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I'm at chapter 97 at the moment, writing this. All I can say is that this is one of the most unique MHA FFs that I have read in forever. It has amazing world-building, not just for the MC himself but for every other character as well. Dare I say some characters have more personality than their counterparts? You can feel the dedication to details in world-building and how things are tied to a plot point. Now the MC does not have plot armor. Well, he does. You know he won't die, but that doesn't mean he won't suffer. It's amazing to read as his personality grows and changes with time. This world of MHA is more realistic, thus more darker, and it shows you that without holding back, the MC will suffer. He got cheats, but he does not get power up out of nowhere just because he is losing. No, he works for that power up from the moment he realizes he can die, and nobody will notice. The world won't mourn him, and he is not special just because he had a second chance. And he understands this early on with a traumatic event that breaks his psyche and rebulits him as you read the aftermath. If you are looking for something different than the norm of the I got reborn and have cheats, everything will work out itself kind of story, then try this. Don't look at the reviews; just read it and decide for yourself. Though I admit some might not like how the MC suffers psychologically, it's a unique and amazing read for me. It's a different one than the standard, so if you want something different, give it a chance.
*Honest review without spoilers* First of all: this story is VERY heavy compared to the original, the characters are very emotionally charged and no one here escapes without PTSD. So if you want something light, this story is not for you. Another warning is, this fic diverges considerably from the original, there is almost no highlight of the students of class 1-A, but in comparison, we have a lot of the Todoroki family and the backstory of the world of heroes, of course, since it is not shown in the anime, a lot of things are invented from the author's mind. It is relatively slow in the beginning, (because like, the guy is a child) but it is not boring, don't be intimidated! In the future it gets so chaotic that you beg for a break... That said; This is probably one of the best fanfics I have read throughout my "career", it has great writing, character development and, relatively, a good description of fights, which is hard to do. I can't say much about the power system, since I'm not familiar with Naruto, but it seems to be good enough for someone like me to understand. Another thing that caught my attention is the psychological description of the characters, it's an aspect that usually leaves something to be desired in fighting animes, but here we have an emphasis on the traumas experienced by the characters that influence the future of the plot, and for me, it's something that contributes a lot to the development of a character. But what really caught me here was the difference from the original work, I've read many MHA fanfics and they're all very similar, most of them want to have their OC befriend the original characters, participate in the festival, be a hero, blah blah blah, the issue is that writers are usually afraid of diverging too much from the original work, and this limits them and what their work can become, Narcisse doesn't have this fear and that's what makes this story stand out. (HIGHLIGHT for the absolute professional ethics of always posting regularly). My sincerest compliments to Narcisse, you haven't even finished yet and I'm already wondering what you're going to write next... (・・;)
Dropped at chapter 25, seeing as Touya is still fucking alive even after the chapter makes me disgusted (knowing there isn't a piece of his remains, I already know what's gonna happen), time wasted, probably Touya is still alive, using the back from the dead villain trope.
honestly I am glad i read this fanfic it's nice to see someone innovate things not like all the other fanfics who slap system templates everywhere hoping it makes a good story he actually portrayed how these characters would genuinely react if they were real and anime character honestly 5 stars
I can’t lie when I first started this fic I thought it was going to be trash however it’s my favourite fic on WebNovel. I’m actually fiening for the next chapter😂
Very good and worth every minute reading this. Honestly the best mha fic I’ve ever read
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Hello, author, tell me, have you thought about the story in which Himiko Toga teamed up with the Carnage symbiote? Before the events of the original series, she could merge with him and hunt people, and at the same time remained a pretty girl at school for everyone.
Idk, something about this story makes it hard to read. I wish I knew the reason, I really did but I just can’t put my finger on it. I’ll try to word it but it might not be up to par. First, the writing felt nice at the start, but then it felt like the sentences were gettin more choppy by the chapter. Especially with the action scenes. Those chapters were incredibly rough and the scenes itself kind of felt random. Yeah, I’m sure there’s a reason why he is being kidnapped and no one is aware that an entire town is evacuated, I’m sure that would be explained eventually but it’s just random? But yeah, the action scenes were…odd. I’m not a fan of this author interpretation of the action stuff but that could just be a me thing because I rarely think authors do a good job in fights. I understand this is an anime world and what not but these ff writers really suck at writing kids. They write 5 year old like they are 10. And then the author, it seems to me, is inconsistent with their own timeline in the characters ages. Most likely dabi is alive which is a major L. Almost dropped it right then. You have the mc speaking better at 3 than people who triple his age. Idk, I don’t like it. Hiding his chakra, I mean it’s not that weird. Quirks can do some pretty odd stuff and he can just explain he found maybe the energy source of his power and he can manipulate into different energies. I understand some of the ninjitsus like cloning, can’t really explain that but the elemental stuff, not that difficult.
