The Eternal Family

LV 5

BloodyKing

Interesting novel, even though I came for the "plot" I am surprised as it has suddenly become a mystery and now I am waiting to see how it all unfolds.

LV 4

FamishedGod

Take this as a question and answer section. About 100 chaps in, I am sure where the story is headed and I'll answer some possible questions. - Will there be a Harem? Of course. -How big is the Harem? Very big but Mc's inner circle will only have some women. - Will there be Yuri?No, you may rest assured.- Will Mc get Ntred? No, Mc only steal, no get stolen. - Will it have a consistent Fantasy Power system? Absolutely, I love that thing! - Will the clone touch Mc Women? Absolutely No. not even a harmless handshake! You can ask more questions below

LV 1

Darkman90

Maaaan, I was really starting to like this story but there are are some major flaws that is being an obstacle to enjoy and cherish this story. First of all, way too verbose and too many words used to describe/explain things, it sometimes makes the explanation messy and confusing at times. And I get lost in it and have to read multiple times in order to figure some things out but even then it is not clear. Which leads to, info dump after info dump! Like waaaaay tooo much information and after reading 110 chapters all I can say most of it is irrelevant and doesn’t really add to the story but more like placeholders and blank shots. I felt like the author tried way too hard to make it complex and unique in order to give the story depth but it became way too much of mess and unnecessary information made the story a pain the butt to read. Does it have potential? Sure, but potential will remain potential if the author can’t convert it to kinetic energy. But the way author tries to convert Potential Energy to Kinetic Energy is unnecessarily complex and bulky making the story hard to enjoy.

LV 3

BookWorms007

The story is too complicated. I skimmed through a few chapters. Booom....... I lost track of what is happening with the novel.( Spoiler Mc goes back in time, a lot of different weird abilities , his daughter from the future goes back in time.....) What a mess. This is not my type of novel

LV 14

NamelessStory

An amazing novel with a unique twist but the only problem I have is that the world building hasn’t been established yet

LV 2

rbp

i like the first few chapter simple, not complicated, nothing mysterious but after the mc went back time/reborn, i had hard time understanding the way author deliver his story (english is not my native language) it became confusing and mysterious to me. but this will not hinder me reading this novel, i might understand what is happening in the upcoming chapters. just keep pumping chapters don't drop.

LV 4

101_dark

this story is for degenerates everything is good, maybe just little bit complicated, so many timelines and time travel but overall worth reading

LV 4

Ace_of_your_heart

I hope you continue I can't wait for new chapters

LV 10

Venushka_Fdo

love your idear keep up and love the girls so keep up kerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrp uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp

LV 4

Chaosscythe

The most complicated story I've ever read!!! But great read if you are bored and want something to occupy your mind! FYI: author great work however please try to make it simpler in the future!

LV 4

Primordium

Keep up the good work author .....................................................................................................................................

LV 3

saleh_darijani

good has threesome this novel?! -------------------‐------------------------------------‐-----------------------------------------------‐-------------------------------

LV 3

HashDaze

Author, oh dear author, I appreciate your work and I have only one suggestion for you. Please at least capitalize the first letter of each paragraph to make it more pleasant for the eye. Thank you.

LV 14

blazing_dragon

I'm love it so far and can't wait to see what you do with it in the future

LV 3

SYED_AFAQ

is this novel dropped i want to know before i start reading it

LV 13

lol_lol_3393

W but more regular updates waiting for new chapter everyday

LV 2

Sophie_Preston

Well, the world building and concept was awesome but the author is a newbie. The sentence making seems to be forced not fluid. Character development, side character development is the worst i have ever seen. He is comparing the MC's 'Long' with a dragon....but chapter size is shorter than my PP. There are some illogical concept that author believes in,,,,such as MC can adjust his sudden increase in strength by practicing with needle and thread...

LV 4

Anonymous_Anon_9763

Too much confusing to read. Least enjoyable. Besides MC isn’t a genius at all. He is a sore loser. Anybody can play with his mind.