been reading. You be cooking something fierce. Chef’s kiss
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I love this. This fic is a rare gem on this app. No harem, no egoistic MC, no thirst for power, just a (not-so) regular guy trying to survive and protect his family and doing a great job while also being likable. Smart, down to earth, use his brain, OP MC is my jam.
phenomenal story best story ever referring to dc the only thing that gets me confused would be him starting a saga of problems and not talking about them in the previous chapters i believe the most glaring would be what happened to pamela. Is she still in recovery? Will you participate in the story? this is for me the most blatant I don't know there may be others good job amazing man keep it up
I am really impressed with this Fiction, I love the quality of the chapters and the thought you put into it. -Almost no grammatical errors -Constant chapter upload - Background of the world/Story developed appropriately -Development of the characters (The fact that your characters are not passersby who disappear seems great to me) -The best thing so far is the amount of words per chapter.[img=update] PD: I sincerely hope you don't give it up with this fic.[img=recommend] [GOOGLE TRANSLATE]
Amazing story. It takes on a new appr oach when it comes to Young Justice FanFics.
This is the first FanFiction to properly explain Batman's character. I will say that one of the main points of this FanFiction is how the author introduces the characters and explains the characters emotions. The MC's power is unique from what I can see the world background is also good. I will say it again the author's strong point is his character design I really love the way the author present the characters personality
Definelty my favorite story so far on this plat form. It’s just my opinion and I think this story deserves it so far.
Amazing story, very well written; haven't seen a dingle grammatical error, the story progresses slow but in a good way, the MC is very well done and feels like a real person; DC characters personalities match original works perfectly.I really like that you made it so MC forgot all about DC, most stories don't do that and the MC focuses too much on maintaining the plot. Since the MC didn't know much at the start it feels like he's actually learning and progressing.I also like that you arent just sticking to the plot of young justice but instead mixing in a bit of your own. Other stories focus too much on the original material and it gets boring.The word count on these chapters is also crazy, each one of these is easily three times as long as normal chapters for other stories. I think you could tone down the dialogue a little bit but overall its amazing.Honestly the concept and execution is amazing and very well though out.
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I like it so far. The main character is distinct, and there is good knowledge and application of the DC world. The writing is pretty strong and accompanied by a decent word count. All in all, I'm looking forward to this.
I highly recommend this fic, usually I wait to read a few more chapters. In this case the character, story pacing and immersion are really well done. Mc has an interesting backstory that's seamlessly inserted into the bat family. Characters actually feel like their comic counterparts. The story pacing is great and does a good job with world building. The author rightfully in my opinion skimmed over the boring aspects of the protagonist insertion into the DC universe. I really like that there is a healthy focus on character relationships. Mc isn't there to replace Robin and is his own person. I like his strong morals and focus on not hurting those he truly cares about. Overall I give an enthusiastic thumbs up to the author and I'm excited to read more. 👍
The sypnosis alone gave me great hope for the story and after reading it I can say my hope wasn’t misplaced. Great job love how the characters act so far, dialogue isn’t dry or robotic either. Can’t wait for more keep up the good work
All around excellent. The MC is not a pushover goody two shoes but also not a total psychopath. The author has solid grammar and is capable of writing believable dialogue. This story is worth following and will 100% head towards the top of the ratings if author keeps a consistent release schedule. Strong reccomend, has plenty of potential but is already enjoyable 10/10
quite liked this book. stopped looking at it for a while so it could build up chapters, I'm guessing that was a bad idea. but still loved the book.
Me encanta!!!! Es una lastima que la autora este constantemente ocupada y no pueda actualizar con frecuencia, Pero, Vale absolutamente la espera
Great story, this Fanfic renewed my love for the DC verse. This story has some of the best writing I've seen in fanfics while also introducing an interesting powerset for the MC
Me encanta la historia y honestamente solo no le doy calificacion perfecta es únicamente por el tiempo de actualización pero por lo demás sigue como hasta ahora autor 👍
Revelar Spoiler This novel is not for me, so take this review as you will. I normally like to read these kinds of fanfics if the MC is OP, and i thought this one would be one. As his power comes from where EVERY lantern gets thiers. But based on some comments the author made, i see that's not where this is going. It's crazy to me that he has the ability to tap into a vast ocean of unending power only to get a minor boost in strength. This is kinda like just another batman side kick story. Only he's even more emotionless than batman. Without the upside of awesome power. It just feels there is no payoff for him, not having a personality. I dont need a completely unbeatable MC to love an op character. But based on the authors love of batman and some of the AN i can see, he's not gonna get the Green lantern level powers that he should have, maybe till the end of the fanfic. And waiting for payoff on fanfic that i read to blow off steam is not it for me.
