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muy buena historia pero desde el capítulo 120 hacia adelante los nombres de los personajes no coincidían con sus acciones
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These translations are rotting my brain. What the hell is a oily dragon horse woman???????????????
I, The New Hokage of Konoha Yo, el nuevo Hokage de Konoha Los cielos y la miríada de reinos son enormes. Sería demasiado solitario caminar solo sin una esposa y un hijo. Dado que quieres luchar contra los cielos, entonces, naturalmente, debes traer tu propia base, que está más en línea con tus propios deseos. En este momento, mientras escuchaba a Tsunade planear con entusiasmo el próximo itinerario de Las Vegas y escuchaba a Maki seleccionar felizmente a los miembros de la expedición, Yun Ting sonrió sinceramente y finalmente miró al cielo. Los ojos pasan por la tierra, por el universo 838, por el multiverso Marvel, y llegan a los cielos y mundos que irradian luz infinita. ¡Una vida maravillosa acaba de comenzar!
It's pretty good fanfic but has a below average translation quality. Well, it's still readable though. The story start at the MC suddenly transmigrated to a newly crowned Hokage. The development pretty good too. Not too fast pace or too slow paced. The fanfic is a pretty good one from so many fanfic of naruto I read, but not the top one, just above average for me. Still interesting though. The only downside is the translation quality. Pretty much if you ask an AI to translated, it became like this. I deeply suspect that the Translator just copy paste the fanfic (the chinese) to an AI to translated this to english.
voy a ser muy honesto en un inicio me gusto mucho pero al igual que otros fanfics lo dañaste al querer meter la ideóloga madona de la tierra en un mundo donde el mas fuerte es el que dicta la verdad del mundo no importa si el 99% del mundo esta de acuerdo en la opción A si el 1% restante tiene la fuerza de someter al 99% solo pueden ir por la opción B es algo que veo mucho en las novelas chinas y japonesas que intenta imponer una su ideología de vida a un fanfic en el que claramente no funciona hay un escritor que tienen una frase similar a esta LA DEMOCRACIA Y LA "PAZ" SOLO FUNCIONA EN UN MUNDO DONDE TODOS SON IGUALES Y TIENEN LAS MISMA OPORTUNIDADES cosa que en el mundo de naruto no aplica, diablos ni siquiera nosotros encajamos del todo en esa frase
Good fanfic but the translation is horrible. The names and pronouns keep getting mixed up
The story is not the best but that’s not the issue it’s just the translation is so awful
I didn't even bother to read. Wood style. Cheat system on Minato. Making him have a bloodline doesn't make him the hokage we know. He is the only civilian child from konoha to become hokage.
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I think the translator does not understand English so I will keep it simple. novel, good.Story, Good.English, Bad, Very Bad, very very Bad.Hulk, Strong.Hulk smash [img=faceslap] Translator.
This is good from the start, the story is very understandable and until he becomes overpowered, this is a highly recommended read I highly recommend that if you want to read this reinvented Naruto isekai, you can and should try it
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Just read 15 and 16 chapter and you would understand my frustrations... the idea and concept behind this fanfic is great... I was genuinely enjoying it... but the translsation got so worse I much rather wait for a better translsation by someone else than let this trashy one ruin the experience of it... I am genuinely feeling sad right now... This was one of the very few fanfics I recently started enjoying and this could have actually been very popular if it was translated well... moreover... this person is even has a Patreon for this kind of translation... alas if you think you can comprehend the story and enjoy, you can read it, but I can't... I don't want to devalue this fanfic...
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the story starts off with the worst title in history. and it only gets worse from there. Nothing to highlight because everything is equally as bad. these stories just shouldn't exist.
Мне все очень понравилось, история и ее положительное влияние на рассказ. Нету глубоких и угнетающих политических игр, нету черноты в рассказе. Мне приятно следить за таким хорошим гг.
so the mc becomes the strongest in the end…it was such a good story that I don't even need to readnext …
the tl sucks is inconsistent and cultivation terms slip through but its kinda interesting
the story is good and all but the translation is getting worse as it continues
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La tradición es muy buena el ritmo te mete de lleno y no hace que el mc sea op al instante es un desarrollo conciso además el toque soy Senju agrega un extra de emoción
It's good, but the development takes a long time, the translation is getting worse but I'll keep reading to see where it goes.I hope the MC doesn't start "refining the power core" like other Chinese FFs
Very good ı like the way its going zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
the story is great but your grammar can use an improvement it feel like a machine translation and a bad one at that ............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Shall I say one? It was pretty nice at the beginning. but then when kushina was pregnant and mc's wife she never, ever, never even mentioned her name in the novel. I think I could only read your name once but no more. mc can go to different places and apply training, tour the whole village, carry out secret plans, but he does not see his pregnant wife. ok mc may be reincarnated but kushina doesn't know that. he should at least visit kushina mc. Also, I may have misunderstood, but it seems like they are developing an affinity with Tsunade. If this happens, it means a harem.
