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Very good fan fiction. I would like the author to translate new chapters faster. .. .. .. ..
No livro original tá completo, só falta traduzir, é uma pena que tenha parado aq .................. _______<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
I like the premise and I’m defenitely enjoying reading this, but I feel like the writing quality gets worse in later chapters and I’m worried with how strong the mc is becoming the story might get boring in the near future. I’m hoping it doesn’t and the author has a plan
Good novel I hope that when in mondaji the MCs will include Shiro yasha and Halloween As mc woman, It would be great because the setting in NgnL and campione, MC has the spirituality of gods and demon kings
It's an amazing read, a bit mundane though still great at the start but it really gets going fast, contains unique elements and exciting scenes - a weak-to-strong story where the MC becomes OP pretty quickly, but because of the nature of the story he can always have a challenge, though he doesn't remain weak for long. Oh yeah, he's also not a pushover or bootlicker, it doesn't have stereotypes of people like the governments scheming and thinking they can control the MC and it isn't unrealistic in conversations. The names of some perks he gets in the simulations and other small aspects may be a bit off-putting at first, but it's not too bad.
minus, the updates, everything's a 5-star rating from me. i dont think ive encountered this type of simulation system in which theres a plot device on why it was given to the mc, which creates a good background for the world in itself, and the story telling even in the simulation is pretty impressive, and how the story revolves around the simulated and irl interactions. though the caveat would probably be on how the mc will manage the harem tag because of the current list of heroines from the simulated an real world, its going to be an interesting experience to see how the author will write their stuff for the story. if you want a fic with good writing and story, i suggest you give this a try.
Well, the fanfiction idea is good, but the more you read, the less it makes sense. MC is a genius who is not a genius. Smart but stupid at the same time. You can also drink water from the pages of the book - there are SO many typical Chinese expressions and self-praise. All characters other than the MC are empty puppets, designed to fill in the text with letters and words, continuing to constantly praise the MC and marvel at his strength. The keyword of this fanfic is "mediocrity", which will almost certainly not get any better. I finished.
Can someone please translate this to readable English, I like simulation systems but I can’t read this without getting a headache.
AUTHOR STOP MISLEADING PEOPLE. THIS IS NOT TIME TRAVEL BUT TRANSMIGRATING/ISEKAI-RETURN SOMETHING
The grammar was bad but not to the point you throw your phone. I like how the first simulator are The Demon Slayers👍
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Bro, This fanfic is quite interesting. I usually don't like these fanfics with Life Simulator, but this one managed to attract me and keep me very excited
its little better than mtl, but only a little , theres a huge problem with " He, She , Her , Him , they " .... theres others problem too, but its a translation, ex, too many monologues, almost to none human interaction
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Aunque la traducción no es perfecta, la historia esta bastante buena, me la leí toda de seguido. Lo único es que el harem se está haciendo demasiado grande, lo cual no es muy bueno.
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author if he goes to no game no life please also send him to the past (no game no life zero) so he can get weapons and meet past characters and maybe make himself a dues ex-machina because all these "stay human or meat based creature" is getting boring. p.s. just my opinion.
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A very cool novel.Special respect for the character of the protagonist. There's action, there's romance, there's a harem and a system - perfect! I read it in one breath. Looking forward to the next chapters~[img=update]
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This fanfic is completely perfect, At first I thought he would hook up with a girl once and in the next simulation he wouldn't try to get close to her, But this final concept of the harem turned out really well
Revelar Spoiler
In chapter 140 Author tells about rama and Sita (Ramayan). First of all don't criticize without knowing anything.If your free and had no work to do the suck Xi Jinping bick ( you just read a wrong word). China piece (A word used to represent waste) I will give you the reason-------> Lord Rama didn't reject Sita, but he did send her into exile in the forest because of the demands of his dharma as a king: Raja dharma: Rama's duty as a king required him to respect the view that Sita was not pure and innocent. Setting an example: Rama wanted to show his subjects that he was not a slave to a woman and that he was willing to make personal sacrifices for them. Protecting society: Rama's actions were meant to protect ethics and order in society. Rama knew that Sita was innocent, but he had to make these difficult decisions. Some say that Rama's actions ensured that Sita went down in history as a woman of unquestionable chastity. He couldn't give up the throne to be with mata sita as that would set the example that it was fine to abandon one's duties for family. So he had to send her into exile. It was as much Sita mata's dharma as a queen to give up her status as it was Rama's .