great overal book. i love the mc and his relationships with the characters(especially Bruce:))
Well It’s seems I’ve joined at the perfect time got to read all that today. The first arc was amazing can’t wait to see you continue this
I have only been impressed by 2 fanmade webnovels so far, and that is including yours. I’m quite pleased with the story so far, and I think what you’ve done with Ben as a character has been nothing short of excellent. You are actively engaging with your readers making you an even more excellent author. I look forward to seeing your plans for the future. And I’d become a patreon too, if I weren’t broke. But with that said, keep up the good work! Stay say, stay healthy, I wish you nothing but success in your future endeavours. And congratulations on completing your first major arc!
I haven't read any DC fandom like this. The characters and their behaviour are just natural.
Love the story. Kind of slice of life with the ups and downs. Keeping up the high tension and cliffhangers. Hate I have to wait a whole week, but what can you do 🤷🏻♀️
Encore une fic débile ou le MC n'a pas ces souvenir [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
BRAVO one of the best if not the best dc young Justice I have been reading. You be cooking something fierce. Chef’s kiss
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I love this. This fic is a rare gem on this app. No harem, no egoistic MC, no thirst for power, just a (not-so) regular guy trying to survive and protect his family and doing a great job while also being likable. Smart, down to earth, use his brain, OP MC is my jam.
phenomenal story best story ever referring to dc the only thing that gets me confused would be him starting a saga of problems and not talking about them in the previous chapters i believe the most glaring would be what happened to pamela. Is she still in recovery? Will you participate in the story? this is for me the most blatant I don't know there may be others good job amazing man keep it up
I am really impressed with this Fiction, I love the quality of the chapters and the thought you put into it. -Almost no grammatical errors -Constant chapter upload - Background of the world/Story developed appropriately -Development of the characters (The fact that your characters are not passersby who disappear seems great to me) -The best thing so far is the amount of words per chapter.[img=update] PD: I sincerely hope you don't give it up with this fic.[img=recommend] [GOOGLE TRANSLATE]
Amazing story. It takes on a new appr oach when it comes to Young Justice FanFics.
This is the first FanFiction to properly explain Batman's character. I will say that one of the main points of this FanFiction is how the author introduces the characters and explains the characters emotions. The MC's power is unique from what I can see the world background is also good. I will say it again the author's strong point is his character design I really love the way the author present the characters personality
Definelty my favorite story so far on this plat form. It’s just my opinion and I think this story deserves it so far.
Amazing story, very well written; haven't seen a dingle grammatical error, the story progresses slow but in a good way, the MC is very well done and feels like a real person; DC characters personalities match original works perfectly.I really like that you made it so MC forgot all about DC, most stories don't do that and the MC focuses too much on maintaining the plot. Since the MC didn't know much at the start it feels like he's actually learning and progressing.I also like that you arent just sticking to the plot of young justice but instead mixing in a bit of your own. Other stories focus too much on the original material and it gets boring.The word count on these chapters is also crazy, each one of these is easily three times as long as normal chapters for other stories. I think you could tone down the dialogue a little bit but overall its amazing.Honestly the concept and execution is amazing and very well though out.
Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good.
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I like it so far. The main character is distinct, and there is good knowledge and application of the DC world. The writing is pretty strong and accompanied by a decent word count. All in all, I'm looking forward to this.
I highly recommend this fic, usually I wait to read a few more chapters. In this case the character, story pacing and immersion are really well done. Mc has an interesting backstory that's seamlessly inserted into the bat family. Characters actually feel like their comic counterparts. The story pacing is great and does a good job with world building. The author rightfully in my opinion skimmed over the boring aspects of the protagonist insertion into the DC universe. I really like that there is a healthy focus on character relationships. Mc isn't there to replace Robin and is his own person. I like his strong morals and focus on not hurting those he truly cares about. Overall I give an enthusiastic thumbs up to the author and I'm excited to read more. 👍