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So far reading the first chapter I found the writing style and the world-building quite amazing. The author did a great job with character design and as well as the detailing of emotions... Keep it up dear...
The flow of the story was amazing. And the fewer chapters are not doing any justice to this novel. I like the description, which gives wonderful world-building. The pace of the story- check. Writing quality-- check. Character design- I wouldn't say much about this because the story has just begun. Alex does seem like he would be a pretty interesting character though. Good work author!
definitely more enjoyable to read than most simply due to the authors grasp of the english language but this story lacks any sort of spark for me. mc is a returner which inherently makes him a gary stue and worst of all he's also a sociopath so i just cant help but be incredibly bored. wether the power system is any good i couldn't say because author decided to only launch the system one month after the apocalypse dropped and it doesn't look like we'll get a time skip any time soon. which leads me to classify this as mid. it could become good or it might not, you'd have to find out yourself
Honestly a very solid read as of ch.50. I would definitely recommend giving it a try if you like tower/trial type novel. I'm curious to see where this goes in the future 🤠
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Nothing new it isn’t like a new legendary concept but its still refreshing ,the pacing the world building and how realistic the charecters are,is a breath of fresh air compared to these other Copy and last novels ,the grammar is amazing and the MC is smart intelligent and cunning ,he also isn’t a simp.Novel is top tier and deserves a spot for some of the best apocalypse novels.
So far reading the first chapter I found the writing style and the world-building quite amazing. The author did a great job with character design and as well as the detailing of emotions... Keep it up and the character on the cover of the book looks like Blade from Honkai only with purple hair
The story is off to an excellent start, and the plot is unfolding quite effectively. It has succeeded in keeping me engaged, preventing the usual waning of interest. I eagerly anticipate the story's progression, eagerly awaiting the main character's growth as they remain steadfast in pursuing his goal.
Sir AceAmbrosia, your novel titled “The Horatius Era” is truly the most elegantly worded, thrilling, and truly luxurious piece of science-fiction I have ever read. The precise grammar and excellent choice of words truly make this novel a masterpiece. Much love, your number one fan.
This book is tooo great and exciting that one would regret if he or she ignored it. It has great world, awesome designed characters, epic powers and outstanding plot that a reader can find it hard to leave each pages or line. As the writing style i is like pro level. No doubt it will rise. Great story author Excellent book Keep up the great work
Terrific choices of words and well-balanced narration with no hiccups on painting how the characters feel and what he's been thinking and seeing... Felt easy to connect and get immersed in this story that way. Also, loved the mentions of amethyst eyes and drooping eyelids which give an idea of how characters look, which is something I need to take notes on.
This review is based on my first impression about the novel evaluating bookcover, synopsis, tags and the first chapter so it's probable I'll edit it in the future. the bookcover and the synopsis catch the attention of the web surfer and the tags seem related to the story. The writing quality is high, maybe, being picky sometimes sentences get a bit too long. The development of the story, or introduction of new informations,seemed quite fast in the prologue:names of characters, factions and planets. Even with the synopsis, for a moment I thought the m.c. was Isabella (since he Is already dead at that moment)but everything gets quickly resolved in the beginning of the next chapter. The external descriptions are very detailed leaving a bit lacking on the internal side, probably normal given the battle oriented prologue. Nothing to say about the update frequency, on time like a clock (day-wise watching the chapters section). Finally, even though the isekai genre Is quite popular the author adds interesting details to make everything more fresh. In the complex the read is strongly recommended. Keep it up author! 👍
This is one of the best fresh stories I have read recently. It has the potential to develop into an epic, should the author continue writing at the same pace and with same quality. Keep it up!
I can't believe that this book is beyond the word of imagination. The plot is too awesome. Really you can't ignor anything from the start till the lastest. This story is excellent in designed and well explained. The writing style is easy and pro type. Will make you learn a lot. Great work author.
