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Day 1 of requesting the author to continue this awesome novel. Plzzzzzzzzzz upload at least 1 chapter per day.
MC is an idiot. Last 18 years of his life are not told to us and all thats told is system said suffer 18 years no system and you will be OP He gets system and goes from mortal up 10 levels. Then he decides to spend all the spirit stones system gave him and goes up 2 more levels. He complains about lack of levels when few seconds ago he was saying how people would be jealous since it takes them years to go up a level/s or so. MC didnt even try to save some spirit stones so he's broke. Then he doesnt know how strong he is but decides to go and hunt beasts. I mean he was a mortal and since it was never told what he did so I am assuming he doesnt know their strength etc but is like yep I got cultivation now let me go fight beasts ? Since he was never a cultivator we were never told about his last 18 years of life. Also just because you have cultivation doesnt mean you know how to fight. Also the beasts were higher level so it seems pretty stupid. He keeps saying well I read novels in my last life so I know how this works.... Knowledge he should not possess is somehow just filled in by somehow saying he knows it MC receives a physique which makes him the best looking man in the world. Yes this is the most idiotic thing because he decides to go work in the red light district. The moment he walks there every single girl is like do me...I mean everyone. Girls who have boyfriends, fiance etc...they all want to pay him.... So let me get this straight you just started cultivating and instead of being smart/hiding your identity, you decide to go flaunt it knowing you could be captured? I mean atleast enter brothel masked and talk to people there to work there before showing your face. I mean why doesnt he think they could place slave seal on him? force him to work You are at the weakest cultivation realm and you are going around like an idiot... Yeah I cant handle the amount of stupidity
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Write whatever you want,but just dont let mc share his skills and system function with his harem members. System functions and skills should be his unique traits not for everyone.
The quality is good enough for easy reading, but author consistently messes up who he talking about early on, forgets what they wrote in the previous chapter...this also affects story development. Author likes to change what they wrote the previous chapter cause it was convenient. The DC points are where alot of this occurs.( Missing points, low points to make a point that gets overlooked later, or suprise show up when nothing happened in the story). Character development is ok as author is going for idiot mc who thinks like an infant. His ideas seem to always lead to him complaining, but it is because he doesn't have a braincell capable of strategic thought. If he just listened to the girls around him his life would move quickly and smoothly
extremely generous mc, mc is basically Jesus, sacrificing him self for the women who don't get enough pleasure. God bless his soul
It is a good read for some idle time pass,, it is evident that it has been deeply influenced by 'Dual cultivation' novel but after entering the sect and massage arc, it is fully copied. Isn't the author afraid of copyright infringement... 😮💨😮💨
This is similar to Dual Cultivation novel. Most of the character names are matching with this novel. In the Dual cultivation novel at the beginning the mc offers massage with seggs to increase his cultivation which is similarly happening in this novel. And in Dual Cultivation novel mc personal record in Dual cultivation with women is 30000 on single stand and here the author has used the same numbers. In dual cultivation mc has past life with many lovers who are waiting for his return. And also the author is hinting the same. I have found few similar scenes but I am not interested to point out And also I think it has small references from Profound Prince of Domination like mc is shameless and also the mc enjoys cuckolding men and the married women easily has seggs with mc in the novel.Anyway, I will wait and see how the author narrates the novel.
Author be sure to update this masterpiece today or else I will spam review until you update this masterpiece🙃🙃 [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
This is the Day 5 of requesting the author to continue this master Dual cultivatior with a cultivation system. PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ AUTHOR CONTINUE THIS MASTERPIECE.
This is Day 4 of requesting the author to continue this masterpiece Dual cultivator with a cultivation system. Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz author I am requesting you to to continue this novel.
why are you updating such low number of chapters bro plz give us more chapters [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
This is Day 3 of requesting the author to continue this masterpiece Dual cultivator with a cultivation system. PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ AUTHOR CONTINUE THIS MASTERPIECE.
This is day 2 of requesting the author to continue this novel. Plzzzzz author continue this novel!!!!!
