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theirs a loft of hypocrisy going among thats annoying me the queen is judging the heroes and humans but they seem worse then the humans from what i seen and the details of how the mc escaped should have had more details and a whole lot of random things happen every chapter its hard to follow and read
Great story with great world building. Each character is complex in their own way and the best part is that the MC is not a pervert but an actual human being with brain cells and ambitions. For new readers, if you like a story in which each character is unique in their own way and without a single OP character, then I recommend this story to you! Also, you should be able to tell if you like it when you read up to chapter 30! I also would like to say thank you author for this masterpiece because I have read all your works and they have all been truly excellent! Also, what is the schedule for your chapter releases?
No word for review ! it just wow. everything five star and hope author's update more chapter !
The story is really amazing. It doesn’t shy away from discussing dark topics like ptsd and depression. The author makes several deep quotes in his side notes that relate to make the story deeper. The fights are very cool and focus a lot on why the Jacobs punches knock the original MC out. The beginning is my favorite by far as it sets the tone for this novel. The characters close to MC are likable. The author really is able to make me feel hate towards the original MC and his crew. The language is a bit off but very readable.
Revelar Spoiler
I on the chapters 28 now so far so good no it not just good it great to 'me'.
Man this story is amazing, just what an emotional roller coaster from the start, I just want to know this will our hero have some romance or not? cause I seriously don't like that protagonist Raphael. I recommend it to everyone just read till chapter 10 and you won't be able to stop yourself from reading further. Author we need more chaps btw. [img=update][img=strong][img=proud]
Absolutely loved it....although writing quality wasn't that good, but story development ? It was *chef's kiss*. I totally loved even though it's only been 11 chapters...
it's best first fresh start of a novel for a while in my case you dont know what's going to happen and it's good it keeps the reader gessing what's going to happen next
My second book that I write, again I am totally unsure of how the story will proceed, but I will do my best (^-^) detail: English is not my first language, so there may be some grammar mistakes ):
I don't recommend it I don't recommend it I don't recommend it I don't I don't recommend it recommend it I don't recommend it🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮
theirs a loft of hypocrisy going among thats annoying me the queen is judging the heroes and humans but they seem worse then the humans from what i seen and the details of how the mc escaped should have had more details and a whole lot of random things happen every chapter its hard to follow and read
Great story with great world building. Each character is complex in their own way and the best part is that the MC is not a pervert but an actual human being with brain cells and ambitions. For new readers, if you like a story in which each character is unique in their own way and without a single OP character, then I recommend this story to you! Also, you should be able to tell if you like it when you read up to chapter 30! I also would like to say thank you author for this masterpiece because I have read all your works and they have all been truly excellent! Also, what is the schedule for your chapter releases?
No word for review ! it just wow. everything five star and hope author's update more chapter !
The story is really amazing. It doesn’t shy away from discussing dark topics like ptsd and depression. The author makes several deep quotes in his side notes that relate to make the story deeper. The fights are very cool and focus a lot on why the Jacobs punches knock the original MC out. The beginning is my favorite by far as it sets the tone for this novel. The characters close to MC are likable. The author really is able to make me feel hate towards the original MC and his crew. The language is a bit off but very readable.
Revelar Spoiler I on the chapters 28 now so far so good no it not just good it great to 'me'.
Man this story is amazing, just what an emotional roller coaster from the start, I just want to know this will our hero have some romance or not? cause I seriously don't like that protagonist Raphael. I recommend it to everyone just read till chapter 10 and you won't be able to stop yourself from reading further. Author we need more chaps btw. [img=update][img=strong][img=proud]
Absolutely loved it....although writing quality wasn't that good, but story development ? It was *chef's kiss*. I totally loved even though it's only been 11 chapters...
it's best first fresh start of a novel for a while in my case you dont know what's going to happen and it's good it keeps the reader gessing what's going to happen next
My second book that I write, again I am totally unsure of how the story will proceed, but I will do my best (^-^) detail: English is not my first language, so there may be some grammar mistakes ):
I don't recommend it I don't recommend it I don't recommend it I don't I don't recommend it recommend it I don't recommend it🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