First of all, while I don't usually enjoy reading action novels, I have to admit that this one was good. Despite being securely grounded in reality, the heart is quivering. That is what I noticed immediately throughout the story. I sincerely hope the author continues to write. The writer does a great job at retaining the reader's interest. Overall, this book has amazing promise and is absolutely worth reading because the characters are well-developed. Nonetheless, Alex does seem like he might make for an intriguing character. Excellent narrative in general that focused on a loved one's retaliation Whoa, I was instantly fascinated just reading the prologue. Keep writing, 🤙
First of all, reading action genre books are not my cup of tea..yet I must say this was a good one. During the 1st chapter I couldn't understand just happened but after reading it again I was able to understand the story. But after the 2sd chapter the story got very interesting, it feels like you are watching a high sc-fi movie. The best thing about this novel was the description and world building, the choice of words are just splendid! Keep up the good work Author!!
The first chapter is very intriguing and the writing flow is stable. Everything from character building to world background was well done and I especially like to focus on the authors writing style. The wordings went in a flow without any upd and downs, making it simple and easy to imagine. Overall, I highly recommend this book and keep up the good work author
So far story is going good . I am just waiting for more chapters. World building and characters are awesome. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I honestly don't know how to create good reviews, but after reading I'm surprised more people haven't read this book yet. It is honestly so amazing I can't wait for more.
Its amazing how you built your world so wonderfully and described it perfectly. This story has the potential to mind blowing. The word play is also beautiful. Great job author
This is an apocalypse story. That doesn't quite come across in the first chapter. The story is well written, the characters are vivid, the scene setting is descriptive with out overwhelming. it's a well written action/ god-slaying kind of apocalypse game kind of story. Try it ! you just might like it.
Promising start to the novel, the descriptive language does a great job at depicting vivid scenes in the mind. Definitely a lot of promise for this one
I really like the idea of combining myths and how you used it in your novel. The writting is amazing! The characters are interesting and the emotions feel real.
The story have a lot of potential. I really loved reading this novel. The writing quality and character are so good. Keep it up author waiting for more chapters[img=recommend]
This is a very interesting book, I am honestly really into this type of writing style! And the world building is very unique, cant wait to see what happens next!
In the first chapter, the story is quite interesting, I started to be interested in this novel. What's more, at the beginning of the chapter, a sleeping man is suddenly killed. This novel is very interesting.
This is a great story with a great storyline and a great design. It's really impressive. Great job author. Can't wait to see more. Good luck.
As soon as I read the synopsis I could feel that it is gonna be a great read, so I dived right in. The writing is so good that even I'm learning from this. Great book.
The world-building is deeper than I imagined. In my opinion, the story flow is pretty hard to follow if one were to skim it, but slowly piecing out chapter by chapter helps understand this novel. It would be better if you could explain some of the lore here and there more often, which would help with understanding. Nevertheless, this is a pretty good novel. Cheers!
Interesting so far. Writing is on a high level, something that you would see in novels that are more than 500 chapters in. Author does a good job setting the stage.
This is a book that is hard to find on this app. The writing quality is impeccable, and the plot is even more unique. The contents make you keep scrolling, and the details leave you hungry for more. However, the pacing of the book is a bit rushed, and there is a bit of detail and event descriptions lacking. If these are fixed in later chapters, then I can see this book going places.
The story is well written with very few mistakes, and only in grammar. The update stability has seemingly gotten far better in the past four days, but appeared to be a bit slow before then. The story development and world background are spectacular, even when recently introduced to a character one can already get a feel for their personality; and the writing shows a superb designing of the world system, showing off the fickleness of life and death thoroughly throughout the first chapter even through it's shortness.
Author Review : This novel is my attempt at amalgamating different myths whilst combining it with an apocalyptic view of Earth and other dimensions. The return of a leader and his rise from the bottom once again, facing challenges more difficult than he has ever faced before, and most of all, leading his subordinates and companions to victory.
