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Think twice before you start reading the author do you even know if your character has any character every time he appears he doesn't have any major emotions he just cries for his dying friends and besides you can't see any anger or anything else besides tell us maybe why not even reading a physique scroll will magically remember everything that was in the scroll and how to cultivate and he can't use the powerful skills he had when he was a hero can you tell us?? Because you don't want to explain anything and how everyone has to guess for themselves??
This is an honest review. Writing Quality has been pretty stable. Iv've caught a few mistakes here and there, but nothing too baffling. Updates are also stable, with a few days absent here and there as well. Story is as of now a little boring in the naruto world. But I really like the idea of MC being immortal. He meets legit everyone before canon then leaves. Though I'm a bit disappointed because the author doesn't show what type of mark he left on the people he left behind. There aren't any other POVs. If the author fixes this issue, I'd say 5 stars in story development. Not only that Mc is fairly Op in the beginning but rn he is off the charts. I wasn't to see him in lower-level worlds though so it's also a bit disappointing. There are a lot of Chinese references, but it's manageable. Characters don't have much to them, they just meet the Mc and then die of old age. It doesn't show how they feel, which is this story's weakness, really. Mc looks fire, bro. World background keeps changing, but it's also fire due to the fact Mc appears there since the beginning of the beginning. Though it's sad it doesn't show his effect on the main characters of the verse. IF ONLY WE HAD MORE POV's OF THE POEPLE MC HAS MET. I'M TALKIN TO YOU AUTHOR. Overall, it's pretty good rn but I hope it gets better.
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Not worth much unless you want the authors homophic slurs and hate speech shoved down your throat all the time starting from the 5th chapter. I cant recommend this to any well-adjusted person.
irrelevant story, I'm not gay but I hate demonstrations of hatred like the homophobia that the author condones and there's no need irrelevant story, I'm not gay but I hate demonstrations of hatred like the homophobia that the author condones and there's no need
Although the author is "homophobic" (does not affect the story) was only mentioned in 1 chapter, you can read calmly 👍📖____________________
Interesting story, as expected of fellow countryman.. please, continue your noble works ✨
Unnecessarily homophobic, not too sure why that chapter was even necessary. I guess the author may be closeted, and self-hating. But who knows...
I‘m just giving 1* for the obvious homophobia but even when u skim over that part the novel isnt that good. There are often grammer or logic errors like a man stabbing a child in the stomach which you would have to lean down for. Him helping a girl get sold into slavery being moral and also the part where he says that a day and a night equate to 24hours, 1440 minutes and 86400 seconds are errors that could be fixed by prof reading at least once or writing the novel in your first language. Then theres also this weird American hate in the first chapter idk why seems a bit unnecessary tbh i dont like joe bidon but saying a whole country is flawed is pretty extreme. Over all if u are like hohophobe or can gloss over chapter 8 and the obvious writing mistakes go for it.
Fanfic ini bagus sekali, walaupun kadang ada juga yg bikin geleng kepala wkwkwk, semoga novel ff ini tidak drop di tengah jalan👍👍👍🎉🔥👏👌💪 SEMANGAT BANG
just advice lad. youre better ignore those reader who tell you "homophobic". because these people actually gay or live in gay home. +++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Revelar Spoiler
Okay let's get this out of the way the writing quality is bad but if you can Overlook that it's pretty good the update schedule is pretty good the store is pretty good the main character is really good overall if you can ignore the bad writing quality its pretty good
try it.. it's really good and well thought and written...yes there was chapter about blowing up city of lgdtv community but you can just skip it and there isn't any hate after that chapter....like some authors that push there believes **cough** LGBTV authors **cough** on other and think only they know the best .. in conclusion it good fic just give it a try you will like it
I am feeling disappointed throughout this fanfiction, bored even. The protagonist begins to feel hollow, his motivations are decent but there's something here that makes me feel down. Not the hatred towards the rainbow community, really. Anyways I will still read this is I had the time. ✌️😉
just to bother everyone who is giving this story one star and their only reason is homophobic
I can't believe that Brandon(MC) thinks that the idaten race is superior to the Sayian race, I mean he's trained to the death quite literally for 200years and he's barely Kaguya level, if the Sayian with the lowest potential in dragon ball were to train half as hard as he did that Sayian would be at a low ball hundreds of billions of times stronger than Brandon(MC) and while it is true that Goku and vegeta are mortals with a life span of around 150-200 years they can easily over come that by entering any of there god forms.
