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You should continue the story if you need ideas for tower game worlds just do Fallout. people in the wasteland treat Pip-boys like they are trash so will the people from your world not knowing about V.A.T.S and the ability to store items in a matter to energy storage system. also you should be able to learn the rob-co coding language and all its secrets. Rob-co worked with vault tec and built the Pip-boy as a portable computer for all vault tec employees and customers. Fallout has everything from aliens to brains in jars controling robots deadly monsters and man eating gouls and mutants. And all the scary advanced technology you can think of.
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I don't know what to say. I reached Chapter 122 and found that the development of events is very slow, the hero is stupid, and climbing the floors is slow, as the comments said, the hero is stupid and has terrifying powers, but he does not know how to use them.
unfortunately I've lost interest in this story. Good luck brother. ratings - 2 star, 5 star, 2 star, 4star, 3star, in order. ..........................
The main gripes I have are three things: One, the main character and most other characters are extremely stupid. Two, the premise of the story doesn’t make any logical sense. If thousands of people were running the same story over and over at least one person would figure it out. Three, the power scaling is awful. It starts off alright for the first few chapters then immediately the character becomes way stronger than any enemy (besides other humans), and to top it all off the character gains the ability to kill anyone he wants from any range. He doesn’t use this ability because it would ruin the tension, but the fact he has it and doesn’t use it makes him seem extremely stupid. I would say you could enjoy this if you don’t mind the bad translation/grammar, but you also need to turn off your brain and forget all logic.
I liked ...... XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD
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Love the character build, OP main character compared to his level but his enemies are also OP and his use of abilities and skills is creative and desperate enough, translation a little iffy on gender in early chapters but it's easy to get used to, there's not many other errors, and the translation gets better in later chapters.
hi. although this is the fifth time I have rated this book I hope you are okay and that you do not mentally break because of negativity please get enough rest. I wish you the best of luck
I have read until chapter 20 and thought that the mc would realise his stupidity, but he does not. Instead, he shocks me by doing something even more stupid
it is a really great book although I have rated this book five stars multipul times I do not know if it is a glitch or not but I will keep rating this book 5 stars
it is fantastic I have a few questions first off how many floors are you planning to make this Tower second question will there be a floor or multiple floors dedicated to Sword Art Online and it's movies third question will there be modded Minecraft like EMC craft or portal gun mod or Crazy Craft or how about Pam's craft or that Dimension maker mod can't remember the name of it or even spacecraft or even that crop sticks mod or a storage mod maybe thaumcraft fourth question will there be a Chinese cultivation young Master floor on the tower
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Ugh my eyes, i cannot read this. For god sake how can i read this fanfic ? [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
will there be worlds where they are all alone like stardew vally and can leave whenever like an optional floorwill there be game worlds that are modded like making a golden apple tree in minecraft or that seed mod that makes better seeds or Pam craft or the emc mod or thaumcraft when he gets a chance to go to J J B A will he get a stand if so my suggestion is a probability manipulation standwhen he goes to overlord will there be 3 separate versions thank you for everything
i think its good, and the grammar problems i see people talking about i dont even notice, or maybe its just improved cause im on the latest chapter (152)
I'm sorry to say it, but the MC stinks like he has only three brain cells. I tried until chapter 85 before giving up because even with the death note (an OP item) and the shinigami's ability, he is having trouble taking out a few enemies. If only he had half Light Yagami's common sense, he could have easily traversed the other floors. I'm very disappointed because this book had so much potential. The main character needs to see Eminence in the Shadow and learn from Cid, I think.
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Eu tentei ler depois de terminar o mundo de death note, mas não deu. Mesmo que ele tenha alçando uma classificação sss. Caramba MC estúpido mesmo 😑😑 ele tem tudo pra ser muito Op, mas não sabe como usar esse poder. O dedo de outro dele é saber sobre os andares da torre e tals é muito frustante🙄😒
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You should continue the story if you need ideas for tower game worlds just do Fallout. people in the wasteland treat Pip-boys like they are trash so will the people from your world not knowing about V.A.T.S and the ability to store items in a matter to energy storage system. also you should be able to learn the rob-co coding language and all its secrets. Rob-co worked with vault tec and built the Pip-boy as a portable computer for all vault tec employees and customers. Fallout has everything from aliens to brains in jars controling robots deadly monsters and man eating gouls and mutants. And all the scary advanced technology you can think of.
