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please work on your character design why is mc so weak when he have been in constant fights for 10 years he even survived the hellish torture miraculously but can't voice his opinion
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Rly good story and characters but the author obviously stopped writing this book so it’s another book with no ending. Thank you author for wasting my time. Next time i will be more careful with author.
I just binge read these 100 chapters, and was devastated this I caught up. The book is so well written. I’ extremely pleased that there his a high chapter post rate cuz I need more and it’s at such and enticing part in the story!!! 😭😭😂😂 Keep up the amazing work and thank you for your gift to humanity 👏👏🙏
Great concept and world set! It seems a bit too fast at first, but its easy to catch up. It's smooth and enjoyable and it becomes more intricate as it goes. Loved the references too!
The novel is not bad but it just reminds me of shadow slave and it also very frustating that even after almost 60 chapters mc is still weaker than aurea
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I've been following this ongoing WebNovel for a while now and I have to say, it just keeps getting better and better. The author's writing is so captivating and the characters are so well-developed that I find myself emotionally invested in their journeys. The plot twists and turns are so unexpected and keep me guessing at every turn. I highly recommend this WebNovel to anyone who loves a good ongoing story!
Could be better with the world building but other than that it's a very interesting book, Good job.
The characters are pretty cool and the chapters are mostly void of grammar errors other then some sprinkled round. The plot is kinda confusing but seems to be getting better. It is a pretty nice read.
I simply enjoyed reading through the chapters, everything is so clear that it feels like you're watching a movie. The suspense is well timed and most importantly the MC has such a relatable personality. I highly recommend if you want a revenge and survival story
The story is nice and was up to standards. Just write more and will be a blast! More features will make it rise the masses. Anyways, good luck in your journey as an author. Learning is an everyday task for all of us. Kudos! [img=recommend]
please don't drop this novel😁😁 so far it's good and im really looking forward for more chapters
Yet another shameless author review! Right as I'm writing this review, I have over fifty chapters stockpiled, so I'll use my exclusive future insight to answer some easy questions, starting with the most logical: - "Hey Neph1s! What is this all about?" The novel revolves around Zenon, a carrier of both an important and dangerous Lineage that marks him as a threat to the higher beings, the Angels. He has to enter their own realm called the Layers and fight inside to become stronger and survive future threats. - "Cool! And what about Zenon?" Zenon is a pessimistic and sarcastic person, molded by a tragic past and a difficult present. Even so, he still can see the bright part of things with several experiences to work with. You'll like him! I hope... - "What about his abilities?! Will he be overpowered?" Trust me, Zenon is overpowered due to his Lineage. Same as anyone else with one. The difference is that he'll need to improve via skill and experience, slowly making him more powerful as time goes by. Think of it as a Souls game, you get better the more you fight enemies! - "I see... hmm, there's a romance tag? Romance time?!" The romance tag will have its own moments of course! But it'll be more of a slow burn to get the flames going (hehe). - "Perhaps... *whispering* harem?" *Loads gun* I'd rather make an unethical and immoral use of this gun than make a harem. Zenon will be surrounded by beauties, both female and male, but not in a romantic scenario. - "What about the updates?!" One per day, and if I see this is going well, two per day. - "I see you rated yourself five stars. Anything to say in your defense?" Your honor. If I may say so, this is one of the greatest novels I have ever thought of and written over the course of four years of learning. Even if they were unpublished, I am confident in the quality of the story and even more in its content. Formalities aside, enjoy the novel! Will be looking forward to your reviews!
The story has the potential to be really great and high in quality if it wasn't for 3 things. First, the grammar is a little off, but that's easily fixable and can be ignored. Second, the main character's personality becomes outright toxic while he's living in the shelter, but I think he's having some character development and fixing this problem. And third, the author gave a part of the main character's inheritance to the girl he was traveling with despite the fact that she is not a void carrier and the main character is the only known void carrier alive in the world today, this seems like self-sabotage or a deliberate attempt to anger the audience on the author's part.
please work on your character design why is mc so weak when he have been in constant fights for 10 years he even survived the hellish torture miraculously but can't voice his opinion
Revelar Spoiler Rly good story and characters but the author obviously stopped writing this book so it’s another book with no ending. Thank you author for wasting my time. Next time i will be more careful with author.
