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This novel has a lot of potential with its unique storyline, impeccable grammar, amazing characters and world building. I like how the author describes every single detail in a way that takes the reader inside the story. I am really intrigued by this story and can't wait to read what happens next. Keep writing, Author.
I don't really read books of this genre, but this one has me hooked. The writing style as we move into the character's development is really nice. Keep it up, author.
Well, well. I usually ain't one to view a book with heavy romance, but this one seems interesting. First, the good points: The world-building is top-class. Descriptive words conveyed what the setting is truly like. I like the royal atmosphere and this story allows me to experience that. Next, the not-so-good ones: I feel like many of the paragraphs are too long, and there are many punctuation errors. While the grammar is good, there are also too many repetitive pronouns. Still worth the read in my opinion. Check it out.
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To make the summary more effective, the writer could include a brief description of the main characters and their personalities. This would help readers better understand their actions and motivations
The plot of the story is quite interesting and keeps the reader engaged. The idea of switching identities adds a layer of complexity to the story and makes it more intriguing. However, the summary does not provide enough details about the characters or their motivations, which could make it harder for readers to connect with them.
your story is nice and the synopsis has a nice ring to it , the book is very descriptive and easy to imagine , to crown it all I love your book.
I loved the symbolism in the title that directly correlates with the pilot chapter. The flow of events was smooth and the conversations were vivid and realistic. The plot moves at a perfect pace where it leaves you hungry to read more wonderful book
I love the way the writer started the story, the curiosity to want to read more is definitely there... so far so good, I am already loving this romance book... please do keep on updating your masterpiece dear author 😊😊
i have not read all chapter but as for as I have read this is a interesting novel
i really enjoyed the whole royal kingdoms and their setup although i m skeptical of the sister i really feel for Elisha and wish she can fulfill her dream. The character of Hans could be a little more charming and charismatic but i liked how he was light-hearted and made the effort to visit her and wasn't cold. Over all this is a very nicely written and carried out book which didn't allow me to leave <3
The synopsis got me hooked then I checked out the chapters and I wasn't disappointed
Good synopsis! It definitely hooks the readers to check your novel out. As for the pacing, for me, it was a bit too fast? But I guess it makes sense since I'm a slow-burn type of reader. Overall, It's good! The plot is interesting, and your writing skills is great. Keep up the good work!
Your story was really good! Your writing style is captivating and makes it easy for the reader to understand the story. Your descriptions are vivid and the dialogue is perfect. I especially like how you portrayed the two princesses, Estella and Elesha. Your portrayal of them was great! I also appreciate the creative idea of using Princess Elesha as a substitute for her sister's marriage.
I would like to know the deeper side of Gerald. he could even be friends with that king or the villain among the four.
I've been following this novel for some time and I'm eleven chapters in, the writer has a unique take on romance, the plot is interesting but the updates are slow n the walls of text makes it difficult ro read on the app 🤔 Overall, the writer shows potential and this may be just the right story for you, keep posting writer can't wait to see what's coming next, all the best!
The sisters are written very well, there bond is inspiring. A great use of consistent metaphors helps weave the scenes into your mind. If commas could be used more often this story would be near flawless thus far.
The story has potential, a bit cliché but we will see as the story progresses. Well written, although I would like more explanation on things. Like the reason the MC would love her sister a lot which leads up to her make such decisions. The pace was good too, not too slow or fast. There's a some areas where it could be improved, to make the flow from each para/sentence to another more smooth. Still keep up the good work author!
A GREAT STORY WITH GREAT POTENTIAL, REALLY CAPTIVATING AND ENGAGING, BUT THE WRITING STYLE NEEDS IMPROVING. ALL IN ALL GREAT NOVEL, CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER
Great novel! only 9 chapters released but it has enormous potential. I really like it. :)
White Roses and Red Blood - the story has great potential, and the characters are well-developed. The dialogue is engaging, and the overall plot is captivating. The best thing I like in this novel was the style that author use to describe each character or conversation and interaction in each scene, some may not like it but I really like it this way, It was easy to read and easy to paint the image of each scene.
