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Great story. Very original compare to lots of novel read. Keep up the good writing.
I think this story emphasizes the sign attached by an unknown author I was in my classroom in the 1960s
There is definitely too much filler. Additionally, the story has gotten lost in the weeds somewhere out in left field. It seems to have seriously lost sight of the original premise as presented in the synopsis. I have read through chapter 580 because I had high hopes for this story but it is not even meeting my lowest expectations. It started out pretty decent but has gone downhill alot as the filler has increased. I must point out that the updates with new chapters occur very regularly and seem to be coming in at least one or more times every day. However, it is feeling like what we are getting is just some stuff to provide word count while the author is waiting for inspiration about where to take the story. Unfortunately both my time and my coins are limited, so I am dropping and looking for something that will give more 'value' for my time and coins. I still like the story and may come back at a later date and check reviews to see if it starts to march along again but for now it is not giving any meaningful content that advances the story described in the synopsis.
good enough. the only complaint i have is that the chapters are short. why didnt the writer grouped same titled chapters into one chapter?
The story is quite good and fun despite the long build up....(Up to 200+ chapters to match the title) MC has this cheat that can make him more focus or enlightened that enable him to learn skill better
The story is pretty good, but the author is trying to make the most money possible by spreading out each chapter by 5 to 10 additional chapters, all with the same name. The story isn’t about hiding away, but the character immediately starts killing people, once he gets powers.
another cliche chinese novel with the stuck up , goody shoe protagonist who has the blood churning urge to help every woman he comes across.
I can't tell if this is simply amateur writing, bad translation, or this was written by Ai. if it's amateur writing, hopefully you will improve. if it's a bad translation, it will hopefully you can fix it. if it's ai, please do a little bit of editing because the ai isn't that good yet and still needs a human touch and editing.
I read this already in the raw, I kinda enjoying it untill it talked about other countries and boy I have no problem with over nationalism but explicitly mock and insult other countries and their religion is too much for me, and no I'm not from those country or the religion but that was very racist. so no I don't recommend it.
novel sidetracked/ too much filler by the end of free chapters, if this goes on then its gonna be bad.
As someone kindly said before me: Too much filler. Beyond that the story is taking an annoying direction(Personal Opinion).
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Fairly decent. I'm looking forward to seeing where the story goes... just has to make it past the trial reads and get fully translated.
The author had a good idea and concept for a urban novel. But unfortunately, execution fell flat on the face. We have a person that transmigrated to a replica Earth where the only difference is streaming was the rage. MC is about graduate college and decides to give streaming a chance with flicking poker cards as a weapon. His cheat is that he enters an enlightened state that allows him to learn faster and do more damage. The problem with this novel is that the author draws out mini arcs for dozens of chapters when it can be finished in two. How? By giving side characters lots of screen time with chatting about stuff. Even characters you know that will die off soon are given chapters upon chapters of conversation time. This is the filler that other reviewers are talking about and makes the reader get bored. One last thing is that this isn't really a human translation but AI/MTL translation. It's not a big deal but some paragraphs looked weird to me so when I checked the raws, the translation was a literal translation that MTL often does, instead of translating the slang or the abbreviated Chinese characters. To help you understand, in English, we say "what's up?" as a greeting and the MTL would translate it to "what is up there?" Anyway, give the novel a try but don't spend coins.
Great story. Very original compare to lots of novel read. Keep up the good writing.
I think this story emphasizes the sign attached by an unknown author I was in my classroom in the 1960s
There is definitely too much filler. Additionally, the story has gotten lost in the weeds somewhere out in left field. It seems to have seriously lost sight of the original premise as presented in the synopsis. I have read through chapter 580 because I had high hopes for this story but it is not even meeting my lowest expectations. It started out pretty decent but has gone downhill alot as the filler has increased. I must point out that the updates with new chapters occur very regularly and seem to be coming in at least one or more times every day. However, it is feeling like what we are getting is just some stuff to provide word count while the author is waiting for inspiration about where to take the story. Unfortunately both my time and my coins are limited, so I am dropping and looking for something that will give more 'value' for my time and coins. I still like the story and may come back at a later date and check reviews to see if it starts to march along again but for now it is not giving any meaningful content that advances the story described in the synopsis.
good enough. the only complaint i have is that the chapters are short. why didnt the writer grouped same titled chapters into one chapter?
The story is quite good and fun despite the long build up....(Up to 200+ chapters to match the title) MC has this cheat that can make him more focus or enlightened that enable him to learn skill better
The story is pretty good, but the author is trying to make the most money possible by spreading out each chapter by 5 to 10 additional chapters, all with the same name. The story isn’t about hiding away, but the character immediately starts killing people, once he gets powers.
another cliche chinese novel with the stuck up , goody shoe protagonist who has the blood churning urge to help every woman he comes across.
I can't tell if this is simply amateur writing, bad translation, or this was written by Ai. if it's amateur writing, hopefully you will improve. if it's a bad translation, it will hopefully you can fix it. if it's ai, please do a little bit of editing because the ai isn't that good yet and still needs a human touch and editing.
I read this already in the raw, I kinda enjoying it untill it talked about other countries and boy I have no problem with over nationalism but explicitly mock and insult other countries and their religion is too much for me, and no I'm not from those country or the religion but that was very racist. so no I don't recommend it.
novel sidetracked/ too much filler by the end of free chapters, if this goes on then its gonna be bad.
As someone kindly said before me: Too much filler. Beyond that the story is taking an annoying direction(Personal Opinion).
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Fairly decent. I'm looking forward to seeing where the story goes... just has to make it past the trial reads and get fully translated.
The author had a good idea and concept for a urban novel. But unfortunately, execution fell flat on the face. We have a person that transmigrated to a replica Earth where the only difference is streaming was the rage. MC is about graduate college and decides to give streaming a chance with flicking poker cards as a weapon. His cheat is that he enters an enlightened state that allows him to learn faster and do more damage. The problem with this novel is that the author draws out mini arcs for dozens of chapters when it can be finished in two. How? By giving side characters lots of screen time with chatting about stuff. Even characters you know that will die off soon are given chapters upon chapters of conversation time. This is the filler that other reviewers are talking about and makes the reader get bored. One last thing is that this isn't really a human translation but AI/MTL translation. It's not a big deal but some paragraphs looked weird to me so when I checked the raws, the translation was a literal translation that MTL often does, instead of translating the slang or the abbreviated Chinese characters. To help you understand, in English, we say "what's up?" as a greeting and the MTL would translate it to "what is up there?" Anyway, give the novel a try but don't spend coins.