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Ну в принципе нормально. Только есть проблемы с героями и их мотивацией, слишком много клише и бессмысленных ответвлений. Вот арки с тем как герой играет в героя, злодея. Они будто не доделаны. Ну а так работа хорошая
Reading this feels like reading chinese cultivation novels. Everything can be solved by Killing. Not bad story though, it's just too bloody, and it's not cool.
Why is it always trash like this that get a high rating, do people really have such bad tastes?
I like every part of it, and the Author will continue to do the good work as this is really getting better. I look forward to all the AUs that this FF has to offer and Thank you for this special treat.
I rarely read on Webnovel because of how most of the stories involve harems or something like that, but this, this story is amazing, i read a lot and usually its just mindless reading that i cant get past even 30 chapters, but this story has a great plot, while there may be some minor spelling mistakes its pretty easy to ignore, the plot is good and I'm looking forward to more of this story, much love, someone who likes to read <3
Author nees to put in a lot, A LOT of work & effort to make the story not sound like a 3 year old trying to recall his dream. I honestly would have thought the author was in middle schoor or just entered high school if it wasn't for the patreon. .. . It's a good idea, the premise is good. But the execution.... needs work. Both to make the story flow better, and to not write a stupid m.c. 1. The dude takes the tim to shape his threads into a kife to try and cut ppl (why are so....) 2. Dude kills an abusive teacher but refuses to kill hydra agents WHO ARE TRYING TO CAPTURE, EXPERIMENT & KILL HIM, AND HAVE DONE THE SAME TO HIS FRIENDS AND COUNTLESS KIDS. 3. Dude falls into a river in America & wakes up in Africa or some wildlife preserve rum by some tiger king... ( i don't know how lion cubs & hyenas are running around in America & in FOREST of all things) 4. Dude decides to hide & asks his "friend" her powers.. But makes a public display of their powers in front of a class full of kids... (people with the loosest and loudest mouths). He knows he is in marvel, he knows about mutant hate, shield & he is literally trying to escape from hydra. 5. He lacks clothes, he nees clothes, he can make knives with his threads, his power is literally ito ito no mi... so how does he solve the issue of his nudity... he hunters snakes & masks clothes from their leather.. & that's where I stopped.
Love the premise of the story specially since it's a marvel fanfic with some other movies mixed in. The mc is great and the side characters don't feel bland and shallow. The only complaint I would have about the mc is that he rarely uses the full capabilities of his devil fruit powers in fights sometimes, for ex/ MINI SPOILER... I've only seen him use his devil fruit as a kagune and he mainly fights with his Haki/ physical power. Other than that. This story is a solid 9/10.
Quite an interesting story. Has a lot of plotholes but still entertaining so I just kinda ignore them but would've preferred if you put more effort to straighten some facts or timeline in this story. The low star rating almost makes me skip this, but I got intrigued, well good to say I'm not disappointed. Would still follow this story until it finishes. The low raters (?) are just plain mean. I wish you luck finishing this story. Thanks for sharing.
I won't go into too much detail since there are other reviews saying the same thing, but to summarize the author doesn't bother to research basic details like the types and subtypes of Haki, the fact that there are no Tigers in the USA and Lions in the forests and in America . In addition, the characters in general lack basic intelligence, which makes the story somewhat surreal. The author's writing and grammar is good, as long as he fixes these extremely important details and researches before writing he can write a good story, for that story he wrote is not good just sloppy.
I really liked this story...I believe it will get even better. ..................................................................................................................................
I think the author has a thing for combined world systems. I quite enjoyed the other fanfic about the sorcerer supreme in the DXD world but as soon as he decided it was needed to absorb the Will of Joy Boy from Luffy and kill IM, I quit the book. About this FF, I have to say, I was expecting something different but this is just *sigh*. I don't know if you understand the one piece world well enough but when it comes to the three Haki, there is a need for ones will, instinct and body to surpass the normal human category before they can awaken conqueror, observation and armament Haki respectively. Five years can't possibly do that, but hey, this is a FF so all is well, but the issue arises when the MC struggles to defeat some random normal human, how preposterous is that? Even some casual human from the one piece world can literally Strong arm some powered people in the Marvel Universe. Keyword:Some. Another annoying thing is the way you portray Matilda or whatever her name is to be eleven and get after your Timeskip you created a scene where MC beats up some 10-11 gear old "normal humans" for bullying her and yet say they were probably in the the basketball team. There's a lot I have to say but this is my honest opinion about it. You do you. as an author you shouldn't listen to every negative comments but you should atleast see what I'm trying to say.