I usually read this type of love story. So from my experience I can say that the author have written well. Keep it up. Waiting for more chapters.
The premise of the novel has potential, and with careful attention to character development, world-building, pacing, and editing, it could be a great read. Keep writing and exploring the story's possibilities! Good Luck.
This novel is so good with a great writing quality and a great plot! I love the ML already since he is like a sweet person 💕💕 The first two chapters looks fast-paced but still good. Keep a good work author!
I'm amazed.the story has a a lot of potential i love the pilot and the characters and writing quality is good . I really like it . am waiting for next chapter 💜💕
As a Writer myself, I am quite impressed with your story flow and usage of words. I think I would keep this in my library for further updates. just don't disappoint me with frequent updates. Nice work author...Keep it up!
I love reading romance contemporary novels and this is the one which I am enjoying. I love such stories which start without any love and end loving each other dearly. your story is really interesting and enjoyable. keep writing and updating it. really loving it.
It's kind of reminds me a bit of the old movies and series about kingdom, marriage, court. It has potential to be a good novel. Isn't the usual kind of story I read and has some issues that could be fixed in order to improve the writing and structure in general. Grammar: There are some minor errors and some problems with the structure in general. I recommend you to use Grammarly and Wordtuner to fix some of them. Points that I'm missing and could improve the story: - Working more in the inner-thoughts of the characters, exposing feelings with mundane actions would be great. - Improving a bit of the world background to built up context. All in all, keep the good work :)
While this story is quite enjoyable, I feel there is some work needed before it can be considered a masterpiece. In terms of plot and characters, the story is perfect, the author able to show the characters personalities well as well as write engaging dialogue. The plot is also quite interesting and I say this as a fan of historical romance stories. My problem with the story comes in the form of grammar (I might be nitpicking here). There are a few sentences that seem to go on and on, without really having an exact subject. Not sure if that makes sense? There is also a lot of telling in this story which I feel messes up the writing style a little. I feel a lot of descriptions and information could be 'shown' instead, making for easy reading. Anyway, you've done a great job author, one or two problems here and there, but otherwise keep it up and keep improving.
This novel has a lot of potential with its unique storyline, impeccable grammar, amazing characters and world building. I like how the author describes every single detail in a way that takes the reader inside the story. I am really intrigued by this story and can't wait to read what happens next. Keep writing, Author.
I don't really read books of this genre, but this one has me hooked. The writing style as we move into the character's development is really nice. Keep it up, author.
Well, well. I usually ain't one to view a book with heavy romance, but this one seems interesting. First, the good points: The world-building is top-class. Descriptive words conveyed what the setting is truly like. I like the royal atmosphere and this story allows me to experience that. Next, the not-so-good ones: I feel like many of the paragraphs are too long, and there are many punctuation errors. While the grammar is good, there are also too many repetitive pronouns. Still worth the read in my opinion. Check it out.
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To make the summary more effective, the writer could include a brief description of the main characters and their personalities. This would help readers better understand their actions and motivations
The plot of the story is quite interesting and keeps the reader engaged. The idea of switching identities adds a layer of complexity to the story and makes it more intriguing. However, the summary does not provide enough details about the characters or their motivations, which could make it harder for readers to connect with them.
your story is nice and the synopsis has a nice ring to it , the book is very descriptive and easy to imagine , to crown it all I love your book.
I loved the symbolism in the title that directly correlates with the pilot chapter. The flow of events was smooth and the conversations were vivid and realistic. The plot moves at a perfect pace where it leaves you hungry to read more wonderful book
I love the way the writer started the story, the curiosity to want to read more is definitely there... so far so good, I am already loving this romance book... please do keep on updating your masterpiece dear author 😊😊
i have not read all chapter but as for as I have read this is a interesting novel
i really enjoyed the whole royal kingdoms and their setup although i m skeptical of the sister i really feel for Elisha and wish she can fulfill her dream. The character of Hans could be a little more charming and charismatic but i liked how he was light-hearted and made the effort to visit her and wasn't cold. Over all this is a very nicely written and carried out book which didn't allow me to leave <3
The synopsis got me hooked then I checked out the chapters and I wasn't disappointed
Good synopsis! It definitely hooks the readers to check your novel out. As for the pacing, for me, it was a bit too fast? But I guess it makes sense since I'm a slow-burn type of reader. Overall, It's good! The plot is interesting, and your writing skills is great. Keep up the good work!
