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Please continue, it's very good. I want to see the reaction of the originals when he goes to see them because let's be honest the originals are very arrogant.. PLEASE CONTINUE
:)............................................. :) Noice Good stuff Interesting............... ......... .............................. .... ... ... ... .. ..... .....
The story is good but include backgrounds talks of non mc character about mc , and instead of including originals ,you could include whole Vampire diaries series thus making it more interesting
Is everything okay with you, AmouxCreationsX? I wanted to know if you're going to continue the story. I'm looking for a Twilight story, but all the ones I find either aren't the theme I like, or they're the theme I like but only have 5 chapters and haven't been updated anymore. Could you please respond
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I see the comments of the first chapter and I agree with his/her comments about Tokyo ghoul and I have to agree its odd that Tokyo ghoul is apart of the story it doesn't really fit in the theme of mythical story I feel odd about it juts as he/her say just a suggestion take aut the Tokyo ghoul part and replace it with teen wolf so the theme is the same just a suggestion it's up to you ❤️❤️❤️
Please continue, it's very good. I want to see the reaction of the originals when he goes to see them because let's be honest the originals are very arrogant.. PLEASE CONTINUE
:)............................................. :) Noice Good stuff Interesting............... ......... .............................. .... ... ... ... .. ..... .....
The story is good but include backgrounds talks of non mc character about mc , and instead of including originals ,you could include whole Vampire diaries series thus making it more interesting
Is everything okay with you, AmouxCreationsX? I wanted to know if you're going to continue the story. I'm looking for a Twilight story, but all the ones I find either aren't the theme I like, or they're the theme I like but only have 5 chapters and haven't been updated anymore. Could you please respond
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I see the comments of the first chapter and I agree with his/her comments about Tokyo ghoul and I have to agree its odd that Tokyo ghoul is apart of the story it doesn't really fit in the theme of mythical story I feel odd about it juts as he/her say just a suggestion take aut the Tokyo ghoul part and replace it with teen wolf so the theme is the same just a suggestion it's up to you ❤️❤️❤️
Is there a love interest? And if so who is it?