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Uma das (se não a) melhores histórias que já li. É raro ter fanfics que não sejam repetitivas e entediantes, principalmente com viagens entre universos paralelos.
The main character is a creep , The wishes are trash and overall it's very cringy
The mc lies every 2 sec to the person he claimes to love, he is also a stalker and a creep.
Hello Author Love your originals on Zetro Translations, I hope this fanfic would be interesting as the others, highly recommend his originals, also hope that there going some Fluff, possessive love, and smuts. So yea hope you continue this work Until at least Marriage of the Mc
I just typed it randomly........Nothing's gonna be a good year old can you make the payment of rs and are under sea where the unknowingly very good morning sir dhard ke liye the na tum jo jo jo jo jo jo
Honestly, the storyline and MC development is jus awesome 🤩! It shows how our author is so imaginative and creative to create such a blast of a fan-fic 💥. I’d really wish to see this in a manga version ✨
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don't have to be truthful in a relationship, but your lies have gone too far. that pretty much affects the future if you're not stoobid enuf to realize it.
The quality is decent with a few grammatical errors and typos but nothing major. The story starts out well but it soon gets disturbing, atleast for me. Mc is obsessive of the female lead and a compulsive liar with a tendency to stalk her. Author does not bother to explain or expand on the canon plot that much and mainly focuses on the romance and slice of life aspect, if you can even call it romance instead of pure deceit and manipulation. In short; premise was great but execution fell flat.
Para el que no le gusta el Harem, esto es Harem...........................................................................................................................
Great Story[img=recommend][img=recommend] Great MC [img=recommend][img=recommend] Good Romance [img=recommend][img=recommend] Good Action [img=recommend] just a bit of grammatical mistakes which is common, a solid 4.8 stars
na minha opinião, é bastante clichê, não clichê bom, clichê puro, claro que não ajuda o protagonista ser uma espécie de quimera de habilidades soltas, piora mais ainda na minha opinião, o fato de ele ser japones, em solo leveling, não é bom( eu acho que é como um protagonista japonês na marvel) sem falar que ele poderia ter mais habidades centrais, como um sistema como o do Sung-jin-wong(não sei escrever o nome dele), mas com habilidades espaciais ao invés de sombras, para ter um sinergia com os six-eyes.
i really like the idea of the plots plus jinah as the heroin as i feel that in the original jinho and jinah's story seemed forced or something
An excellent fanfic, very creative and fun, I don't like absurdly powerful characters from the beginning but this one is very good. I wish he had written from the moment he was born and the pace of the story was slower. I loved the story
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The MC randomly gains new powers not correlating to the original wishes. The romance is very big in this story, however I can’t read any more after feeling like the MC is a manipulative stalker who for some odd reason is just as overpowered as some other people such as the Shadow monarch. Short version. Writing is pretty good, the MC creeps me out. Romance is horrible as the MC is a stalker. Some people will like this but, i will not be going on from here
Revelar Spoiler
Woahhhhh, that was a mind blowing read in all honesty. The grammar isn't the best of the best but its certainly readable so thats a plus. The mc is really likable and so are the other characters, couldn't get enough of it but... unfortunately every good thing eventually comes to an end. Just gonna save this in my library and come back later.. You guys comment here to remind me of this Fan-Fic-
I swear author if you drop this I will unalive you... I swear author if you drop this I will unalive you... I swear author if you drop this I will unalive you... I swear author if you drop this I will unalive you... I swear author if you drop this I will unalive you... I swear author if you drop this I will unalive you... I swear author if you drop this I will unalive you... I swear author if you drop this I will unalive you... I swear author if you drop this I will unalive you... I swear author if you drop this I will unalive you... I swear author if you drop this I will unalive you...
simply amazing, how is it possible for the author to describe the personalities and lines of the characters so well? the pace of the novel is quite tasty, really, what an amazing novel to read😍😍😍😍😍
Хороший, фанфик или роман. В любом случае не важно когда речь заходит об интересном чтиве. Которое хочешь перечитывать, снова и снова. Очень надеюсь, что вы не забросите данный проект и доведëте его до логического финала. Буду ждать с нетерпением!!!!😊
story is good and interesting till date but got a problem and that is........This story need mass release
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I shamelessly tapped on all 5 stars. No holding back there. Anyway, this is my first review of my fiction and I would like to first inform you that this fiction is a solo romance and not a harem. The story is slow paced and I am trying to add as many details as I could so if you like fast-paced stories, I am sorry man but this is not the place. Upload frequency is a little inconsistent but I am working on it so maybe you would see my fiction being refreshed on your homepage more often now. Alright then, that's that. If you have any queries you can comment down here, or ask me on my discord. Peace out.
