"First time writing a novel, I hope you all enjoy it, and please do give me your suggestions so I can improve my writing skills and create better works for you in the future."
"First time writing a novel, I hope you all enjoy it, and please do give me your suggestions so I can improve my writing skills and create better works for you in the future."
"First time writing a novel, I hope you all enjoy it, and please do give me your suggestions so I can improve my writing skills and create better works for you in the future."