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I quite like this Story. It needs more flavours in it, hope Author considers adding Comedy elements in it. If can, please add more compelling characters.
I’ll say this first dropped this at chapter 10 cause I didn’t look and see it was multiple worlds I don’t like that but it gets a one star cause the author is unnecessarily homophobic instead just not including it he goes out of his way to kill a city full of them and call them worse than animals(humans are animals) and while I’m not gay I don’t want to read a story that express extreme hate towards a group of people
want a homophobic story? this one has, want a boring MC? this one has, the story is about an MC that goes from world to world and has no development with anyone, besides adding transmigators, what acte happened after the MC left your world? what happened after the MC left MC Dr Stone? what happened after he left the school world there is no kkkkkk, what happened after hagashi died? Did Takashi stay with king even after seeing her having a relationship with someone else? the MC left saeko who leaves saeko out of the harem? shizuka? why you went to that world? it makes no sense, honestly bad work in my head
It's very entertaining. I liked his adventures, the recent naruto arc could be better though. Didn't like how he got sealed but I hope at least this will lead to character development for Mc. Overall a nice read and I recommend trying it out. :)
Revelar Spoiler
The story is amazing and the main character is gigachad. The way the plot progresses is fantastic you will feel immersed when reading you wont be disappointed by reading this amazing.
Think twice before you start reading the author do you even know if your character has any character every time he appears he doesn't have any major emotions he just cries for his dying friends and besides you can't see any anger or anything else besides tell us maybe why not even reading a physique scroll will magically remember everything that was in the scroll and how to cultivate and he can't use the powerful skills he had when he was a hero can you tell us?? Because you don't want to explain anything and how everyone has to guess for themselves??
This is an honest review. Writing Quality has been pretty stable. Iv've caught a few mistakes here and there, but nothing too baffling. Updates are also stable, with a few days absent here and there as well. Story is as of now a little boring in the naruto world. But I really like the idea of MC being immortal. He meets legit everyone before canon then leaves. Though I'm a bit disappointed because the author doesn't show what type of mark he left on the people he left behind. There aren't any other POVs. If the author fixes this issue, I'd say 5 stars in story development. Not only that Mc is fairly Op in the beginning but rn he is off the charts. I wasn't to see him in lower-level worlds though so it's also a bit disappointing. There are a lot of Chinese references, but it's manageable. Characters don't have much to them, they just meet the Mc and then die of old age. It doesn't show how they feel, which is this story's weakness, really. Mc looks fire, bro. World background keeps changing, but it's also fire due to the fact Mc appears there since the beginning of the beginning. Though it's sad it doesn't show his effect on the main characters of the verse. IF ONLY WE HAD MORE POV's OF THE POEPLE MC HAS MET. I'M TALKIN TO YOU AUTHOR. Overall, it's pretty good rn but I hope it gets better.
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Not worth much unless you want the authors homophic slurs and hate speech shoved down your throat all the time starting from the 5th chapter. I cant recommend this to any well-adjusted person.
irrelevant story, I'm not gay but I hate demonstrations of hatred like the homophobia that the author condones and there's no need irrelevant story, I'm not gay but I hate demonstrations of hatred like the homophobia that the author condones and there's no need
Although the author is "homophobic" (does not affect the story) was only mentioned in 1 chapter, you can read calmly 👍📖____________________
Interesting story, as expected of fellow countryman.. please, continue your noble works ✨
Unnecessarily homophobic, not too sure why that chapter was even necessary. I guess the author may be closeted, and self-hating. But who knows...
