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- Qualidade de Escrita
- Estabilidade das atualizações
- Desenvolvimento de Histórias
- Design de Personagens
- Antecedentes do mundo
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I like how the story is progressing but I would love to know more details about the main female character.
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I like how descriptive you are although each paragraphs felt so long. It has a good pacing just enough to my liking. It's not that good but not bad either. I think you can improve on this part later on. As for the updating stability, I dunno what to say since it only has 6 chapters so far. I should make another review when you reach 20 chapters or so. As for the world building, can't say anything about that yet except that the author is doing a good job so far.
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I like how the story is progressing but I would love to know more details about the main female character.
I like how descriptive you are although each paragraphs felt so long. It has a good pacing just enough to my liking. It's not that good but not bad either. I think you can improve on this part later on. As for the updating stability, I dunno what to say since it only has 6 chapters so far. I should make another review when you reach 20 chapters or so. As for the world building, can't say anything about that yet except that the author is doing a good job so far.