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The story is mid/boring. Maybe it gets better as it goes on but the first 50 chapters aren’t anything special. There’s some cliches. Read an hour of it to see if you like it maybe it’s just me
great novel so far. although there hasn't been any updates in awhile.... is it going to start updating again orrrr.... 🥹🥹
It's the most Thrilling novel I read so far in a while.keep it up author.i just started but looks promising.
Revelar Spoiler
The story is nothing but a cliche. The main character is betrayed and dies, only to reincarnate in another world where he receives a system that allows him to complete quests and gain stat points. Despite becoming incredibly strong after acquiring free stat points for almost a decade, he still waits for his opponents to attack before beating them. However, the truth is that he could have defeated them easily right from the start, without taking any damage.
This book is very promising. The world background is quite intriguing but the pace is so slow for me and school life is dragging that why I'm dropping this novel. Probabyly will return once the character starts his journey after the academy and his quest for world domination
This novel is a banger. Author managed to make you feel connected to MC's struggles from early on, while also making you feel as if you were inside the story.Since this review is made early in the story, I can't say much about the world background, but even so it's extremely captivating and it gives you that drive to continue reading it further.I'm sure it's going to take flight and smash the tops.Thank you for wasting your time to read my humble review. Good luck fellow daoist/daoists!11/10
Great story author,but you kinda killed it with the whole system thing for me,I mean there's at least a thousand system novels out there and alot of them are prolly better than yours (no offense btw) so I just think it would have been alot better if you hadn't added the system part but nevertheless still a great story 👍Btw,I haven't read your story that far so I may have been a little bit stingy with the stars 😅
I'm really impressed with the quality of the story. It starts off a little on the dark side but the plot and characters grab your attention. The bond that is created between the ML and his fellow examinees is truly extraordinary and heartwarming considering their circumstances. Truly looking forward to what's to come once they enter the academy. I recommend this story if you like adventure and mystery since ML is still learning about his system 😉
Very good beginning but since the entrance exam its horrible to read… stretcht way too long to the point, where you wait for 50 chapters for it to end and dont actually like these 50+ chapters.
I haven't read this yet. I am going to though. What I want to know is what the author envisions of the MC. What does he wish the MC's goal to be, and what things the MC requires to do to reach said goal.
I can see this novel growing much more in the future, it has a stupid amount of potential!
I like how the main character was written! The pacing was well executed, and I like how the setting was fleshed out. Overall, though this isn’t what I normally read, this was a nice read. Keep it up!
The tone is very dark at first but is executed well and feels natural. In just two chapters, the author made me feel connected to the MC and his struggles. Before I knew it, I found myself rooting for him. As long as he keeps uploading, the book will definitely become a gem.
Great start and everything, even if the humor kind of clashes with the huge misery sandwich that is the beginning, but the update speed worries me. I know that us authors are busy folk but still. And also. HILLBILLIES. Loved that. Will read more later.
Review from reading the first chapter. The first chapter is dark and grim - which is the norm for reincarnation novels. The writing is ok and readable. A few mistakes here and there because the author is human. Nothing that bad to rant about apart from the sad background story for the MC. overall good novel
Early review here. Looking at the prologue, the tone seemed quite dark. Fans of those types of stories would like this. Grammar is quite fine with only minor issues, though some words are somewhat hard to understand. Still very early, however, hope the author will improve as the chapters progress more. Keep it up!
Great plot and storyline, actually forgot there was only one chapter and scrolled for more
"Pretty good first chapter. We got a little insight into the story and a cliff hanger which is good. Lacking the character purpose/goal but it is a prologue so thats understandble."
As per usual, you see the author writing a 5 star review [img=proud]. Here are some things I want to preface after 285~ chaps. 1. This is my first time writing a contracted novel, so the story gets significantly better as you read. (Especially after entrance exam). 2. Lyrian is constantly changing in character! He won’t be fully developed until far down in the story. 3. Upload rate is 14/week. If u want more then gift! [img=gift] 4. I got some hype cookin up! 5. If you wanted to know something I didn’t mention here, just reply and ask me. I’ll answer if possible.
