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I'M GIVING you a 5/5 because of my Bs, of it being our story, it's very good man, you're doing good man, i read through, the plot is going great I'll depict this in comic one day, this is amazing tho, you're already reached 10 chapters, i also love the fact that it's a short chaptered novel.
I'm sorry but i don't understand, Did something happen to the writer or something? both story "The outside and the Dream keeper" have both been kept on a Quite understandable hold, what's going on?.. when is the next chapter going to launch?. Help me understand
You have impressed from the start of a once upon a time narrative to this place,... You've done good, i like the point actually thought it'll end up as a story of kid's adventure, most of those stories are boring. Now i understand why it's a fantasy novel,
이야기는 실제로 좋습니다, NGL, 나는 이것이 내가 정말 좋아하는 시작 소설 프랜차이즈라는 것을 알았습니다. 이야기에 대한 관심 때문에 소설을 한국어로 번역해야 했습니다. 어딘가에서 "Conflict: Outside the unknown" 주제를 본 적이 있는 것 같습니다.
Hmm, i love how the whole story is set on one particular character... I don't know How the story is Going to End but i read through Chapter 5, waiting for 6, so he's a dreamer boy, i actually don't know how Dylan is going to end up, How curious can a person be to go through an unknown Door, also you should've specified his Age so that we would know his level of naivety... Asides that the story is good, i love it, please keep it up..
Revelar Spoiler Well, I'm not really a fan of mystery stories tho, but i love the idea of the ominous black and white desert, it's a cool idea, i see your novel has bracket making it a side story (i presume) keep up the Good work. You've got potential.
I'M GIVING you a 5/5 because of my Bs, of it being our story, it's very good man, you're doing good man, i read through, the plot is going great I'll depict this in comic one day, this is amazing tho, you're already reached 10 chapters, i also love the fact that it's a short chaptered novel.
I'm sorry but i don't understand, Did something happen to the writer or something? both story "The outside and the Dream keeper" have both been kept on a Quite understandable hold, what's going on?.. when is the next chapter going to launch?. Help me understand
You have impressed from the start of a once upon a time narrative to this place,... You've done good, i like the point actually thought it'll end up as a story of kid's adventure, most of those stories are boring. Now i understand why it's a fantasy novel,
이야기는 실제로 좋습니다, NGL, 나는 이것이 내가 정말 좋아하는 시작 소설 프랜차이즈라는 것을 알았습니다. 이야기에 대한 관심 때문에 소설을 한국어로 번역해야 했습니다. 어딘가에서 "Conflict: Outside the unknown" 주제를 본 적이 있는 것 같습니다.
Hmm, i love how the whole story is set on one particular character... I don't know How the story is Going to End but i read through Chapter 5, waiting for 6, so he's a dreamer boy, i actually don't know how Dylan is going to end up, How curious can a person be to go through an unknown Door, also you should've specified his Age so that we would know his level of naivety... Asides that the story is good, i love it, please keep it up..
Revelar Spoiler
Well, I'm not really a fan of mystery stories tho, but i love the idea of the ominous black and white desert, it's a cool idea, i see your novel has bracket making it a side story (i presume) keep up the Good work. You've got potential.