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meh... i don't know about the comment section, but wish me luck with this poison, hope suvive it till the end.👁👄
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I don't know what to say. I reached Chapter 122 and found that the development of events is very slow, the hero is stupid, and climbing the floors is slow, as the comments said, the hero is stupid and has terrifying powers, but he does not know how to use them.
unfortunately I've lost interest in this story. Good luck brother. ratings - 2 star, 5 star, 2 star, 4star, 3star, in order. ..........................
The main gripes I have are three things: One, the main character and most other characters are extremely stupid. Two, the premise of the story doesn’t make any logical sense. If thousands of people were running the same story over and over at least one person would figure it out. Three, the power scaling is awful. It starts off alright for the first few chapters then immediately the character becomes way stronger than any enemy (besides other humans), and to top it all off the character gains the ability to kill anyone he wants from any range. He doesn’t use this ability because it would ruin the tension, but the fact he has it and doesn’t use it makes him seem extremely stupid. I would say you could enjoy this if you don’t mind the bad translation/grammar, but you also need to turn off your brain and forget all logic.
I liked ...... XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD
Muy bueno 👍 XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD
Love the character build, OP main character compared to his level but his enemies are also OP and his use of abilities and skills is creative and desperate enough, translation a little iffy on gender in early chapters but it's easy to get used to, there's not many other errors, and the translation gets better in later chapters.
hi. although this is the fifth time I have rated this book I hope you are okay and that you do not mentally break because of negativity please get enough rest. I wish you the best of luck
I have read until chapter 20 and thought that the mc would realise his stupidity, but he does not. Instead, he shocks me by doing something even more stupid
it is a really great book although I have rated this book five stars multipul times I do not know if it is a glitch or not but I will keep rating this book 5 stars
it is fantastic I have a few questions first off how many floors are you planning to make this Tower second question will there be a floor or multiple floors dedicated to Sword Art Online and it's movies third question will there be modded Minecraft like EMC craft or portal gun mod or Crazy Craft or how about Pam's craft or that Dimension maker mod can't remember the name of it or even spacecraft or even that crop sticks mod or a storage mod maybe thaumcraft fourth question will there be a Chinese cultivation young Master floor on the tower
Revelar Spoiler Ugh my eyes, i cannot read this. For god sake how can i read this fanfic ? [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
will there be worlds where they are all alone like stardew vally and can leave whenever like an optional floorwill there be game worlds that are modded like making a golden apple tree in minecraft or that seed mod that makes better seeds or Pam craft or the emc mod or thaumcraft when he gets a chance to go to J J B A will he get a stand if so my suggestion is a probability manipulation standwhen he goes to overlord will there be 3 separate versions thank you for everything
i think its good, and the grammar problems i see people talking about i dont even notice, or maybe its just improved cause im on the latest chapter (152)
I'm sorry to say it, but the MC stinks like he has only three brain cells. I tried until chapter 85 before giving up because even with the death note (an OP item) and the shinigami's ability, he is having trouble taking out a few enemies. If only he had half Light Yagami's common sense, he could have easily traversed the other floors. I'm very disappointed because this book had so much potential. The main character needs to see Eminence in the Shadow and learn from Cid, I think.
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Eu tentei ler depois de terminar o mundo de death note, mas não deu. Mesmo que ele tenha alçando uma classificação sss. Caramba MC estúpido mesmo 😑😑 ele tem tudo pra ser muito Op, mas não sabe como usar esse poder. O dedo de outro dele é saber sobre os andares da torre e tals é muito frustante🙄😒
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i mean come on at least know the gender of the character for real man 😪