Shadow Monarch: Multiverse Ascendance

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Moon_Kagari

New fanfi of my favorite author-chan, I look forward to the next chapters. I would also like to know if the mc will only have the powers of the shadow monarch or will have more powers from different verses. 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺

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Ender_Vate

unfortunately this fanfic is not for me, I tried to continue but after several chapters with the exception of useless information, and after he took advantage of Lee Joohee and practically discarded it, it speaks a lot about a person's character. for that and other reasons I'm going to drop it, and that the author evolves with this fic and brings something better in the future.

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Maddy_0112

your MC has tons of skills but each are at level 1, this is pretty useless. You should strengthen each skills to max rather than giving a three new skill every other 2 chapters.

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Godymandias

people who can't speak English shouldn't write in it.

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Vermont_

I was blackmailed into giving⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️. . .

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Scorpion_Wish

Did not like it one bit. Not my kind of story…

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Ritesh_Jha_1696

everything was going good so far but at chapter 64 life just using girl for get body broke my heart that's the only reason I am dropping it

LV 3

Hot_Sizzling

I don't think the author understand the flow, logic and pacing of the OG Solo level world. The author keeps adding elements to the system and stated that it's still the same system in the original, but isn't the purpose of the system is to transfer the power of ashborn to jinwoo, and the system's source is ashborn himself, why does an Elderitch path is in the system? It doesn't make sense. It would make sense if the author add his own system and combined it with the OG system, but he says it's the same as the OG so it doesn't make sense. And the very noticeable mistakes a lot of authors do in fanfics, is that they just copy the original and make or add some elements to the story while not understanding the OG story. The mc has a lot of mana in the beginning but it just shows in the mana reader that he has only 10, and it doesn't even give explanation why it hid his real mana. It just doesn't make sense.

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AsuraXD

Well it's not really a villain fanfiction but an improved version of antihero story, which if I remember correctly the original sun jin woo was also a bit of antihero protagonist, which is why solo leveling is hit in first place, so yeah a little disappointed from the way story goes, as I was expecting the MC to be an absolute villain.

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SlimNeez

Author just copies from the original novels and takes it as his own. Literally word for word and its absurd how he gets stones for work thats not even his.

LV 4

Haise_Sasaki1

The grammar needs some improvement and the info dumps and random tangents about mana and the like is annoying but it's bearable, and that's all there is to not like, but overall the fic is great

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Tarun_Sharma_9611

nice nice nice nice nice awesome awesome give me more [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Beatupdreamer34

The novel was butchered into this monstrosity. It felt like parts of the og novel plus a congregation of nonsense.

LV 11

Sanpetch_Auesilp

This novel is too detailed and detailed to the point of being annoying. Even more detailed than the original novel. (I'm not being sarcastic.) But I was able to get through it by skipping the content. But I found a new problem that I didn't like when entering the world of akame ga kill. You said you couldn't tolerate cruelty. and want to stop this cruelty and flirt with esdeath And it makes me feel miserable Because it's tagged as a villain and the mc's personality is annoying and I don't have a problem with your age because I've read many Chinese fanfics. Many of the akame ga kill Chinese fanfics I've read are better than yours. again I can't believe you can write worse than Chinese nationalists. And I've read akame ga kill fanfiction that starts in the North like you. But the way to approach esdeath is still much better and interesting. You start out like a villain, but you end up acting like a virginal anti-hero who has never seen cruelty. Your novel is boring. Your novel has a few advantages. 1) There are more episodes than other fan fiction stories of this type. 2) MC op 3) MC is lucky.

LV 4

Scaryface131

Very hard to read, story all over the place

LV 3

Nay_02

Fic with a fairly fast plot but with "important" details that are very disturbing and too many so that the plot feels very slow, Mc just became Job Evolution in the 60s chapter, So yeah, good luck to future readers of this fic, I hope you don't get dizzy while reading it... That's just my complaint about this very "detailed" fic

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Sagvey_Ay

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Ashemit

Uhh, I read about 14 chapters, it's basically solo leveling rewritten with extra steps. Apart from the extra skills he acquired, the rest happened in the same way but with boring monologues and bad descriptions.

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Damn_Sthy

In short boring noting truly happen and mc is strangely written. He was a heart broken person but suddenly change with out any development and instantly become a cringe lord and story in pretty much the same as manhwa/novel small changes but not much in reality the arthor could just time skip to the important part and to small flash back instead. A reader might be curious at first but it’s get very boring after a while.