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Dude the least you can do is adjust the names well they are all over the place in one second Obito is called Tobirama, Naruto and even Izuna The hell
muy buena historia pero desde el capítulo 120 hacia adelante los nombres de los personajes no coincidían con sus acciones
Revelar Spoiler These translations are rotting my brain. What the hell is a oily dragon horse woman???????????????
I, The New Hokage of Konoha Yo, el nuevo Hokage de Konoha Los cielos y la miríada de reinos son enormes. Sería demasiado solitario caminar solo sin una esposa y un hijo. Dado que quieres luchar contra los cielos, entonces, naturalmente, debes traer tu propia base, que está más en línea con tus propios deseos. En este momento, mientras escuchaba a Tsunade planear con entusiasmo el próximo itinerario de Las Vegas y escuchaba a Maki seleccionar felizmente a los miembros de la expedición, Yun Ting sonrió sinceramente y finalmente miró al cielo. Los ojos pasan por la tierra, por el universo 838, por el multiverso Marvel, y llegan a los cielos y mundos que irradian luz infinita. ¡Una vida maravillosa acaba de comenzar!
It's pretty good fanfic but has a below average translation quality. Well, it's still readable though. The story start at the MC suddenly transmigrated to a newly crowned Hokage. The development pretty good too. Not too fast pace or too slow paced. The fanfic is a pretty good one from so many fanfic of naruto I read, but not the top one, just above average for me. Still interesting though. The only downside is the translation quality. Pretty much if you ask an AI to translated, it became like this. I deeply suspect that the Translator just copy paste the fanfic (the chinese) to an AI to translated this to english.
voy a ser muy honesto en un inicio me gusto mucho pero al igual que otros fanfics lo dañaste al querer meter la ideóloga madona de la tierra en un mundo donde el mas fuerte es el que dicta la verdad del mundo no importa si el 99% del mundo esta de acuerdo en la opción A si el 1% restante tiene la fuerza de someter al 99% solo pueden ir por la opción B es algo que veo mucho en las novelas chinas y japonesas que intenta imponer una su ideología de vida a un fanfic en el que claramente no funciona hay un escritor que tienen una frase similar a esta LA DEMOCRACIA Y LA "PAZ" SOLO FUNCIONA EN UN MUNDO DONDE TODOS SON IGUALES Y TIENEN LAS MISMA OPORTUNIDADES cosa que en el mundo de naruto no aplica, diablos ni siquiera nosotros encajamos del todo en esa frase
Good fanfic but the translation is horrible. The names and pronouns keep getting mixed up
The story is not the best but that’s not the issue it’s just the translation is so awful
I didn't even bother to read. Wood style. Cheat system on Minato. Making him have a bloodline doesn't make him the hokage we know. He is the only civilian child from konoha to become hokage.
ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
I think the translator does not understand English so I will keep it simple. novel, good.Story, Good.English, Bad, Very Bad, very very Bad.Hulk, Strong.Hulk smash [img=faceslap] Translator.
This is good from the start, the story is very understandable and until he becomes overpowered, this is a highly recommended read I highly recommend that if you want to read this reinvented Naruto isekai, you can and should try it
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Revelar Spoiler Just read 15 and 16 chapter and you would understand my frustrations... the idea and concept behind this fanfic is great... I was genuinely enjoying it... but the translsation got so worse I much rather wait for a better translsation by someone else than let this trashy one ruin the experience of it... I am genuinely feeling sad right now... This was one of the very few fanfics I recently started enjoying and this could have actually been very popular if it was translated well... moreover... this person is even has a Patreon for this kind of translation... alas if you think you can comprehend the story and enjoy, you can read it, but I can't... I don't want to devalue this fanfic...
Revelar Spoiler the story starts off with the worst title in history. and it only gets worse from there. Nothing to highlight because everything is equally as bad. these stories just shouldn't exist.
Мне все очень понравилось, история и ее положительное влияние на рассказ. Нету глубоких и угнетающих политических игр, нету черноты в рассказе. Мне приятно следить за таким хорошим гг.
so the mc becomes the strongest in the end…it was such a good story that I don't even need to readnext …
the tl sucks is inconsistent and cultivation terms slip through but its kinda interesting
the story is good and all but the translation is getting worse as it continues
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La tradición es muy buena el ritmo te mete de lleno y no hace que el mc sea op al instante es un desarrollo conciso además el toque soy Senju agrega un extra de emoción
It's good, but the development takes a long time, the translation is getting worse but I'll keep reading to see where it goes.I hope the MC doesn't start "refining the power core" like other Chinese FFs
Very good ı like the way its going zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
the story is great but your grammar can use an improvement it feel like a machine translation and a bad one at that ............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Shall I say one? It was pretty nice at the beginning. but then when kushina was pregnant and mc's wife she never, ever, never even mentioned her name in the novel. I think I could only read your name once but no more. mc can go to different places and apply training, tour the whole village, carry out secret plans, but he does not see his pregnant wife. ok mc may be reincarnated but kushina doesn't know that. he should at least visit kushina mc. Also, I may have misunderstood, but it seems like they are developing an affinity with Tsunade. If this happens, it means a harem.
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Dude the least you can do is adjust the names well they are all over the place in one second Obito is called Tobirama, Naruto and even Izuna The hell