Me gusta mucho la historia tiene todo una psicología muy profunda y una historia muy bien integrada. Me gusta mucho la forma en que está llevando la historia sigue haciendo lo tuyo
Well, it's the typical boku no hero story with Edgy touches, the protagonist is reincarnated by an entity with a garbage configuration, seriously, why do they do that? It's okay to want to tell an Edgy story but when everything is a consequence of gods , it's not funny, it's stupid or sad, the narrative is slow, the author takes his time to build his world
I only know of 2 good MHA fanfic, this one and the other one is MHA : Horizon. while this fanfic felt like someone take the skin of MHA and used it to create a whole new story while MHA : Horizon felt like a MHA world that changed gradually because of the butterfly effect from one person, the main character of the fanfic. Both is good to me but the difference is so striking i can't help but to write a Review
I can’t lie it was a bit bad on grammar at the start but then got a lot better but i’m glad that i found this since i was desperate for any good villain mc novel
As of chapter 50 I can say with certainty that this is one of the most unique MHA fanfics I’ve ever read, the author has really done his research and has added a lot of new things that just brings the story together so much more. Some grammar mistakes here and there nothing major which is fantastic. The story is fast paced with a moderate amount of slice of life chapters, not too much to make it feel boring just enough to make it feel action packed yet chill when it needs to be. The bond the mc has with his father is great, i love reading about it, it’s something new I haven’t read before and always gets me interested when they interact. Now the author has stated the mc is and will be bloodthirsty and violent, beware and if you’ve watched “The Boys” prepare for that level of brutalness. Overall aside from some slight mistakes in grammar I loved every second of reading this so far, the author has done a wonderful job with it. I hope it becomes more popular so people get the chance to read and enjoy it like I have.
Je laisse mon commentaire ici je sais que t’es un/e écrivain/e français/e je viens aussi de France et je suis aussi auteur donc juste pour ça 5 étoiles et continue ce que tu fais c’est super
He is very fond of his father - ,some kids stupid, touyo must die and story long but good / He is very fond of his father - ,some kids stupid, dabi must die and story long but good /
started strong but the amout of bs happening from chap 60 on has gotten plain stupid. love the beginning but seriously dropping the ball like you forgot your own plot and the amount of buffs given to EVERY ONE may as well scrap the original story and make a real novel with diff names
This is a weird fanfiction. It has touya as a deranged individual willing to do anything for attention. Idk why the author tries to make a worse headcannon just to make the story more edgy. Saying that the story is well written, but todoroki is not like a reincarnated individual more like a person who has some basic knowledge and additional abilities. He seems too dependent on Endeavor and constantly hates on poor people. Seems like some of the authors' bias is bleeding into the character writing. Anyways not for me.
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sinceramente al principio la idea era buena pero cae en lo mismo que todos los autores no entiendo cual es el punto de poner que es un adulto reencarnado si se comporta como un niño en todo momento, lo luego esta la dependencia que de hace que tenga con su papá al punto que es obsesión, y leí hasta el capitulo 100 porque seguir sufriendo en esa vida de muerda de seguir en Japón cuando bien puede irse a vivir a Italia y ser dueño de ese país, lo único que parece gustarle al autos es retratar al mc como un personaje rotó, además de nerfearlo cada digo en unos capítulos pelea de par en par contra one for all y otro apenas pelea con un mercenario cualquiera, lastima parecía una buena historia
Honestly everything is good but, at chapter 26 I feel like stopping. His brother not dying is something that I hate in novels the most. Villains not dying when they should just to come back later is what makes novels bad.
insane ff am surprised it's not in the ranking well the story and how the author is telling it is unique and i like how he added to the mha world and more with the politics the quirks and also character backgrounds after i read this i see the potential in mha more
love. I've only just started the book, but it's amazing. the writing quality is amazing. the depth of the characters is amazing. the way the mc actually has trauma and works through that trauma is, frankly, the breath of fresh air. normally, wrighters gloss over (or don't even include) trauma from an event that is TRAUMATIC. so seeing an mc 1 have trauma and 2 propley work through that trauma is *chefs kiss* the only fault I have is that sometimes (very rarely) since its translated from French to English, some words are switched (eg, quirks --> alters ) but its neglable especially considering the quality of the book.
one of the best development i ever read [img=recommend][img=coins][img=recommend][img=coins] hope to read more soon ............................
