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Escreva uma avaliaçãolove this book it nice and we'll writing I will love to read more of it update me when you start writing more👍👍
Wow, an amazing book nonetheless! I am hooked on the first chapter. I would like to binge-read it later on......with a captivating story, I am sure it will be a success! Kudos! Looking forward in the future!
I love the cover, the idea is interesting, and the writing is neat and easy to read. But somehow it seems like the story is less interesting maybe because, in the early chapters, it tells too many general things that don't seem right to be explained in detail. it makes readers reluctant to see the next chapter. My suggestion is maybe you can add a hook in the early chapters so that readers are more interested in reading it. Keep up the good work author.
Love the plot, it's amazing. The structure and improvement is good too. The writing is lovely, simple to comprehend.It's perfect.
Wow! What a fire book, the plots are well-written and it has lots of potentials. I can't wiat for more chapters.
the writing quality and grammar are serious turn offs. i am really interested in the story but being constantly knocked out of the flow while reading from bad grammar is jarring.
love this book it nice and we'll writing I will love to read more of it update me when you start writing more👍👍
Wow, an amazing book nonetheless! I am hooked on the first chapter. I would like to binge-read it later on......with a captivating story, I am sure it will be a success! Kudos! Looking forward in the future!
I love the cover, the idea is interesting, and the writing is neat and easy to read. But somehow it seems like the story is less interesting maybe because, in the early chapters, it tells too many general things that don't seem right to be explained in detail. it makes readers reluctant to see the next chapter. My suggestion is maybe you can add a hook in the early chapters so that readers are more interested in reading it. Keep up the good work author.
Love the plot, it's amazing. The structure and improvement is good too. The writing is lovely, simple to comprehend.It's perfect.
Wow! What a fire book, the plots are well-written and it has lots of potentials. I can't wiat for more chapters.
the writing quality and grammar are serious turn offs. i am really interested in the story but being constantly knocked out of the flow while reading from bad grammar is jarring.