Your story was really good! Your writing style is captivating and makes it easy for the reader to understand the story. Your descriptions are vivid and the dialogue is perfect. I especially like how you portrayed the two princesses, Estella and Elesha. Your portrayal of them was great! I also appreciate the creative idea of using Princess Elesha as a substitute for her sister's marriage.
I would like to know the deeper side of Gerald. he could even be friends with that king or the villain among the four.
I've been following this novel for some time and I'm eleven chapters in, the writer has a unique take on romance, the plot is interesting but the updates are slow n the walls of text makes it difficult ro read on the app 🤔 Overall, the writer shows potential and this may be just the right story for you, keep posting writer can't wait to see what's coming next, all the best!
The sisters are written very well, there bond is inspiring. A great use of consistent metaphors helps weave the scenes into your mind. If commas could be used more often this story would be near flawless thus far.
The story has potential, a bit cliché but we will see as the story progresses. Well written, although I would like more explanation on things. Like the reason the MC would love her sister a lot which leads up to her make such decisions. The pace was good too, not too slow or fast. There's a some areas where it could be improved, to make the flow from each para/sentence to another more smooth. Still keep up the good work author!
A GREAT STORY WITH GREAT POTENTIAL, REALLY CAPTIVATING AND ENGAGING, BUT THE WRITING STYLE NEEDS IMPROVING. ALL IN ALL GREAT NOVEL, CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER
Great novel! only 9 chapters released but it has enormous potential. I really like it. :)
White Roses and Red Blood - the story has great potential, and the characters are well-developed. The dialogue is engaging, and the overall plot is captivating. The best thing I like in this novel was the style that author use to describe each character or conversation and interaction in each scene, some may not like it but I really like it this way, It was easy to read and easy to paint the image of each scene.
I usually read this type of love story. So from my experience I can say that the author have written well. Keep it up. Waiting for more chapters.
The premise of the novel has potential, and with careful attention to character development, world-building, pacing, and editing, it could be a great read. Keep writing and exploring the story's possibilities! Good Luck.
This novel is so good with a great writing quality and a great plot! I love the ML already since he is like a sweet person 💕💕 The first two chapters looks fast-paced but still good. Keep a good work author!
I'm amazed.the story has a a lot of potential i love the pilot and the characters and writing quality is good . I really like it . am waiting for next chapter 💜💕
As a Writer myself, I am quite impressed with your story flow and usage of words. I think I would keep this in my library for further updates. just don't disappoint me with frequent updates. Nice work author...Keep it up!
I love reading romance contemporary novels and this is the one which I am enjoying. I love such stories which start without any love and end loving each other dearly. your story is really interesting and enjoyable. keep writing and updating it. really loving it.
It's kind of reminds me a bit of the old movies and series about kingdom, marriage, court. It has potential to be a good novel. Isn't the usual kind of story I read and has some issues that could be fixed in order to improve the writing and structure in general. Grammar: There are some minor errors and some problems with the structure in general. I recommend you to use Grammarly and Wordtuner to fix some of them. Points that I'm missing and could improve the story: - Working more in the inner-thoughts of the characters, exposing feelings with mundane actions would be great. - Improving a bit of the world background to built up context. All in all, keep the good work :)
While this story is quite enjoyable, I feel there is some work needed before it can be considered a masterpiece. In terms of plot and characters, the story is perfect, the author able to show the characters personalities well as well as write engaging dialogue. The plot is also quite interesting and I say this as a fan of historical romance stories. My problem with the story comes in the form of grammar (I might be nitpicking here). There are a few sentences that seem to go on and on, without really having an exact subject. Not sure if that makes sense? There is also a lot of telling in this story which I feel messes up the writing style a little. I feel a lot of descriptions and information could be 'shown' instead, making for easy reading. Anyway, you've done a great job author, one or two problems here and there, but otherwise keep it up and keep improving.