Very good fan fiction. I would like the author to translate new chapters faster. .. .. .. ..
No livro original tá completo, só falta traduzir, é uma pena que tenha parado aq .................. _______<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
I like the premise and I’m defenitely enjoying reading this, but I feel like the writing quality gets worse in later chapters and I’m worried with how strong the mc is becoming the story might get boring in the near future. I’m hoping it doesn’t and the author has a plan
Good novel I hope that when in mondaji the MCs will include Shiro yasha and Halloween As mc woman, It would be great because the setting in NgnL and campione, MC has the spirituality of gods and demon kings
It's an amazing read, a bit mundane though still great at the start but it really gets going fast, contains unique elements and exciting scenes - a weak-to-strong story where the MC becomes OP pretty quickly, but because of the nature of the story he can always have a challenge, though he doesn't remain weak for long. Oh yeah, he's also not a pushover or bootlicker, it doesn't have stereotypes of people like the governments scheming and thinking they can control the MC and it isn't unrealistic in conversations. The names of some perks he gets in the simulations and other small aspects may be a bit off-putting at first, but it's not too bad.
minus, the updates, everything's a 5-star rating from me. i dont think ive encountered this type of simulation system in which theres a plot device on why it was given to the mc, which creates a good background for the world in itself, and the story telling even in the simulation is pretty impressive, and how the story revolves around the simulated and irl interactions. though the caveat would probably be on how the mc will manage the harem tag because of the current list of heroines from the simulated an real world, its going to be an interesting experience to see how the author will write their stuff for the story. if you want a fic with good writing and story, i suggest you give this a try.
Well, the fanfiction idea is good, but the more you read, the less it makes sense. MC is a genius who is not a genius. Smart but stupid at the same time. You can also drink water from the pages of the book - there are SO many typical Chinese expressions and self-praise. All characters other than the MC are empty puppets, designed to fill in the text with letters and words, continuing to constantly praise the MC and marvel at his strength. The keyword of this fanfic is "mediocrity", which will almost certainly not get any better. I finished.
Can someone please translate this to readable English, I like simulation systems but I can’t read this without getting a headache.
AUTHOR STOP MISLEADING PEOPLE. THIS IS NOT TIME TRAVEL BUT TRANSMIGRATING/ISEKAI-RETURN SOMETHING
The grammar was bad but not to the point you throw your phone. I like how the first simulator are The Demon Slayers👍
Revelar Spoiler Bro, This fanfic is quite interesting. I usually don't like these fanfics with Life Simulator, but this one managed to attract me and keep me very excited
its little better than mtl, but only a little , theres a huge problem with " He, She , Her , Him , they " .... theres others problem too, but its a translation, ex, too many monologues, almost to none human interaction
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Aunque la traducción no es perfecta, la historia esta bastante buena, me la leí toda de seguido. Lo único es que el harem se está haciendo demasiado grande, lo cual no es muy bueno.
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author if he goes to no game no life please also send him to the past (no game no life zero) so he can get weapons and meet past characters and maybe make himself a dues ex-machina because all these "stay human or meat based creature" is getting boring. p.s. just my opinion.
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A very cool novel.Special respect for the character of the protagonist. There's action, there's romance, there's a harem and a system - perfect! I read it in one breath. Looking forward to the next chapters~[img=update]
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This fanfic is completely perfect, At first I thought he would hook up with a girl once and in the next simulation he wouldn't try to get close to her, But this final concept of the harem turned out really well
Revelar Spoiler 
In chapter 140 Author tells about rama and Sita (Ramayan). First of all don't criticize without knowing anything.If your free and had no work to do the suck Xi Jinping bick ( you just read a wrong word). China piece (A word used to represent waste) I will give you the reason-------> Lord Rama didn't reject Sita, but he did send her into exile in the forest because of the demands of his dharma as a king: Raja dharma: Rama's duty as a king required him to respect the view that Sita was not pure and innocent. Setting an example: Rama wanted to show his subjects that he was not a slave to a woman and that he was willing to make personal sacrifices for them. Protecting society: Rama's actions were meant to protect ethics and order in society. Rama knew that Sita was innocent, but he had to make these difficult decisions. Some say that Rama's actions ensured that Sita went down in history as a woman of unquestionable chastity. He couldn't give up the throne to be with mata sita as that would set the example that it was fine to abandon one's duties for family. So he had to send her into exile. It was as much Sita mata's dharma as a queen to give up her status as it was Rama's .