Uma das (se não a) melhores histórias que já li. É raro ter fanfics que não sejam repetitivas e entediantes, principalmente com viagens entre universos paralelos.
The main character is a creep , The wishes are trash and overall it's very cringy
The mc lies every 2 sec to the person he claimes to love, he is also a stalker and a creep.
Hello Author Love your originals on Zetro Translations, I hope this fanfic would be interesting as the others, highly recommend his originals, also hope that there going some Fluff, possessive love, and smuts. So yea hope you continue this work Until at least Marriage of the Mc
I just typed it randomly........Nothing's gonna be a good year old can you make the payment of rs and are under sea where the unknowingly very good morning sir dhard ke liye the na tum jo jo jo jo jo jo
Honestly, the storyline and MC development is jus awesome 🤩! It shows how our author is so imaginative and creative to create such a blast of a fan-fic 💥. I’d really wish to see this in a manga version ✨
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
don't have to be truthful in a relationship, but your lies have gone too far. that pretty much affects the future if you're not stoobid enuf to realize it.
The quality is decent with a few grammatical errors and typos but nothing major. The story starts out well but it soon gets disturbing, atleast for me. Mc is obsessive of the female lead and a compulsive liar with a tendency to stalk her. Author does not bother to explain or expand on the canon plot that much and mainly focuses on the romance and slice of life aspect, if you can even call it romance instead of pure deceit and manipulation. In short; premise was great but execution fell flat.
Para el que no le gusta el Harem, esto es Harem...........................................................................................................................
Great Story[img=recommend][img=recommend] Great MC [img=recommend][img=recommend] Good Romance [img=recommend][img=recommend] Good Action [img=recommend] just a bit of grammatical mistakes which is common, a solid 4.8 stars
na minha opinião, é bastante clichê, não clichê bom, clichê puro, claro que não ajuda o protagonista ser uma espécie de quimera de habilidades soltas, piora mais ainda na minha opinião, o fato de ele ser japones, em solo leveling, não é bom( eu acho que é como um protagonista japonês na marvel) sem falar que ele poderia ter mais habidades centrais, como um sistema como o do Sung-jin-wong(não sei escrever o nome dele), mas com habilidades espaciais ao invés de sombras, para ter um sinergia com os six-eyes.
i really like the idea of the plots plus jinah as the heroin as i feel that in the original jinho and jinah's story seemed forced or something
An excellent fanfic, very creative and fun, I don't like absurdly powerful characters from the beginning but this one is very good. I wish he had written from the moment he was born and the pace of the story was slower. I loved the story
Мне нравится 👍 😁[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The MC randomly gains new powers not correlating to the original wishes. The romance is very big in this story, however I can’t read any more after feeling like the MC is a manipulative stalker who for some odd reason is just as overpowered as some other people such as the Shadow monarch. Short version. Writing is pretty good, the MC creeps me out. Romance is horrible as the MC is a stalker. Some people will like this but, i will not be going on from here
Revelar Spoiler Woahhhhh, that was a mind blowing read in all honesty. The grammar isn't the best of the best but its certainly readable so thats a plus. The mc is really likable and so are the other characters, couldn't get enough of it but... unfortunately every good thing eventually comes to an end. Just gonna save this in my library and come back later.. You guys comment here to remind me of this Fan-Fic-
I swear author if you drop this I will unalive you... I swear author if you drop this I will unalive you... I swear author if you drop this I will unalive you... I swear author if you drop this I will unalive you... I swear author if you drop this I will unalive you... I swear author if you drop this I will unalive you... I swear author if you drop this I will unalive you... I swear author if you drop this I will unalive you... I swear author if you drop this I will unalive you... I swear author if you drop this I will unalive you... I swear author if you drop this I will unalive you...
simply amazing, how is it possible for the author to describe the personalities and lines of the characters so well? the pace of the novel is quite tasty, really, what an amazing novel to read😍😍😍😍😍
Хороший, фанфик или роман. В любом случае не важно когда речь заходит об интересном чтиве. Которое хочешь перечитывать, снова и снова. Очень надеюсь, что вы не забросите данный проект и доведëте его до логического финала. Буду ждать с нетерпением!!!!😊
story is good and interesting till date but got a problem and that is........This story need mass release
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I shamelessly tapped on all 5 stars. No holding back there. Anyway, this is my first review of my fiction and I would like to first inform you that this fiction is a solo romance and not a harem. The story is slow paced and I am trying to add as many details as I could so if you like fast-paced stories, I am sorry man but this is not the place. Upload frequency is a little inconsistent but I am working on it so maybe you would see my fiction being refreshed on your homepage more often now. Alright then, that's that. If you have any queries you can comment down here, or ask me on my discord. Peace out.