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The Mc acts like a child with a mental illness his IQ and EQ is non existent. He doesn't care about anything beside having an adventure ignoring whatever happens around him and the consequences of his actions.He find the dumbest solution for the simplest problems.
the mc is too op that it's making the story boring, not in my taste but for some reason I still likes it
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this is honestly one of the best new stories i have read and i cant wait where dante's little tomfoolery leads
I have had a lot of fun writing this story, I can't lie. I suppose I'm a bit of a shameless writer for giving my own story 5 stars, but I'm more than alright with giving myself a pat on the back. Love my boy Dante, fantastic to write.
Not much of a reviewer myself but I've been enjoying the story so far (ch21)
I hardly write a review but with this story here I absolutely need to quite a wonderful theme and premise hardly anyone makes a story about Dante so to anyone interested in a great story here is one for you
i can see potential in this, but in those fights scene it's better to describe the action then just writing the name of the move. nobody got time to look up the move to see what it look like. it's better to describe it
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Came looking into what I’ve read in the past and came upon a lost treasure! Welcome back!
The Mc acts like a child with a mental illness his IQ and EQ is non existent. He doesn't care about anything beside having an adventure ignoring whatever happens around him and the consequences of his actions.He find the dumbest solution for the simplest problems.
the mc is too op that it's making the story boring, not in my taste but for some reason I still likes it
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this is honestly one of the best new stories i have read and i cant wait where dante's little tomfoolery leads
I have had a lot of fun writing this story, I can't lie. I suppose I'm a bit of a shameless writer for giving my own story 5 stars, but I'm more than alright with giving myself a pat on the back. Love my boy Dante, fantastic to write.
Not much of a reviewer myself but I've been enjoying the story so far (ch21)
I hardly write a review but with this story here I absolutely need to quite a wonderful theme and premise hardly anyone makes a story about Dante so to anyone interested in a great story here is one for you
i can see potential in this, but in those fights scene it's better to describe the action then just writing the name of the move. nobody got time to look up the move to see what it look like. it's better to describe it
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Came looking into what I’ve read in the past and came upon a lost treasure! Welcome back!