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This novel just made me discover that i don't like two mc setting, feels like ntr to me😑
I've never read it other than the synopsis, and the MC is gay you can't convince me other than that From what I understood from some reveiws and the Author comments The MC is a "Friend" to the OG MC of the game and he is even teaching him how not to be a simp according to the Author so what does that mean other tha him helping him get a harem!? Very unfortunate since this could’ve been a story I would love to read but it seems even the Author himself doesn't know what he is writing
besides 2 protagonists, our protagonist helps the other to get with other girls... bro, I'm out 🤙🏻👍🏻🤙🏻👍🏻🤙🏻👍🏻🤙🏻👍🏻🤙🏻👍🏻🤙🏻👍🏻🤙🏻
Revelar Spoiler
**Review up to chapter 290** Is the novel worth it? It definitely is, it has high quality ‘Plot’ combined with many interesting characters that tickle all the kinks… The power system is quite fun and I like how it somehow blends perfectly into a modern fantasy world without breaking the feel of it(‘ A dude that’s committed to building his harem by just cruising thru life’). You won’t get bored reading and another huge plus for me is that it looks we are in for the long run. **SPOILER, maybe?** I do have some advice to elevate the novel before it goes to the point of no return… I feel that with the last ~70 chapters the novel derailed a bit from the actual plot compared to the beginning. It’s sort of heading into short ‘stories’ around 1 heroine at a time instead of that seamless flow of events that it had, not like it’s a bad thing since there are many heroines to address(rather I liked it very much… cough) but to keep things fresh and entertaining a proper timeline of events is better. It would make the novel move at a slower pace but I think it’s necessary so that some heroines won’t be left out. Ultimately my advice is to pace the plot better and not rush things too much, I’m not talking about the events around the heroines but more like the events in between. *** Anyways, good job Author! I’m excited for what’s to come The novel is definitely a hidden gem ✅ 9/10
meh... not stealing others women like it's going to be worst experience and not worth much of mc ain't even stealing others harem
Very disappointing, the synopsis is poisonous, but I read it hoping that the novel would not be the same. But it is the same senseless fantasy of many authors, there is no novelty, there is no plot Interesting, typical female characters. Anyway, rubbish.
Honestly I don't know how to describe this feeling that I am getting while reading this book but If I have to put my finger on it then it would be UNCOMFORTABLE I mean a lot uncomfortable 😖 At first it was progressing well and nice when there was only one MC but then came our OG and that's where I started feeling weird, How MC teaches OG to make his own harem and how he even helps him. And then when Ayumi (a sub heroine) came in the picture and that's where my patience wore thin. I mean just look at how our MC (he himself) helped her (sub heroine) realise her fetish (being cuck queen) with OG. In my opinion it would have been best ( at least better than now) if you have let OG's story progress WITHOUT MC interference at all if you really were trying to create two MC's kinda story tho it would have been perfect if there was only one MC. There are a lot other things I would like to say but I will stop here as it will discourage other readers To Author: A question for you, suppose you were a READER of this story (not Author), how do you think you would feel when you liked our MC (story wise) and Ayumi (literally) both, and suddenly there is a third person (OG) who f*** Ayumi huh?....I don't think it would be anything less for what I am feeling currently i.e., only if you don't have any weird fetish LOL Sorry But I don't think I can stay in this journey with you any longer tho keep up the good work.
Feels mid and doesn't do anything groundbreaking. If you've read some then you read it all.
Overall a disappointing read. Standard transmigration novel where the MC arrives in a world based on a Eroge game and of course he is the villain. The story itself was just to long in development, starting at him arriving at 5 years of age, but it dragged on through school years etc. after chapter 41 I threw it in. Initially the MCs (villain) goal was to save the heroines and sub-heroines from bad endings if not selected by the protagonist, think it was 4-5 Heroines and 3 sub-heroines, when out of the blue comes another transmigrator who also knows of this game and they team up splitting the girls between them. Mind you, both transmigrators are still young, oh and the second transmigrator is a girl (but maybe past life a guy, no idea). So 2 young kids are plotting, even discussing murder and later the MC actually incinerated a number of homeless bums. Yeh he prevented a future event happening but in my thoughts if he knew what was to happen then im pretty sure there were other ways to get around this episode. Still it happened and it really was kinda offputting. Anyways, the story was, in my mind, nothing exciting and read almost like a child’s story. I forget that a lot of Japanese novels tend to be rather formal and stiff in their delivery, which didn’t do this any favours. It was simply to childish and failed to deliver something that can capture a readers attention. Tl;dr - Try elsewhere for something more engrossing.