Author nees to put in a lot, A LOT of work & effort to make the story not sound like a 3 year old trying to recall his dream. I honestly would have thought the author was in middle schoor or just entered high school if it wasn't for the patreon. .. . It's a good idea, the premise is good. But the execution.... needs work. Both to make the story flow better, and to not write a stupid m.c. 1. The dude takes the tim to shape his threads into a kife to try and cut ppl (why are so....) 2. Dude kills an abusive teacher but refuses to kill hydra agents WHO ARE TRYING TO CAPTURE, EXPERIMENT & KILL HIM, AND HAVE DONE THE SAME TO HIS FRIENDS AND COUNTLESS KIDS. 3. Dude falls into a river in America & wakes up in Africa or some wildlife preserve rum by some tiger king... ( i don't know how lion cubs & hyenas are running around in America & in FOREST of all things) 4. Dude decides to hide & asks his "friend" her powers.. But makes a public display of their powers in front of a class full of kids... (people with the loosest and loudest mouths). He knows he is in marvel, he knows about mutant hate, shield & he is literally trying to escape from hydra. 5. He lacks clothes, he nees clothes, he can make knives with his threads, his power is literally ito ito no mi... so how does he solve the issue of his nudity... he hunters snakes & masks clothes from their leather.. & that's where I stopped.
Okay the story is okay I guess but I am pretty sure the author is homophobic or something???
It's a great Marvel fanfiction!! I like it that it add a few character from film (they make it more interesting and not weird).. It have a good translate/grammar.. What I confused is, is he a hero or not?? Because his personality and action is not clear/between that (he kills his enemy and targets easily, but he doesn't want to hurt/kill innocents).. 🤔🤔 Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the good job author san 😁😁👍👍👍
A pretty good fiction, it mixes things up from the usual formula by adding minor movies as well to the mcu, and the mc isn’t too powerful from the start, but strong enough to be entertaining
Overall I can say, the story is entertaining. It's too early to say. I am looking forward to future development and some twists are certainly needed. Otherwise, the story will be too blend.
Mediocre writing and predictable story. On the lower end of the mediocre spectrum but if you have nothing better to read then it works to fill time.
Ну в принципе нормально. Только есть проблемы с героями и их мотивацией, слишком много клише и бессмысленных ответвлений. Вот арки с тем как герой играет в героя, злодея. Они будто не доделаны. Ну а так работа хорошая
Reading this feels like reading chinese cultivation novels. Everything can be solved by Killing. Not bad story though, it's just too bloody, and it's not cool.
Why is it always trash like this that get a high rating, do people really have such bad tastes?
I like every part of it, and the Author will continue to do the good work as this is really getting better. I look forward to all the AUs that this FF has to offer and Thank you for this special treat.
I rarely read on Webnovel because of how most of the stories involve harems or something like that, but this, this story is amazing, i read a lot and usually its just mindless reading that i cant get past even 30 chapters, but this story has a great plot, while there may be some minor spelling mistakes its pretty easy to ignore, the plot is good and I'm looking forward to more of this story, much love, someone who likes to read <3
Author nees to put in a lot, A LOT of work & effort to make the story not sound like a 3 year old trying to recall his dream. I honestly would have thought the author was in middle schoor or just entered high school if it wasn't for the patreon. .. . It's a good idea, the premise is good. But the execution.... needs work. Both to make the story flow better, and to not write a stupid m.c. 1. The dude takes the tim to shape his threads into a kife to try and cut ppl (why are so....) 2. Dude kills an abusive teacher but refuses to kill hydra agents WHO ARE TRYING TO CAPTURE, EXPERIMENT & KILL HIM, AND HAVE DONE THE SAME TO HIS FRIENDS AND COUNTLESS KIDS. 3. Dude falls into a river in America & wakes up in Africa or some wildlife preserve rum by some tiger king... ( i don't know how lion cubs & hyenas are running around in America & in FOREST of all things) 4. Dude decides to hide & asks his "friend" her powers.. But makes a public display of their powers in front of a class full of kids... (people with the loosest and loudest mouths). He knows he is in marvel, he knows about mutant hate, shield & he is literally trying to escape from hydra. 5. He lacks clothes, he nees clothes, he can make knives with his threads, his power is literally ito ito no mi... so how does he solve the issue of his nudity... he hunters snakes & masks clothes from their leather.. & that's where I stopped.