So far reading the first chapter I found the writing style and the world-building quite amazing. The author did a great job with character design and as well as the detailing of emotions... Keep it up dear...
The flow of the story was amazing. And the fewer chapters are not doing any justice to this novel. I like the description, which gives wonderful world-building. The pace of the story- check. Writing quality-- check. Character design- I wouldn't say much about this because the story has just begun. Alex does seem like he would be a pretty interesting character though. Good work author!
definitely more enjoyable to read than most simply due to the authors grasp of the english language but this story lacks any sort of spark for me. mc is a returner which inherently makes him a gary stue and worst of all he's also a sociopath so i just cant help but be incredibly bored. wether the power system is any good i couldn't say because author decided to only launch the system one month after the apocalypse dropped and it doesn't look like we'll get a time skip any time soon. which leads me to classify this as mid. it could become good or it might not, you'd have to find out yourself
Honestly a very solid read as of ch.50. I would definitely recommend giving it a try if you like tower/trial type novel. I'm curious to see where this goes in the future 🤠
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Nothing new it isn’t like a new legendary concept but its still refreshing ,the pacing the world building and how realistic the charecters are,is a breath of fresh air compared to these other Copy and last novels ,the grammar is amazing and the MC is smart intelligent and cunning ,he also isn’t a simp.Novel is top tier and deserves a spot for some of the best apocalypse novels.
So far reading the first chapter I found the writing style and the world-building quite amazing. The author did a great job with character design and as well as the detailing of emotions... Keep it up and the character on the cover of the book looks like Blade from Honkai only with purple hair
The story is off to an excellent start, and the plot is unfolding quite effectively. It has succeeded in keeping me engaged, preventing the usual waning of interest. I eagerly anticipate the story's progression, eagerly awaiting the main character's growth as they remain steadfast in pursuing his goal.
Sir AceAmbrosia, your novel titled “The Horatius Era” is truly the most elegantly worded, thrilling, and truly luxurious piece of science-fiction I have ever read. The precise grammar and excellent choice of words truly make this novel a masterpiece. Much love, your number one fan.
This book is tooo great and exciting that one would regret if he or she ignored it. It has great world, awesome designed characters, epic powers and outstanding plot that a reader can find it hard to leave each pages or line. As the writing style i is like pro level. No doubt it will rise. Great story author Excellent book Keep up the great work
Terrific choices of words and well-balanced narration with no hiccups on painting how the characters feel and what he's been thinking and seeing... Felt easy to connect and get immersed in this story that way. Also, loved the mentions of amethyst eyes and drooping eyelids which give an idea of how characters look, which is something I need to take notes on.
This review is based on my first impression about the novel evaluating bookcover, synopsis, tags and the first chapter so it's probable I'll edit it in the future. the bookcover and the synopsis catch the attention of the web surfer and the tags seem related to the story. The writing quality is high, maybe, being picky sometimes sentences get a bit too long. The development of the story, or introduction of new informations,seemed quite fast in the prologue:names of characters, factions and planets. Even with the synopsis, for a moment I thought the m.c. was Isabella (since he Is already dead at that moment)but everything gets quickly resolved in the beginning of the next chapter. The external descriptions are very detailed leaving a bit lacking on the internal side, probably normal given the battle oriented prologue. Nothing to say about the update frequency, on time like a clock (day-wise watching the chapters section). Finally, even though the isekai genre Is quite popular the author adds interesting details to make everything more fresh. In the complex the read is strongly recommended. Keep it up author! 👍
This is one of the best fresh stories I have read recently. It has the potential to develop into an epic, should the author continue writing at the same pace and with same quality. Keep it up!
I can't believe that this book is beyond the word of imagination. The plot is too awesome. Really you can't ignor anything from the start till the lastest. This story is excellent in designed and well explained. The writing style is easy and pro type. Will make you learn a lot. Great work author.