I just binge read these 100 chapters, and was devastated this I caught up. The book is so well written. I’ extremely pleased that there his a high chapter post rate cuz I need more and it’s at such and enticing part in the story!!! 😭😭😂😂 Keep up the amazing work and thank you for your gift to humanity 👏👏🙏
Great concept and world set! It seems a bit too fast at first, but its easy to catch up. It's smooth and enjoyable and it becomes more intricate as it goes. Loved the references too!
The novel is not bad but it just reminds me of shadow slave and it also very frustating that even after almost 60 chapters mc is still weaker than aurea
Revelar Spoiler I've been following this ongoing WebNovel for a while now and I have to say, it just keeps getting better and better. The author's writing is so captivating and the characters are so well-developed that I find myself emotionally invested in their journeys. The plot twists and turns are so unexpected and keep me guessing at every turn. I highly recommend this WebNovel to anyone who loves a good ongoing story!
Could be better with the world building but other than that it's a very interesting book, Good job.
The characters are pretty cool and the chapters are mostly void of grammar errors other then some sprinkled round. The plot is kinda confusing but seems to be getting better. It is a pretty nice read.
I simply enjoyed reading through the chapters, everything is so clear that it feels like you're watching a movie. The suspense is well timed and most importantly the MC has such a relatable personality. I highly recommend if you want a revenge and survival story
The story is nice and was up to standards. Just write more and will be a blast! More features will make it rise the masses. Anyways, good luck in your journey as an author. Learning is an everyday task for all of us. Kudos! [img=recommend]
please don't drop this novel😁😁 so far it's good and im really looking forward for more chapters
Yet another shameless author review! Right as I'm writing this review, I have over fifty chapters stockpiled, so I'll use my exclusive future insight to answer some easy questions, starting with the most logical: - "Hey Neph1s! What is this all about?" The novel revolves around Zenon, a carrier of both an important and dangerous Lineage that marks him as a threat to the higher beings, the Angels. He has to enter their own realm called the Layers and fight inside to become stronger and survive future threats. - "Cool! And what about Zenon?" Zenon is a pessimistic and sarcastic person, molded by a tragic past and a difficult present. Even so, he still can see the bright part of things with several experiences to work with. You'll like him! I hope... - "What about his abilities?! Will he be overpowered?" Trust me, Zenon is overpowered due to his Lineage. Same as anyone else with one. The difference is that he'll need to improve via skill and experience, slowly making him more powerful as time goes by. Think of it as a Souls game, you get better the more you fight enemies! - "I see... hmm, there's a romance tag? Romance time?!" The romance tag will have its own moments of course! But it'll be more of a slow burn to get the flames going (hehe). - "Perhaps... *whispering* harem?" *Loads gun* I'd rather make an unethical and immoral use of this gun than make a harem. Zenon will be surrounded by beauties, both female and male, but not in a romantic scenario. - "What about the updates?!" One per day, and if I see this is going well, two per day. - "I see you rated yourself five stars. Anything to say in your defense?" Your honor. If I may say so, this is one of the greatest novels I have ever thought of and written over the course of four years of learning. Even if they were unpublished, I am confident in the quality of the story and even more in its content. Formalities aside, enjoy the novel! Will be looking forward to your reviews!
The story has the potential to be really great and high in quality if it wasn't for 3 things. First, the grammar is a little off, but that's easily fixable and can be ignored. Second, the main character's personality becomes outright toxic while he's living in the shelter, but I think he's having some character development and fixing this problem. And third, the author gave a part of the main character's inheritance to the girl he was traveling with despite the fact that she is not a void carrier and the main character is the only known void carrier alive in the world today, this seems like self-sabotage or a deliberate attempt to anger the audience on the author's part.