MC is a narcissistic hypocrite. Every women is unsatisfied with their lovers and is willing to spread their legs immediately. Everything MC says is either stupid, lustful, hypocritical, or ignorant. MC is ridiculously OP for no reason. I could go on, but I'll stop here. The MC is super annoying. There is no meaningful conflict. Everything that happens just so people could suck to MC who didn't do anything. The only thing half descent here is the mindless f******.
author just keep repeating coherent lines and some minor antagonists were just generic
... well.. grammar is good. But i hated that mc basically went from sick and malnutrited level 1 kid the size of a chair with nothing that has the strenght of a sick dog... then he opens the starter pack and gets....to being level 100, 6''3 tall with 8 pack muscles. 9 inch D. With a godly rank sword, a godly rank sword skill and enough money to shame anyone, 2 godly physiques that can charm any woman alive with no effort thst has dual cultivstion and merge any new future phsyque he gets at chapter 3.... honest. He got soooo many overpowered things that is extremely excessive and ruins any progression that the story may have. Any random of these cheats is already enough but so many at once? It would have been 10 times.better of he got these slowly in a period of like 30 chapters or more
This is an opinion based off of a small part of the story, so be sure to at least attempt reading before developing your own opinions; Honestly, I couldn’t bother with reading more than the first couple chapters, as I lost interest rather quickly. Everything, from characters to plot, seem incredibly bland. It feels flat, and rather lifeless. Maybe it’s just lack of experience writing, or maybe things are lost in translation, regardless this just wasn’t engaging enough to bother reading. The formatting being a mess was just icing on top of the cake.
Dude do something about your updating habits people loose interest when we have to wait weeks for a single chapter which is not even big I have no idea why you take so much time
Hello Author I am a big fan of this novel. However, you aren't uploading this novel for a long time. I am literally begging you to continue this novels🙏🙏. I will keep requesting you to continue this novel until you do. So this day one of Requesting bloodsniper to continue this awesome novel🙏.
I wish the author had mentioned the background of the world, such as which planet it is in or any continent and the cities in it. And also the realms of cultivation, because the writer mentioned 4 or 5 realms until Chapter 80
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Best dual cultivation novel out there. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Day 1 of requesting the author to continue this awesome novel. Plzzzzzzzzzz upload at least 1 chapter per day.
MC is an idiot. Last 18 years of his life are not told to us and all thats told is system said suffer 18 years no system and you will be OP He gets system and goes from mortal up 10 levels. Then he decides to spend all the spirit stones system gave him and goes up 2 more levels. He complains about lack of levels when few seconds ago he was saying how people would be jealous since it takes them years to go up a level/s or so. MC didnt even try to save some spirit stones so he's broke. Then he doesnt know how strong he is but decides to go and hunt beasts. I mean he was a mortal and since it was never told what he did so I am assuming he doesnt know their strength etc but is like yep I got cultivation now let me go fight beasts ? Since he was never a cultivator we were never told about his last 18 years of life. Also just because you have cultivation doesnt mean you know how to fight. Also the beasts were higher level so it seems pretty stupid. He keeps saying well I read novels in my last life so I know how this works.... Knowledge he should not possess is somehow just filled in by somehow saying he knows it MC receives a physique which makes him the best looking man in the world. Yes this is the most idiotic thing because he decides to go work in the red light district. The moment he walks there every single girl is like do me...I mean everyone. Girls who have boyfriends, fiance etc...they all want to pay him.... So let me get this straight you just started cultivating and instead of being smart/hiding your identity, you decide to go flaunt it knowing you could be captured? I mean atleast enter brothel masked and talk to people there to work there before showing your face. I mean why doesnt he think they could place slave seal on him? force him to work You are at the weakest cultivation realm and you are going around like an idiot... Yeah I cant handle the amount of stupidity
here can advertise your novel, please tell me Multiprof | Apocalypse here can advertise your novel, please tell me Multiprof | Apocalypse
Write whatever you want,but just dont let mc share his skills and system function with his harem members. System functions and skills should be his unique traits not for everyone.