Well story seems to be good but since I don't like 2 mc setting and someone else having harem other than mc, I will not buy paid chaps iykyk. Anyway if you don't mind 2mc with each having their own harem then give it a try.
I haven't read the story, but when I read the synopsis, where the author mentioned that MC will not steal the others harem. So in this situation the author should at least have Little common sense, to keep a spoiler chapter where all the harem of our MC will be mentioned, so that the readers do not get confused at any point by mistaking someone else's women as MC's future girl, only for them to feel cucked later on. Stupid author
came back and am very glad i did author great work and all i can give as of now is powerstones startin tmrw i gave dem away already
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Although the MC is good , but how can one story have 2 mc , you are trying to create 2 mc , which is very for every Story .In any story there can be one mc . Other can be supporting characters or side characters
not my book my reason is Mc(of the book) was passive for along time not going after any heroine or better than books mc but the author writing is on point and the story very slow to progress not my book but good luck.
its interesting I'll try this after i read the *MY THREE WIVES ARE BEAUTIFUL VAMPIRE*
Hanya menambahkan review untuk menyemangati penulis agar tidak berkecil hati dan menghentikannya menulis dan berkarir........................................................................................
Hello, I am creating a platform for authors and would love for you to join. There is a 70% compensation for authors from all revenue and a contest at my webpage -> (Zen ithnovels), along with a discord at the bottom of the webpage. I hope to see you there
hey author I have a request please can you not make Mc pervert it has great storyline please don't destroy it by give Mc disgusting fetishist
From what I have read, this novel is unique, this novel has some dark things in it and reading that is not easy for the heart I am only reading this, so I can see Mc become a good person and save the heroinesBut if that didn't occur then I am dropping this
noice 🥵.. I read six chapters it is good . 18+ old readers recommended .. but update is slow, character is okay, world building okay but story is unique and interesting 😙
Interesting synopsis, I like evil mcs so the idea of him going to be good is not really fun for me, but I ll give it a go. Looks like there is some culture. And a big + for no ntr, thats for those who like green.
This novel just made me discover that i don't like two mc setting, feels like ntr to me😑
I've never read it other than the synopsis, and the MC is gay you can't convince me other than that From what I understood from some reveiws and the Author comments The MC is a "Friend" to the OG MC of the game and he is even teaching him how not to be a simp according to the Author so what does that mean other tha him helping him get a harem!? Very unfortunate since this could’ve been a story I would love to read but it seems even the Author himself doesn't know what he is writing
besides 2 protagonists, our protagonist helps the other to get with other girls... bro, I'm out 🤙🏻👍🏻🤙🏻👍🏻🤙🏻👍🏻🤙🏻👍🏻🤙🏻👍🏻🤙🏻👍🏻🤙🏻
Revelar Spoiler **Review up to chapter 290** Is the novel worth it? It definitely is, it has high quality ‘Plot’ combined with many interesting characters that tickle all the kinks… The power system is quite fun and I like how it somehow blends perfectly into a modern fantasy world without breaking the feel of it(‘ A dude that’s committed to building his harem by just cruising thru life’). You won’t get bored reading and another huge plus for me is that it looks we are in for the long run. **SPOILER, maybe?** I do have some advice to elevate the novel before it goes to the point of no return… I feel that with the last ~70 chapters the novel derailed a bit from the actual plot compared to the beginning. It’s sort of heading into short ‘stories’ around 1 heroine at a time instead of that seamless flow of events that it had, not like it’s a bad thing since there are many heroines to address(rather I liked it very much… cough) but to keep things fresh and entertaining a proper timeline of events is better. It would make the novel move at a slower pace but I think it’s necessary so that some heroines won’t be left out. Ultimately my advice is to pace the plot better and not rush things too much, I’m not talking about the events around the heroines but more like the events in between. *** Anyways, good job Author! I’m excited for what’s to come The novel is definitely a hidden gem ✅ 9/10
meh... not stealing others women like it's going to be worst experience and not worth much of mc ain't even stealing others harem
Very disappointing, the synopsis is poisonous, but I read it hoping that the novel would not be the same. But it is the same senseless fantasy of many authors, there is no novelty, there is no plot Interesting, typical female characters. Anyway, rubbish.
