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Really fix the original story and the added parts feels right with the original world system. Please don't drop and thanks for the great work.
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I paid for the new chapters and I still can't read them. How do I grant access to these new chapters of this story?
Author did you dropped this novel? or are you going to start writing this novel soon?
Thank you for remaking this story with so much potential! The BP system was great along with the financial convenience. choices became more dynamic and with different paths. I'm looking forward to the arc where he meets the elf count. In the original story, I couldn't stand the mayonnaise recipes lol It was tiring. But his harem is incredible and has great possibilities.
Are there more chapters anywhere? I'm liking your version and would like to continue reading it.
please continue and hopefully it can be updated soon too, hopefully it can be continued soon and this is also one of the best isekai meikyuu fanfics I have ever read
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Una muy buena adaptación del original. Que no caiga. Está variación del original es mucho mejor y más entretenido, espero ver los trabajos auxiliares de las wuaifus.
Well... it would seem that author.meet truck-kun. It was really good while it lasted. Author uploaded daily and was happily talking about the future plans. Thst he was going to upload the next chapter the day after.... then poof. He went missing. I hope its just life being hard. He lost his pc or something and not thar he had an accident
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It's excellent, I love it. There were many things that I didn't like about Slave Harem, but I stayed because the world building, waifus and the system were interesting, the mc not really. Here they managed to solve that problem in addition to giving them more advantages without being too OP to solve everything super easily. But what I like the most is the construction of characters, literally when Roxxane or Sherry speak I can feel as if they were the real ones, something that in my opinion is very difficult to do in a fanfic, even more so when you have to adapt them according to your actions and future wishes without changing their personalities (because otherwise they would not be themselves)
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Una Novela bastante entretenida que le recomiendo leer a cualquiera, incluso a aquellos que no conocen la obra original. El Personaje principal es bastante agradable.
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is he able impregnate them as far I know human can't impregnate demi- human when I read the manga I stop reading the manga after he purchased the dwarf
Bagus lanjut kan, seri lebih cepat di rilis......................................... Jangan sampai di tinggal di tengah jalan, semoga bisa terus lanjut sampai seri BAB.
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Really fix the original story and the added parts feels right with the original world system. Please don't drop and thanks for the great work.
More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
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I paid for the new chapters and I still can't read them. How do I grant access to these new chapters of this story?
Author did you dropped this novel? or are you going to start writing this novel soon?
Thank you for remaking this story with so much potential! The BP system was great along with the financial convenience. choices became more dynamic and with different paths. I'm looking forward to the arc where he meets the elf count. In the original story, I couldn't stand the mayonnaise recipes lol It was tiring. But his harem is incredible and has great possibilities.
Are there more chapters anywhere? I'm liking your version and would like to continue reading it.
please continue and hopefully it can be updated soon too, hopefully it can be continued soon and this is also one of the best isekai meikyuu fanfics I have ever read
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Una muy buena adaptación del original. Que no caiga. Está variación del original es mucho mejor y más entretenido, espero ver los trabajos auxiliares de las wuaifus.
Well... it would seem that author.meet truck-kun. It was really good while it lasted. Author uploaded daily and was happily talking about the future plans. Thst he was going to upload the next chapter the day after.... then poof. He went missing. I hope its just life being hard. He lost his pc or something and not thar he had an accident
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It's excellent, I love it. There were many things that I didn't like about Slave Harem, but I stayed because the world building, waifus and the system were interesting, the mc not really. Here they managed to solve that problem in addition to giving them more advantages without being too OP to solve everything super easily. But what I like the most is the construction of characters, literally when Roxxane or Sherry speak I can feel as if they were the real ones, something that in my opinion is very difficult to do in a fanfic, even more so when you have to adapt them according to your actions and future wishes without changing their personalities (because otherwise they would not be themselves)
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Una Novela bastante entretenida que le recomiendo leer a cualquiera, incluso a aquellos que no conocen la obra original. El Personaje principal es bastante agradable.
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Revelar Spoiler is he able impregnate them as far I know human can't impregnate demi- human when I read the manga I stop reading the manga after he purchased the dwarf
Bagus lanjut kan, seri lebih cepat di rilis......................................... Jangan sampai di tinggal di tengah jalan, semoga bisa terus lanjut sampai seri BAB.
O amor é o espaço e o tempo tornados sensíveis ao coração.[img=atualizar][img=atualizar][img=atualizar][img=atualizar][img=atualizar][img=atualizar][img=atualizar][img=atualizar]
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