The quality is good enough for easy reading, but author consistently messes up who he talking about early on, forgets what they wrote in the previous chapter...this also affects story development. Author likes to change what they wrote the previous chapter cause it was convenient. The DC points are where alot of this occurs.( Missing points, low points to make a point that gets overlooked later, or suprise show up when nothing happened in the story). Character development is ok as author is going for idiot mc who thinks like an infant. His ideas seem to always lead to him complaining, but it is because he doesn't have a braincell capable of strategic thought. If he just listened to the girls around him his life would move quickly and smoothly
extremely generous mc, mc is basically Jesus, sacrificing him self for the women who don't get enough pleasure. God bless his soul
It is a good read for some idle time pass,, it is evident that it has been deeply influenced by 'Dual cultivation' novel but after entering the sect and massage arc, it is fully copied. Isn't the author afraid of copyright infringement... 😮💨😮💨
This is similar to Dual Cultivation novel. Most of the character names are matching with this novel. In the Dual cultivation novel at the beginning the mc offers massage with seggs to increase his cultivation which is similarly happening in this novel. And in Dual Cultivation novel mc personal record in Dual cultivation with women is 30000 on single stand and here the author has used the same numbers. In dual cultivation mc has past life with many lovers who are waiting for his return. And also the author is hinting the same. I have found few similar scenes but I am not interested to point out And also I think it has small references from Profound Prince of Domination like mc is shameless and also the mc enjoys cuckolding men and the married women easily has seggs with mc in the novel.Anyway, I will wait and see how the author narrates the novel.
Author be sure to update this masterpiece today or else I will spam review until you update this masterpiece🙃🙃 [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
This is the Day 5 of requesting the author to continue this master Dual cultivatior with a cultivation system. PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ AUTHOR CONTINUE THIS MASTERPIECE.
This is Day 4 of requesting the author to continue this masterpiece Dual cultivator with a cultivation system. Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz author I am requesting you to to continue this novel.
why are you updating such low number of chapters bro plz give us more chapters [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
This is Day 3 of requesting the author to continue this masterpiece Dual cultivator with a cultivation system. PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ AUTHOR CONTINUE THIS MASTERPIECE.
This is day 2 of requesting the author to continue this novel. Plzzzzz author continue this novel!!!!!
MC is a narcissistic hypocrite. Every women is unsatisfied with their lovers and is willing to spread their legs immediately. Everything MC says is either stupid, lustful, hypocritical, or ignorant. MC is ridiculously OP for no reason. I could go on, but I'll stop here. The MC is super annoying. There is no meaningful conflict. Everything that happens just so people could suck to MC who didn't do anything. The only thing half descent here is the mindless f******.
author just keep repeating coherent lines and some minor antagonists were just generic
... well.. grammar is good. But i hated that mc basically went from sick and malnutrited level 1 kid the size of a chair with nothing that has the strenght of a sick dog... then he opens the starter pack and gets....to being level 100, 6''3 tall with 8 pack muscles. 9 inch D. With a godly rank sword, a godly rank sword skill and enough money to shame anyone, 2 godly physiques that can charm any woman alive with no effort thst has dual cultivstion and merge any new future phsyque he gets at chapter 3.... honest. He got soooo many overpowered things that is extremely excessive and ruins any progression that the story may have. Any random of these cheats is already enough but so many at once? It would have been 10 times.better of he got these slowly in a period of like 30 chapters or more
This is an opinion based off of a small part of the story, so be sure to at least attempt reading before developing your own opinions; Honestly, I couldn’t bother with reading more than the first couple chapters, as I lost interest rather quickly. Everything, from characters to plot, seem incredibly bland. It feels flat, and rather lifeless. Maybe it’s just lack of experience writing, or maybe things are lost in translation, regardless this just wasn’t engaging enough to bother reading. The formatting being a mess was just icing on top of the cake.
Dude do something about your updating habits people loose interest when we have to wait weeks for a single chapter which is not even big I have no idea why you take so much time
Hello Author I am a big fan of this novel. However, you aren't uploading this novel for a long time. I am literally begging you to continue this novels🙏🙏. I will keep requesting you to continue this novel until you do. So this day one of Requesting bloodsniper to continue this awesome novel🙏.
I wish the author had mentioned the background of the world, such as which planet it is in or any continent and the cities in it. And also the realms of cultivation, because the writer mentioned 4 or 5 realms until Chapter 80
Wondeful!!!![img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Best dual cultivation novel out there. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!