The story is mid/boring. Maybe it gets better as it goes on but the first 50 chapters aren’t anything special. There’s some cliches. Read an hour of it to see if you like it maybe it’s just me
great novel so far. although there hasn't been any updates in awhile.... is it going to start updating again orrrr.... 🥹🥹
It's the most Thrilling novel I read so far in a while.keep it up author.i just started but looks promising.
Revelar Spoiler The story is nothing but a cliche. The main character is betrayed and dies, only to reincarnate in another world where he receives a system that allows him to complete quests and gain stat points. Despite becoming incredibly strong after acquiring free stat points for almost a decade, he still waits for his opponents to attack before beating them. However, the truth is that he could have defeated them easily right from the start, without taking any damage.
This book is very promising. The world background is quite intriguing but the pace is so slow for me and school life is dragging that why I'm dropping this novel. Probabyly will return once the character starts his journey after the academy and his quest for world domination
This novel is a banger. Author managed to make you feel connected to MC's struggles from early on, while also making you feel as if you were inside the story.Since this review is made early in the story, I can't say much about the world background, but even so it's extremely captivating and it gives you that drive to continue reading it further.I'm sure it's going to take flight and smash the tops.Thank you for wasting your time to read my humble review. Good luck fellow daoist/daoists!11/10
Great story author,but you kinda killed it with the whole system thing for me,I mean there's at least a thousand system novels out there and alot of them are prolly better than yours (no offense btw) so I just think it would have been alot better if you hadn't added the system part but nevertheless still a great story 👍Btw,I haven't read your story that far so I may have been a little bit stingy with the stars 😅
I'm really impressed with the quality of the story. It starts off a little on the dark side but the plot and characters grab your attention. The bond that is created between the ML and his fellow examinees is truly extraordinary and heartwarming considering their circumstances. Truly looking forward to what's to come once they enter the academy. I recommend this story if you like adventure and mystery since ML is still learning about his system 😉
Very good beginning but since the entrance exam its horrible to read… stretcht way too long to the point, where you wait for 50 chapters for it to end and dont actually like these 50+ chapters.
I haven't read this yet. I am going to though. What I want to know is what the author envisions of the MC. What does he wish the MC's goal to be, and what things the MC requires to do to reach said goal.
I can see this novel growing much more in the future, it has a stupid amount of potential!
I like how the main character was written! The pacing was well executed, and I like how the setting was fleshed out. Overall, though this isn’t what I normally read, this was a nice read. Keep it up!
The tone is very dark at first but is executed well and feels natural. In just two chapters, the author made me feel connected to the MC and his struggles. Before I knew it, I found myself rooting for him. As long as he keeps uploading, the book will definitely become a gem.
Great start and everything, even if the humor kind of clashes with the huge misery sandwich that is the beginning, but the update speed worries me. I know that us authors are busy folk but still. And also. HILLBILLIES. Loved that. Will read more later.
Review from reading the first chapter. The first chapter is dark and grim - which is the norm for reincarnation novels. The writing is ok and readable. A few mistakes here and there because the author is human. Nothing that bad to rant about apart from the sad background story for the MC. overall good novel
Early review here. Looking at the prologue, the tone seemed quite dark. Fans of those types of stories would like this. Grammar is quite fine with only minor issues, though some words are somewhat hard to understand. Still very early, however, hope the author will improve as the chapters progress more. Keep it up!
Great plot and storyline, actually forgot there was only one chapter and scrolled for more
"Pretty good first chapter. We got a little insight into the story and a cliff hanger which is good. Lacking the character purpose/goal but it is a prologue so thats understandble."
As per usual, you see the author writing a 5 star review [img=proud]. Here are some things I want to preface after 285~ chaps. 1. This is my first time writing a contracted novel, so the story gets significantly better as you read. (Especially after entrance exam). 2. Lyrian is constantly changing in character! He won’t be fully developed until far down in the story. 3. Upload rate is 14/week. If u want more then gift! [img=gift] 4. I got some hype cookin up! 5. If you wanted to know something I didn’t mention here, just reply and ask me. I’ll answer if possible.