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i like the idea behind the book I really do but the translation is so bad names of place change between chapters names of characters do the same thing sentences are repeated and it's honestly a struggle to read through I'm on chapter 120 or something and I just can't stand the writing quality of this book for long periods of time
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This fanfic has me puzzled over the fact that the MC is a reincarnator or simply an intelligent child who got a system. I like the character development Viserys experiences and the realisticness of the fight between Kevan Lannister's forces, and the Targaryen loyals. Since this is a translation fanfic, I hope you can update the chapters faster. Good luck!
Best translation of this story I've seen so far.............................................................................................
honestly I've read the original book until chapter 300 or smth, and trust me you may like the book in the beginning but later on it just goes on like a normal Chinese story, one king or someone provokes him, he takes revenge and i felt like the characters don't have those qualities which made us attached to em in ASOIAF. So I'd recommend y'all to not read it. One more thing, i really liked the start of this story but it's not my thing so just lemme know if there is any other nice Viserys Targaryen story out there
Although initially I didn't expect much from this fic. It developed nicely. I hope this doesn't get dropped. Continue the good work 👍
i like the idea behind the book I really do but the translation is so bad names of place change between chapters names of characters do the same thing sentences are repeated and it's honestly a struggle to read through I'm on chapter 120 or something and I just can't stand the writing quality of this book for long periods of time
Keep going keep going !!! GooodKeep going keep going !!! Goood Keep going keep going !!! Goood Keep going keep going !!! Goood Keep going keep goingKeep going keep going !!! Goood Keep going keep going !!! Goood !!! Goood
😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😚
This fanfic has me puzzled over the fact that the MC is a reincarnator or simply an intelligent child who got a system. I like the character development Viserys experiences and the realisticness of the fight between Kevan Lannister's forces, and the Targaryen loyals. Since this is a translation fanfic, I hope you can update the chapters faster. Good luck!
Best translation of this story I've seen so far.............................................................................................
honestly I've read the original book until chapter 300 or smth, and trust me you may like the book in the beginning but later on it just goes on like a normal Chinese story, one king or someone provokes him, he takes revenge and i felt like the characters don't have those qualities which made us attached to em in ASOIAF. So I'd recommend y'all to not read it. One more thing, i really liked the start of this story but it's not my thing so just lemme know if there is any other nice Viserys Targaryen story out there
Although initially I didn't expect much from this fic. It developed nicely. I hope this doesn't get dropped. Continue the good work 👍