First of all, while I don't usually enjoy reading action novels, I have to admit that this one was good. Despite being securely grounded in reality, the heart is quivering. That is what I noticed immediately throughout the story. I sincerely hope the author continues to write. The writer does a great job at retaining the reader's interest. Overall, this book has amazing promise and is absolutely worth reading because the characters are well-developed. Nonetheless, Alex does seem like he might make for an intriguing character. Excellent narrative in general that focused on a loved one's retaliation Whoa, I was instantly fascinated just reading the prologue. Keep writing, 🤙
First of all, reading action genre books are not my cup of tea..yet I must say this was a good one. During the 1st chapter I couldn't understand just happened but after reading it again I was able to understand the story. But after the 2sd chapter the story got very interesting, it feels like you are watching a high sc-fi movie. The best thing about this novel was the description and world building, the choice of words are just splendid! Keep up the good work Author!!
The first chapter is very intriguing and the writing flow is stable. Everything from character building to world background was well done and I especially like to focus on the authors writing style. The wordings went in a flow without any upd and downs, making it simple and easy to imagine. Overall, I highly recommend this book and keep up the good work author
So far story is going good . I am just waiting for more chapters. World building and characters are awesome. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I honestly don't know how to create good reviews, but after reading I'm surprised more people haven't read this book yet. It is honestly so amazing I can't wait for more.
Its amazing how you built your world so wonderfully and described it perfectly. This story has the potential to mind blowing. The word play is also beautiful. Great job author
This is an apocalypse story. That doesn't quite come across in the first chapter. The story is well written, the characters are vivid, the scene setting is descriptive with out overwhelming. it's a well written action/ god-slaying kind of apocalypse game kind of story. Try it ! you just might like it.
Promising start to the novel, the descriptive language does a great job at depicting vivid scenes in the mind. Definitely a lot of promise for this one
I really like the idea of combining myths and how you used it in your novel. The writting is amazing! The characters are interesting and the emotions feel real.
The story have a lot of potential. I really loved reading this novel. The writing quality and character are so good. Keep it up author waiting for more chapters[img=recommend]
This is a very interesting book, I am honestly really into this type of writing style! And the world building is very unique, cant wait to see what happens next!
In the first chapter, the story is quite interesting, I started to be interested in this novel. What's more, at the beginning of the chapter, a sleeping man is suddenly killed. This novel is very interesting.
This is a great story with a great storyline and a great design. It's really impressive. Great job author. Can't wait to see more. Good luck.
As soon as I read the synopsis I could feel that it is gonna be a great read, so I dived right in. The writing is so good that even I'm learning from this. Great book.
The world-building is deeper than I imagined. In my opinion, the story flow is pretty hard to follow if one were to skim it, but slowly piecing out chapter by chapter helps understand this novel. It would be better if you could explain some of the lore here and there more often, which would help with understanding. Nevertheless, this is a pretty good novel. Cheers!
Interesting so far. Writing is on a high level, something that you would see in novels that are more than 500 chapters in. Author does a good job setting the stage.
This is a book that is hard to find on this app. The writing quality is impeccable, and the plot is even more unique. The contents make you keep scrolling, and the details leave you hungry for more. However, the pacing of the book is a bit rushed, and there is a bit of detail and event descriptions lacking. If these are fixed in later chapters, then I can see this book going places.
The story is well written with very few mistakes, and only in grammar. The update stability has seemingly gotten far better in the past four days, but appeared to be a bit slow before then. The story development and world background are spectacular, even when recently introduced to a character one can already get a feel for their personality; and the writing shows a superb designing of the world system, showing off the fickleness of life and death thoroughly throughout the first chapter even through it's shortness.
Author Review : This novel is my attempt at amalgamating different myths whilst combining it with an apocalyptic view of Earth and other dimensions. The return of a leader and his rise from the bottom once again, facing challenges more difficult than he has ever faced before, and most of all, leading his subordinates and companions to victory.