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weird dude hated this so much he gave 4 one star reviews, so ima give u 5 stars, can u give me name of ff u are inspired by?
I enjoyed the novel a lot and i never seen a snake redemption like this before. Don’t know why people hate on it so much as it is interesting to read.
Chinese mc. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Garbage knock off from a terrible OP fic that somehow manages to create something even worse. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
one of the best hp fanfic I ever read. storyline is very good if you sympathies some of characters.
Wuxia [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Chinese stranger. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Destroy his own existence , mc choose to cheat, because he is fan. İf you think about it, marauder time memories given by snape during occulememcy traning with harry, but this guy protect his mind with voldemort, how did lose to harry, he probably wanted destroy image of his father name in haary heart. Snape obsest with lily. Creepy. MC basically imperio People because he is creepy fan based on limited information about hp world
Asian story. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Idea stolen from low quality chinese fanfics (One Piece). Author still managed to make it even more cringe. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap]
It's not a novel it's a draft written for an MTL-style novel makes no sense it is causing a headache for me just going through the first few chapters. A great idea but a childish enactment.
Thank you for continuing to write.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Okay, it shows that you have no experience in this type of plot. Honestly writing these types of stories is more difficult What to write others, I like the idea of changing Snape's destiny You could have created a different simulation, giving it a better destination Even if it is a lie, people will never know, they will think that this is the future Spice up the story
please keep writing........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Characters: [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
i love this fanfiction because i also don't like the ending Snape get in original and it to sad and this fanfiction let Snape it deserving happy ending .. in original Snape is driven to darkness form his childhood to his bully in school and finally he loses his only friend who he also love to his bully which made him turn to dark lord because he lost everything and had no one to support and guide.. that why I will support and follow the story but i hope author does not drop the story in middle ... it very annoying when you find something to your liking and it end in middle .. so hope author to complete the story and love story very much..❤️.
didn't really expect much bit it turned humerus. it reads like a poorly translated Chinese novel or someone that has no idea how to write. give it a shot though it's total chaos.
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the idea is interesting, but the implementation is very bad the idea is interesting, but the implementation is very bad the idea is interesting, but the implementation is very bad the idea is interesting, but the implementation is very bad
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weird dude hated this so much he gave 4 one star reviews, so ima give u 5 stars, can u give me name of ff u are inspired by?
I enjoyed the novel a lot and i never seen a snake redemption like this before. Don’t know why people hate on it so much as it is interesting to read.
Chinese mc. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Garbage knock off from a terrible OP fic that somehow manages to create something even worse. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
one of the best hp fanfic I ever read. storyline is very good if you sympathies some of characters.
Wuxia [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Chinese stranger. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Destroy his own existence , mc choose to cheat, because he is fan. İf you think about it, marauder time memories given by snape during occulememcy traning with harry, but this guy protect his mind with voldemort, how did lose to harry, he probably wanted destroy image of his father name in haary heart. Snape obsest with lily. Creepy. MC basically imperio People because he is creepy fan based on limited information about hp world
Asian story. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Idea stolen from low quality chinese fanfics (One Piece). Author still managed to make it even more cringe. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap]
It's not a novel it's a draft written for an MTL-style novel makes no sense it is causing a headache for me just going through the first few chapters. A great idea but a childish enactment.
Thank you for continuing to write.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Okay, it shows that you have no experience in this type of plot. Honestly writing these types of stories is more difficult What to write others, I like the idea of changing Snape's destiny You could have created a different simulation, giving it a better destination Even if it is a lie, people will never know, they will think that this is the future Spice up the story
please keep writing........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Characters: [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
i love this fanfiction because i also don't like the ending Snape get in original and it to sad and this fanfiction let Snape it deserving happy ending .. in original Snape is driven to darkness form his childhood to his bully in school and finally he loses his only friend who he also love to his bully which made him turn to dark lord because he lost everything and had no one to support and guide.. that why I will support and follow the story but i hope author does not drop the story in middle ... it very annoying when you find something to your liking and it end in middle .. so hope author to complete the story and love story very much..❤️.
didn't really expect much bit it turned humerus. it reads like a poorly translated Chinese novel or someone that has no idea how to write. give it a shot though it's total chaos.
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the idea is interesting, but the implementation is very bad the idea is interesting, but the implementation is very bad the idea is interesting, but the implementation is very bad the idea is interesting, but the implementation is very bad
Super lento la subida de capitulos 🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮😡😡😡😡😡🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮😡😡😡😡😡🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮😡😡😡😡😡🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮😡😡😡😡😡🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮😡😡😡😡😡🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮
Please just add more chapters Just anything I really enjoy it