It’s a great fanfic, mid YA novel, the characters feel real in universe, most characters are almost not flat too, the problems start after the characters are done, the choice of making extras from different universes is almost fine, and then sung jinwoo will be part of Japan’s special forces. Mc sucks, the whole book is just about a guy becoming a terrible person with no one able to stop him because he is too strong, imagine the boys but it’s homelander’s life as a teenager before there was anyone who could beat him, or invincible but about Nolan before earth
A very good novel, words alone are not enough to describe this masterpiece, so I’ll just stop by advising everyone to give this a try. good work….. keep it up author 👍
Extremely slowpace with detailed storyline about abuse, childhood trauma and other such disturbing detail in this book. Best to stay away if you are disturbed by such things. Author should add a warning or this should be reported so webnovel.
One of the best MHA fanfic here in webnovel that I've read. I like how the characters act is more realistic.
Author here. I deserve these 5 stars if only for the sheer amount of work I put in this fanfic. What you will NOT find here : - Harem - R 18 What there WILL have : - Gore (I fancy myself a very graphic writer, but you will be the judge of that) - Well built characters (I am a character driven writer : plot is made by the characters, it doesn’t happen to them) - Regular upload schedule (Believe me everyone, we will see this story to the end - except if I die and my sister can’t log in to post everything posthumously) - Good orthograph/grammar - I’m French and I write in French then I translate everything to English (not MTL) but I consider myself fairly good, if not fluent. If not for the occasional mistakes or typo, you won’t find much - and if you do please be lenient with me because I know how annoying this can be and I alaways try to provide quality content Hope you will have a nice reading experience everyone !
I'm at chapter 97 at the moment, writing this. All I can say is that this is one of the most unique MHA FFs that I have read in forever. It has amazing world-building, not just for the MC himself but for every other character as well. Dare I say some characters have more personality than their counterparts? You can feel the dedication to details in world-building and how things are tied to a plot point. Now the MC does not have plot armor. Well, he does. You know he won't die, but that doesn't mean he won't suffer. It's amazing to read as his personality grows and changes with time. This world of MHA is more realistic, thus more darker, and it shows you that without holding back, the MC will suffer. He got cheats, but he does not get power up out of nowhere just because he is losing. No, he works for that power up from the moment he realizes he can die, and nobody will notice. The world won't mourn him, and he is not special just because he had a second chance. And he understands this early on with a traumatic event that breaks his psyche and rebulits him as you read the aftermath. If you are looking for something different than the norm of the I got reborn and have cheats, everything will work out itself kind of story, then try this. Don't look at the reviews; just read it and decide for yourself. Though I admit some might not like how the MC suffers psychologically, it's a unique and amazing read for me. It's a different one than the standard, so if you want something different, give it a chance.
*Honest review without spoilers* First of all: this story is VERY heavy compared to the original, the characters are very emotionally charged and no one here escapes without PTSD. So if you want something light, this story is not for you. Another warning is, this fic diverges considerably from the original, there is almost no highlight of the students of class 1-A, but in comparison, we have a lot of the Todoroki family and the backstory of the world of heroes, of course, since it is not shown in the anime, a lot of things are invented from the author's mind. It is relatively slow in the beginning, (because like, the guy is a child) but it is not boring, don't be intimidated! In the future it gets so chaotic that you beg for a break... That said; This is probably one of the best fanfics I have read throughout my "career", it has great writing, character development and, relatively, a good description of fights, which is hard to do. I can't say much about the power system, since I'm not familiar with Naruto, but it seems to be good enough for someone like me to understand. Another thing that caught my attention is the psychological description of the characters, it's an aspect that usually leaves something to be desired in fighting animes, but here we have an emphasis on the traumas experienced by the characters that influence the future of the plot, and for me, it's something that contributes a lot to the development of a character. But what really caught me here was the difference from the original work, I've read many MHA fanfics and they're all very similar, most of them want to have their OC befriend the original characters, participate in the festival, be a hero, blah blah blah, the issue is that writers are usually afraid of diverging too much from the original work, and this limits them and what their work can become, Narcisse doesn't have this fear and that's what makes this story stand out. (HIGHLIGHT for the absolute professional ethics of always posting regularly). My sincerest compliments to Narcisse, you haven't even finished yet and I'm already wondering what you're going to write next... (・・;)
Dropped at chapter 25, seeing as Touya is still fucking alive even after the chapter makes me disgusted (knowing there isn't a piece of his remains, I already know what's gonna happen), time wasted, probably Touya is still alive, using the back from the dead villain trope.
