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Sinopse
Name : Hatake Kakashi
Affiliation: Konoha missing-nin
Apparence: silver hair,black eyes, always wearing a black mask covering half his face, no clan markings
Abilities: Lighting Affinity, White Chakra Sabre, Chunnin Level Skills guarantee, Summons dogs or maybe wolfs,still unsure
Family : Konoha Whte Fang, Hatake Sakumo
Bounty : 5,000 yen. Dead. 10,000 yen. Alive. Growing.
Titles : Konoha Newest Prodigy
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Chapter 12: Chapter 12 1 years ago 
Your story has potential but it's unreadable due to your poor writing. Get yourself someone who could proofread or edit for you and for sure this story will be a great hit. Hope you take my review as a building criticism rather than a malicious one. Good luck with your future and keep doing you.