I‘m just giving 1* for the obvious homophobia but even when u skim over that part the novel isnt that good. There are often grammer or logic errors like a man stabbing a child in the stomach which you would have to lean down for. Him helping a girl get sold into slavery being moral and also the part where he says that a day and a night equate to 24hours, 1440 minutes and 86400 seconds are errors that could be fixed by prof reading at least once or writing the novel in your first language. Then theres also this weird American hate in the first chapter idk why seems a bit unnecessary tbh i dont like joe bidon but saying a whole country is flawed is pretty extreme. Over all if u are like hohophobe or can gloss over chapter 8 and the obvious writing mistakes go for it.
Fanfic ini bagus sekali, walaupun kadang ada juga yg bikin geleng kepala wkwkwk, semoga novel ff ini tidak drop di tengah jalan👍👍👍🎉🔥👏👌💪 SEMANGAT BANG
just advice lad. youre better ignore those reader who tell you "homophobic". because these people actually gay or live in gay home. +++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Revelar Spoiler Okay let's get this out of the way the writing quality is bad but if you can Overlook that it's pretty good the update schedule is pretty good the store is pretty good the main character is really good overall if you can ignore the bad writing quality its pretty good
try it.. it's really good and well thought and written...yes there was chapter about blowing up city of lgdtv community but you can just skip it and there isn't any hate after that chapter....like some authors that push there believes **cough** LGBTV authors **cough** on other and think only they know the best .. in conclusion it good fic just give it a try you will like it
I am feeling disappointed throughout this fanfiction, bored even. The protagonist begins to feel hollow, his motivations are decent but there's something here that makes me feel down. Not the hatred towards the rainbow community, really. Anyways I will still read this is I had the time. ✌️😉
just to bother everyone who is giving this story one star and their only reason is homophobic
I can't believe that Brandon(MC) thinks that the idaten race is superior to the Sayian race, I mean he's trained to the death quite literally for 200years and he's barely Kaguya level, if the Sayian with the lowest potential in dragon ball were to train half as hard as he did that Sayian would be at a low ball hundreds of billions of times stronger than Brandon(MC) and while it is true that Goku and vegeta are mortals with a life span of around 150-200 years they can easily over come that by entering any of there god forms.
Perfect and too good Perfect and too good Perfect and too good Perfect and too good Perfect and too good Perfect and too good Perfect and too good Perfect and too good Perfect and too good Perfect and too good Perfect and too good Perfect and too good Perfect and too good Perfect and too good Perfect and too good Perfect and too good Perfect and too good Perfect and too good
I quite like this Story. It needs more flavours in it, hope Author considers adding Comedy elements in it. If can, please add more compelling characters.
I’ll say this first dropped this at chapter 10 cause I didn’t look and see it was multiple worlds I don’t like that but it gets a one star cause the author is unnecessarily homophobic instead just not including it he goes out of his way to kill a city full of them and call them worse than animals(humans are animals) and while I’m not gay I don’t want to read a story that express extreme hate towards a group of people
want a homophobic story? this one has, want a boring MC? this one has, the story is about an MC that goes from world to world and has no development with anyone, besides adding transmigators, what acte happened after the MC left your world? what happened after the MC left MC Dr Stone? what happened after he left the school world there is no kkkkkk, what happened after hagashi died? Did Takashi stay with king even after seeing her having a relationship with someone else? the MC left saeko who leaves saeko out of the harem? shizuka? why you went to that world? it makes no sense, honestly bad work in my head
It's very entertaining. I liked his adventures, the recent naruto arc could be better though. Didn't like how he got sealed but I hope at least this will lead to character development for Mc. Overall a nice read and I recommend trying it out. :)
Revelar Spoiler
The story is amazing and the main character is gigachad. The way the plot progresses is fantastic you will feel immersed when reading you wont be disappointed by reading this amazing.