Love the premise of the story specially since it's a marvel fanfic with some other movies mixed in. The mc is great and the side characters don't feel bland and shallow. The only complaint I would have about the mc is that he rarely uses the full capabilities of his devil fruit powers in fights sometimes, for ex/ MINI SPOILER... I've only seen him use his devil fruit as a kagune and he mainly fights with his Haki/ physical power. Other than that. This story is a solid 9/10.
Quite an interesting story. Has a lot of plotholes but still entertaining so I just kinda ignore them but would've preferred if you put more effort to straighten some facts or timeline in this story. The low star rating almost makes me skip this, but I got intrigued, well good to say I'm not disappointed. Would still follow this story until it finishes. The low raters (?) are just plain mean. I wish you luck finishing this story. Thanks for sharing.
I won't go into too much detail since there are other reviews saying the same thing, but to summarize the author doesn't bother to research basic details like the types and subtypes of Haki, the fact that there are no Tigers in the USA and Lions in the forests and in America . In addition, the characters in general lack basic intelligence, which makes the story somewhat surreal. The author's writing and grammar is good, as long as he fixes these extremely important details and researches before writing he can write a good story, for that story he wrote is not good just sloppy.
I really liked this story...I believe it will get even better. ..................................................................................................................................
I think the author has a thing for combined world systems. I quite enjoyed the other fanfic about the sorcerer supreme in the DXD world but as soon as he decided it was needed to absorb the Will of Joy Boy from Luffy and kill IM, I quit the book. About this FF, I have to say, I was expecting something different but this is just *sigh*. I don't know if you understand the one piece world well enough but when it comes to the three Haki, there is a need for ones will, instinct and body to surpass the normal human category before they can awaken conqueror, observation and armament Haki respectively. Five years can't possibly do that, but hey, this is a FF so all is well, but the issue arises when the MC struggles to defeat some random normal human, how preposterous is that? Even some casual human from the one piece world can literally Strong arm some powered people in the Marvel Universe. Keyword:Some. Another annoying thing is the way you portray Matilda or whatever her name is to be eleven and get after your Timeskip you created a scene where MC beats up some 10-11 gear old "normal humans" for bullying her and yet say they were probably in the the basketball team. There's a lot I have to say but this is my honest opinion about it. You do you. as an author you shouldn't listen to every negative comments but you should atleast see what I'm trying to say.
Author nees to put in a lot, A LOT of work & effort to make the story not sound like a 3 year old trying to recall his dream. I honestly would have thought the author was in middle schoor or just entered high school if it wasn't for the patreon. .. . It's a good idea, the premise is good. But the execution.... needs work. Both to make the story flow better, and to not write a stupid m.c. 1. The dude takes the tim to shape his threads into a kife to try and cut ppl (why are so....) 2. Dude kills an abusive teacher but refuses to kill hydra agents WHO ARE TRYING TO CAPTURE, EXPERIMENT & KILL HIM, AND HAVE DONE THE SAME TO HIS FRIENDS AND COUNTLESS KIDS. 3. Dude falls into a river in America & wakes up in Africa or some wildlife preserve rum by some tiger king... ( i don't know how lion cubs & hyenas are running around in America & in FOREST of all things) 4. Dude decides to hide & asks his "friend" her powers.. But makes a public display of their powers in front of a class full of kids... (people with the loosest and loudest mouths). He knows he is in marvel, he knows about mutant hate, shield & he is literally trying to escape from hydra. 5. He lacks clothes, he nees clothes, he can make knives with his threads, his power is literally ito ito no mi... so how does he solve the issue of his nudity... he hunters snakes & masks clothes from their leather.. & that's where I stopped.
Okay the story is okay I guess but I am pretty sure the author is homophobic or something???
It's a great Marvel fanfiction!! I like it that it add a few character from film (they make it more interesting and not weird).. It have a good translate/grammar.. What I confused is, is he a hero or not?? Because his personality and action is not clear/between that (he kills his enemy and targets easily, but he doesn't want to hurt/kill innocents).. 🤔🤔 Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the good job author san 😁😁👍👍👍
A pretty good fiction, it mixes things up from the usual formula by adding minor movies as well to the mcu, and the mc isn’t too powerful from the start, but strong enough to be entertaining
Overall I can say, the story is entertaining. It's too early to say. I am looking forward to future development and some twists are certainly needed. Otherwise, the story will be too blend.
Mediocre writing and predictable story. On the lower end of the mediocre spectrum but if you have nothing better to read then it works to fill time.
keep it up. i am enjoying it very much till now.