honestly I am glad i read this fanfic it's nice to see someone innovate things not like all the other fanfics who slap system templates everywhere hoping it makes a good story he actually portrayed how these characters would genuinely react if they were real and anime character honestly 5 stars
I can’t lie when I first started this fic I thought it was going to be trash however it’s my favourite fic on WebNovel. I’m actually fiening for the next chapter😂
Very good and worth every minute reading this. Honestly the best mha fic I’ve ever read
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Hello, author, tell me, have you thought about the story in which Himiko Toga teamed up with the Carnage symbiote? Before the events of the original series, she could merge with him and hunt people, and at the same time remained a pretty girl at school for everyone.
Idk, something about this story makes it hard to read. I wish I knew the reason, I really did but I just can’t put my finger on it. I’ll try to word it but it might not be up to par. First, the writing felt nice at the start, but then it felt like the sentences were gettin more choppy by the chapter. Especially with the action scenes. Those chapters were incredibly rough and the scenes itself kind of felt random. Yeah, I’m sure there’s a reason why he is being kidnapped and no one is aware that an entire town is evacuated, I’m sure that would be explained eventually but it’s just random? But yeah, the action scenes were…odd. I’m not a fan of this author interpretation of the action stuff but that could just be a me thing because I rarely think authors do a good job in fights. I understand this is an anime world and what not but these ff writers really suck at writing kids. They write 5 year old like they are 10. And then the author, it seems to me, is inconsistent with their own timeline in the characters ages. Most likely dabi is alive which is a major L. Almost dropped it right then. You have the mc speaking better at 3 than people who triple his age. Idk, I don’t like it. Hiding his chakra, I mean it’s not that weird. Quirks can do some pretty odd stuff and he can just explain he found maybe the energy source of his power and he can manipulate into different energies. I understand some of the ninjitsus like cloning, can’t really explain that but the elemental stuff, not that difficult.
Me gusta mucho la historia tiene todo una psicología muy profunda y una historia muy bien integrada. Me gusta mucho la forma en que está llevando la historia sigue haciendo lo tuyo
Well, it's the typical boku no hero story with Edgy touches, the protagonist is reincarnated by an entity with a garbage configuration, seriously, why do they do that? It's okay to want to tell an Edgy story but when everything is a consequence of gods , it's not funny, it's stupid or sad, the narrative is slow, the author takes his time to build his world
I only know of 2 good MHA fanfic, this one and the other one is MHA : Horizon. while this fanfic felt like someone take the skin of MHA and used it to create a whole new story while MHA : Horizon felt like a MHA world that changed gradually because of the butterfly effect from one person, the main character of the fanfic. Both is good to me but the difference is so striking i can't help but to write a Review
I can’t lie it was a bit bad on grammar at the start but then got a lot better but i’m glad that i found this since i was desperate for any good villain mc novel
As of chapter 50 I can say with certainty that this is one of the most unique MHA fanfics I’ve ever read, the author has really done his research and has added a lot of new things that just brings the story together so much more. Some grammar mistakes here and there nothing major which is fantastic. The story is fast paced with a moderate amount of slice of life chapters, not too much to make it feel boring just enough to make it feel action packed yet chill when it needs to be. The bond the mc has with his father is great, i love reading about it, it’s something new I haven’t read before and always gets me interested when they interact. Now the author has stated the mc is and will be bloodthirsty and violent, beware and if you’ve watched “The Boys” prepare for that level of brutalness. Overall aside from some slight mistakes in grammar I loved every second of reading this so far, the author has done a wonderful job with it. I hope it becomes more popular so people get the chance to read and enjoy it like I have.