Honestly I don't know how to describe this feeling that I am getting while reading this book but If I have to put my finger on it then it would be UNCOMFORTABLE I mean a lot uncomfortable 😖 At first it was progressing well and nice when there was only one MC but then came our OG and that's where I started feeling weird, How MC teaches OG to make his own harem and how he even helps him. And then when Ayumi (a sub heroine) came in the picture and that's where my patience wore thin. I mean just look at how our MC (he himself) helped her (sub heroine) realise her fetish (being cuck queen) with OG. In my opinion it would have been best ( at least better than now) if you have let OG's story progress WITHOUT MC interference at all if you really were trying to create two MC's kinda story tho it would have been perfect if there was only one MC. There are a lot other things I would like to say but I will stop here as it will discourage other readers To Author: A question for you, suppose you were a READER of this story (not Author), how do you think you would feel when you liked our MC (story wise) and Ayumi (literally) both, and suddenly there is a third person (OG) who f*** Ayumi huh?....I don't think it would be anything less for what I am feeling currently i.e., only if you don't have any weird fetish LOL Sorry But I don't think I can stay in this journey with you any longer tho keep up the good work.
Feels mid and doesn't do anything groundbreaking. If you've read some then you read it all.
Overall a disappointing read. Standard transmigration novel where the MC arrives in a world based on a Eroge game and of course he is the villain. The story itself was just to long in development, starting at him arriving at 5 years of age, but it dragged on through school years etc. after chapter 41 I threw it in. Initially the MCs (villain) goal was to save the heroines and sub-heroines from bad endings if not selected by the protagonist, think it was 4-5 Heroines and 3 sub-heroines, when out of the blue comes another transmigrator who also knows of this game and they team up splitting the girls between them. Mind you, both transmigrators are still young, oh and the second transmigrator is a girl (but maybe past life a guy, no idea). So 2 young kids are plotting, even discussing murder and later the MC actually incinerated a number of homeless bums. Yeh he prevented a future event happening but in my thoughts if he knew what was to happen then im pretty sure there were other ways to get around this episode. Still it happened and it really was kinda offputting. Anyways, the story was, in my mind, nothing exciting and read almost like a child’s story. I forget that a lot of Japanese novels tend to be rather formal and stiff in their delivery, which didn’t do this any favours. It was simply to childish and failed to deliver something that can capture a readers attention. Tl;dr - Try elsewhere for something more engrossing.
Well story seems to be good but since I don't like 2 mc setting and someone else having harem other than mc, I will not buy paid chaps iykyk. Anyway if you don't mind 2mc with each having their own harem then give it a try.
I haven't read the story, but when I read the synopsis, where the author mentioned that MC will not steal the others harem. So in this situation the author should at least have Little common sense, to keep a spoiler chapter where all the harem of our MC will be mentioned, so that the readers do not get confused at any point by mistaking someone else's women as MC's future girl, only for them to feel cucked later on. Stupid author
came back and am very glad i did author great work and all i can give as of now is powerstones startin tmrw i gave dem away already
MORE!!!!!!!MORE!!!!!!!MORE!!!!!!!MORE!!!!!!!MORE!!!!!!!MORE!!!!!!!MORE!!!!!!!MORE!!!!!!!MORE!!!!!!!MORE!!!!!!!MORE!!!!!!!MORE!!!!!!!MORE!!!!!!!MORE!!!!!!!MORE!!!!!!!MORE!!!!!!!MORE!!!!!!!MORE!!!!!!!MORE!!!!!!!MORE!!!!!!!MORE!!!!!!!MORE!!!!!!!MORE!!!!!!!
Although the MC is good , but how can one story have 2 mc , you are trying to create 2 mc , which is very for every Story .In any story there can be one mc . Other can be supporting characters or side characters
not my book my reason is Mc(of the book) was passive for along time not going after any heroine or better than books mc but the author writing is on point and the story very slow to progress not my book but good luck.
its interesting I'll try this after i read the *MY THREE WIVES ARE BEAUTIFUL VAMPIRE*
Hanya menambahkan review untuk menyemangati penulis agar tidak berkecil hati dan menghentikannya menulis dan berkarir........................................................................................
Hello, I am creating a platform for authors and would love for you to join. There is a 70% compensation for authors from all revenue and a contest at my webpage -> (Zen ithnovels), along with a discord at the bottom of the webpage. I hope to see you there
hey author I have a request please can you not make Mc pervert it has great storyline please don't destroy it by give Mc disgusting fetishist
From what I have read, this novel is unique, this novel has some dark things in it and reading that is not easy for the heart I am only reading this, so I can see Mc become a good person and save the heroinesBut if that didn't occur then I am dropping this
noice 🥵.. I read six chapters it is good . 18+ old readers recommended .. but update is slow, character is okay, world building okay but story is unique and interesting 😙
Interesting synopsis, I like evil mcs so the idea of him going to be good is not really fun for me, but I ll give it a go. Looks like there is some culture. And a big + for no ntr, thats for those who like green.
A great novel keep up the work............