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Hunter X Hunter: Nen Master

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Autor: RadicalAM

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Meet a young man named Jade Elrich born on August 10 1987 as he embarks on his journey through the famed hunter x Hunter world and the ever changing dark continent.

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All characters and original techniques are not owned by me except the MC his techniques and other characters created by me later on in the story.

Also I do not own the cover.

If you like the story so far let me know and it’ll encourage me to continue this thanks.

  1. RadicalAM
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RadicalAM

As this is my first novel any readers please advice me on mistakes I make throughout the novel. Anyways enjoy!. BTW, hope you dont mind my shameless review

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Jonathanjoestar

There are so many wrong things I don't know where to start. The pacing is horrible, the plot holes are massive and the rate at which the story is progressing is even worse. the amount of misinformation about nen in this novel makes this difficult to read as HxH fan. A simple google search could have fixed this. The characters are simple and one dimensional the descriptions are lacking and story in itself feels childish. This is clearly a newbie writer with no experience and no background so i can't really expect a masterpiece but this simply isn't good. maybe the author should start reading more good stories to understand how to write one before trying again.

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