Je laisse mon commentaire ici je sais que t’es un/e écrivain/e français/e je viens aussi de France et je suis aussi auteur donc juste pour ça 5 étoiles et continue ce que tu fais c’est super
He is very fond of his father - ,some kids stupid, touyo must die and story long but good / He is very fond of his father - ,some kids stupid, dabi must die and story long but good /
started strong but the amout of bs happening from chap 60 on has gotten plain stupid. love the beginning but seriously dropping the ball like you forgot your own plot and the amount of buffs given to EVERY ONE may as well scrap the original story and make a real novel with diff names
This is a weird fanfiction. It has touya as a deranged individual willing to do anything for attention. Idk why the author tries to make a worse headcannon just to make the story more edgy. Saying that the story is well written, but todoroki is not like a reincarnated individual more like a person who has some basic knowledge and additional abilities. He seems too dependent on Endeavor and constantly hates on poor people. Seems like some of the authors' bias is bleeding into the character writing. Anyways not for me.
Revelar Spoiler sinceramente al principio la idea era buena pero cae en lo mismo que todos los autores no entiendo cual es el punto de poner que es un adulto reencarnado si se comporta como un niño en todo momento, lo luego esta la dependencia que de hace que tenga con su papá al punto que es obsesión, y leí hasta el capitulo 100 porque seguir sufriendo en esa vida de muerda de seguir en Japón cuando bien puede irse a vivir a Italia y ser dueño de ese país, lo único que parece gustarle al autos es retratar al mc como un personaje rotó, además de nerfearlo cada digo en unos capítulos pelea de par en par contra one for all y otro apenas pelea con un mercenario cualquiera, lastima parecía una buena historia
Honestly everything is good but, at chapter 26 I feel like stopping. His brother not dying is something that I hate in novels the most. Villains not dying when they should just to come back later is what makes novels bad.
insane ff am surprised it's not in the ranking well the story and how the author is telling it is unique and i like how he added to the mha world and more with the politics the quirks and also character backgrounds after i read this i see the potential in mha more
love. I've only just started the book, but it's amazing. the writing quality is amazing. the depth of the characters is amazing. the way the mc actually has trauma and works through that trauma is, frankly, the breath of fresh air. normally, wrighters gloss over (or don't even include) trauma from an event that is TRAUMATIC. so seeing an mc 1 have trauma and 2 propley work through that trauma is *chefs kiss* the only fault I have is that sometimes (very rarely) since its translated from French to English, some words are switched (eg, quirks --> alters ) but its neglable especially considering the quality of the book.
one of the best development i ever read [img=recommend][img=coins][img=recommend][img=coins] hope to read more soon ............................
It’s a great fanfic, mid YA novel, the characters feel real in universe, most characters are almost not flat too, the problems start after the characters are done, the choice of making extras from different universes is almost fine, and then sung jinwoo will be part of Japan’s special forces. Mc sucks, the whole book is just about a guy becoming a terrible person with no one able to stop him because he is too strong, imagine the boys but it’s homelander’s life as a teenager before there was anyone who could beat him, or invincible but about Nolan before earth
A very good novel, words alone are not enough to describe this masterpiece, so I’ll just stop by advising everyone to give this a try. good work….. keep it up author 👍
Extremely slowpace with detailed storyline about abuse, childhood trauma and other such disturbing detail in this book. Best to stay away if you are disturbed by such things. Author should add a warning or this should be reported so webnovel.
One of the best MHA fanfic here in webnovel that I've read. I like how the characters act is more realistic.
Author here. I deserve these 5 stars if only for the sheer amount of work I put in this fanfic. What you will NOT find here : - Harem - R 18 What there WILL have : - Gore (I fancy myself a very graphic writer, but you will be the judge of that) - Well built characters (I am a character driven writer : plot is made by the characters, it doesn’t happen to them) - Regular upload schedule (Believe me everyone, we will see this story to the end - except if I die and my sister can’t log in to post everything posthumously) - Good orthograph/grammar - I’m French and I write in French then I translate everything to English (not MTL) but I consider myself fairly good, if not fluent. If not for the occasional mistakes or typo, you won’t find much - and if you do please be lenient with me because I know how annoying this can be and I alaways try to provide quality content Hope you will have a nice reading experience everyone !