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All Was Fine but The author half killed mc who is almost omnipotent ...
The author made 💩 and saw that almost no one bought his excuse. So the author felt bad and lost interest in writing. The time jumps ruined this novel. And the rebellious puppet project and the consequences of the revolt that the author created didn't go down very well with the readers. So we have another Novel dropped. Compared to many novels of the genre, it's not terrible. It's enough to pass the time.
How did it get four stars? Well, it's webnovel so looking at the scores doesn't really have any real purpose. It's mediocre. I can't really get into story, MC doesn' really make me feel anything much and even then it's more of an annoyance, some problems with grammar (that may be on me, not native speaker) and weird formatting here and there. It would be better if it made me interested in the story, but I had to force myself not to skip it and scroll down for a moment just to not have to read something annoying / boring. Overall? 4.5/10, maybe 5/10, wouldn't really recommend, but you may want to give it a chance if you don't have anything good to read.
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too much sugary which make my teeth rots... character feels Fake especially Raphael... too much overdramatic. hope you fix it author
The beginning was decent, but I don't like the highschool dxd. Should have just graduated early and went to other modern day schools. Why would you turn them into Vampire Gods?? It would have been better with just a regular talent system and no world hopping.
Meh, the fact that it's about a guy and a system but the majority of chapters right now consist of spending so much words and chapters on irrelevant school stuff and mobs is just boring as heck. the book should be called, ''I reincarnated back into school", instead. Other than that, it ain't my cup of tea so rest of you good luck with the reading.
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Who is the Heroine? Speak the name, depending on who I read. So it all depends on you author. :) Good luck. That was all, until next time, goodbye.
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It started out good but the OC feels like a side character that just pops up everyonce in awhile
meh, the fact that it's about a guy and a system but the majority of chapters right now consist of spending so much words and chapters on irrelevant school stuff and mobs is just boring as heck. the book should be called, ''I reincarnated back into school", instead. Other than that, it ain't my cup of tea so rest of you good luck with the reading.
Bad. The school is supposed to be impartial. The fact that he can get points in that way is already a big minus. Everything else is nice.
Honestly it's a good story... but individually I was disappointed, I expected a mixture of SEVERAL animes, but the story focuses on COTE, without developing other animes... but "Raphael" was interesting to see in a fic, despite I prefer "Ciel", after reading COTE's novel with ayanakoji as MC, seeing a COTE fic with a BETA is depressing!...
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It's good, i look forward for future chapter. I just want Raphael appears more often.
it's different from other Fanfiction of COTE(Classroom of the elite) series' the story' is keeping a good pace, some enjoyable movements, yeah there are many spelling mistakes (I don't know about Grammatical tho, not i care because i can understand what author want to say.) last but least it's interesting, if there is anything i will add more.
I'm actually really surprised that you're the author of that ATG fanfic because the improvement of the character interactions between the two is really amazing.
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All Was Fine but The author half killed mc who is almost omnipotent ...
The author made 💩 and saw that almost no one bought his excuse. So the author felt bad and lost interest in writing. The time jumps ruined this novel. And the rebellious puppet project and the consequences of the revolt that the author created didn't go down very well with the readers. So we have another Novel dropped. Compared to many novels of the genre, it's not terrible. It's enough to pass the time.
How did it get four stars? Well, it's webnovel so looking at the scores doesn't really have any real purpose. It's mediocre. I can't really get into story, MC doesn' really make me feel anything much and even then it's more of an annoyance, some problems with grammar (that may be on me, not native speaker) and weird formatting here and there. It would be better if it made me interested in the story, but I had to force myself not to skip it and scroll down for a moment just to not have to read something annoying / boring. Overall? 4.5/10, maybe 5/10, wouldn't really recommend, but you may want to give it a chance if you don't have anything good to read.
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too much sugary which make my teeth rots... character feels Fake especially Raphael... too much overdramatic. hope you fix it author
The beginning was decent, but I don't like the highschool dxd. Should have just graduated early and went to other modern day schools. Why would you turn them into Vampire Gods?? It would have been better with just a regular talent system and no world hopping.
Meh, the fact that it's about a guy and a system but the majority of chapters right now consist of spending so much words and chapters on irrelevant school stuff and mobs is just boring as heck. the book should be called, ''I reincarnated back into school", instead. Other than that, it ain't my cup of tea so rest of you good luck with the reading.
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more more more more more more more more more more more more more more moremore more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
Who is the Heroine? Speak the name, depending on who I read. So it all depends on you author. :) Good luck. That was all, until next time, goodbye.
Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem?
It started out good but the OC feels like a side character that just pops up everyonce in awhile
meh, the fact that it's about a guy and a system but the majority of chapters right now consist of spending so much words and chapters on irrelevant school stuff and mobs is just boring as heck. the book should be called, ''I reincarnated back into school", instead. Other than that, it ain't my cup of tea so rest of you good luck with the reading.
Bad. The school is supposed to be impartial. The fact that he can get points in that way is already a big minus. Everything else is nice.
Honestly it's a good story... but individually I was disappointed, I expected a mixture of SEVERAL animes, but the story focuses on COTE, without developing other animes... but "Raphael" was interesting to see in a fic, despite I prefer "Ciel", after reading COTE's novel with ayanakoji as MC, seeing a COTE fic with a BETA is depressing!...
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It's good, i look forward for future chapter. I just want Raphael appears more often.
it's different from other Fanfiction of COTE(Classroom of the elite) series' the story' is keeping a good pace, some enjoyable movements, yeah there are many spelling mistakes (I don't know about Grammatical tho, not i care because i can understand what author want to say.) last but least it's interesting, if there is anything i will add more.
I'm actually really surprised that you're the author of that ATG fanfic because the improvement of the character interactions between the two is really amazing.
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