Return Of The Dark Angel

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1st_Manga_KING

Hey all, author here. Before you continue, here are some things you need to know about me, and my love for writing. 1] I am an author of many books. Although I haven't finished them, I promise that I will give them a proper ending. Will never drop them. 2] This novel will have at least 2000 chapters, so the start may feel a bit slow or info dumped, do bear it till the end! I promise you, it will be a heck of a journey. 3] I am improving daily, so if it ain't perfect now, I will try to make it better tomorrow. Will not leave it in a disappointment. 4] I am not writing this just for money. It's for my enjoyment as well. I am frustrated like you all, want to escape into fantasy. So, this is my way of doing it. 5] Also, this book may have some errors, so do point them out. I will try my level best to rectify them. 6] Lastly, let's all have a smile on our faces and read the book, enjoy the day to hope for a better future. Good Luck!

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Magecrafter

Author never disappoints. His name says it all. This guy is KING, especially with the way he tells his stories. I can promise you all an amazing time with Zain. I can't wait till he has his revenge on those people and becomes ridiculously OP. Might even kill god or something. PS: A lot of people are just wicked in this book. Lol. More people for MC to beat. Kekeke

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Vimbai_Murindagomo

I take my hat off to you, author. You really are a king of Manga. The plot is amazing with striking similarities to the biblical tower of babel, which humans at one time attempted to build to heaven. Here is where you give it a twist all of your own by throwing in ogres, goblins and vampires in the mix, divorcing it completely from biblical account. Though I must admit feeling a bit uncomfortable, as a Christian with the almost relatable similarity between the dark angel and Lucifer, as he was known when he was cast out of heaven. Apart from that the book is fast paced with an excellent command of language. Though you made a few errors in chapter 1 the first instance I came across being more an issue of omission, where you describe that when Alisha shouted she, 'extended his life by a few'. You just left off at few, you could have said, '...extended his life by a few breaths...' I suggest you proof read your work to check for anomalies before publishing. Otherwise this is excellent work. Well Manga King.

LV 12

GREAT

I really loved my first review but welps, WN censored it lol. Clearly, the theme of this novel is revenge and just from the first chapter, I'm loving this. The MC's curse at his enemies and the emotions portrayed behind it captivated me the most. If what I've read is anything to go by, this is going to be a masterpiece, I definitely recommend it.

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NecroFan

Inconsistent. The main character is allegedly 200 years old yet still acts like a complete child. Afraid of a common school bully and an emotional wreck. You would think being executed would make him less of a coward but the MC is just a big baby. He states how he doesn’t want to cause problems then goes on to cause them anyways. The Authour wants to make him feel smart and scheming but he just feels like an idiot to me. The whole world is against him for some reason. Its so forced I can’t bare to read past it. A teacher wasted her time to upset the Mc which makes no sense. The whole book up to where I read is just “poor me!” And a character named Riny? (Might be wrong) is also too emotional. Who hired someone like her? She has the emotional inteligence of a 7 year old school girl. Lots of potential but early chapters need a re write and Authour needs to make up his mind about wether Zain is brains or brawn.

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SPBasilio

This novel by 1st_Manga_King, is quite intriguing. I will recommend this novel to my fantasy loving friends. So sit back, and enjoy yourselves while reading this novel as you escape reality and into the authors deepest mind. I throughly enjoyed the novel, and so I hope you too enjoy it. Will be waiting for more chapters! [img=update][img=recommend]

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Madara_Uchiha_090

Well, what should I say, I come here to review this based on a fantastic dark sypnosis my favourite genre: revenge+ no harem+ no romance+ anti hero. But I just hoped in the future mc will not become simp.(I just hope what can I do other than that) I think just a suggestion though introduce some female lead and then let mc use them as pawns like they where they fool other climbers somewhat like (regression instructional manual). Well, now let's wait for this story to unfold. Though I will just be able to read only free chapters in the future.😑😑😑👾

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Okojus

Now that I have read all the currently released chapters I can give the series a proper review. The spellings and grammar of the author is very good with no visible flaws making for a pleasant reading experience. Th story is also very good and gets you immersed in its world from chapter 1 also its a revenge story and we all love that so no complains in that department anyway's for anyone hesistant to reading it try reading atleast the first 5 chapters before judging it

This story have a great start chapter. It's looks really interesting!!

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MrXdeLeYwin

Has a lot of potential and so far very interesting, Through i hope author will not disappoint me 👌🙃

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Grand_Void_Daoist

Interesting premise of a Dark Angel being used. I can't help but want to read more and see how the story progresses. The grammar quality is good and the characters seem fleshed out as well.

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mobisa

The story is well-written and the scenes unfold naturally. Got immersed from the start. Best reading experience thus far. I am looking forward to more chapters.

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Fool_That_lampoons

Down 9 chapters. Top good book. waiting for MOAR POWAAA. MOAR CHAPTAAAA

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Piggy

its good but the mc holds back, its infuriating. honestly surprised he didnt massacre the suzo family after what they did to his family........

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Nice_Annoying

Well, I just read the first chapter, and WOW! There are a lot of thrilling moments. I liked how you described the characters' feelings, especially the dark angel's feelings in his last moments. What an interesting beginning!

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Druid_Eleanoor

A very good and intriguing start. What appeals to me is the development and the hooks, they are simply electric. I think I love it already. Please author, I would appreciate if you updated more chapters daily.

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Blessing_O

I am giving five stars to this book. The first and second chapters got me hooked and loving the story. The grammar is well-used and written, this is a novel that I would recommend. I love Zain's/ Dark Angel's urge for revenge it is well deserving for the injustice that he went through. Thanks, author, for a good story to cure my boredom.

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NPC555

A very good novel, if you are a fan of fantasy novels and magic worlds, this novel is what you are looking for, I recommend it.

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HaoShu

Another story by manga king, the start of the first chap is great and knowing the author, i know that he will surely keep things remain interesting on a long run![img=recommend]

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PatrickRio

Good read. dark, but good plot. Waiting for more fights.