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Top Quality work , I like how the author lets the Mc do what he wants and letting him go of his regrets by giving him the power to change it by himself .
This is the first story I read when the application was installed, and I loved it.
literal definition of trash , it's sooo bad that even Chinese novels (which he has taken style from) will look gold in front of this
There was already homophobia in the first chapter and in the comments, not really for me, also it was so incredibly cliche, hope you get better author, good luck
a question to author before reading this novel..-does this novel contains racism towards other countries like Sakura[ Japan] country, beautiful country /Eagle Eye country (America), bear (Russia) Nation. just asking because I don't like dropping novel in the middle.just giving 5 stars before reading it . hope it's good .
tha am facal Cliché na fho-aithris airson a’ chuilbheart luath seo mar *, thig air adhart, cuir beagan doimhneachd a-steach don nobhail agad, is e an aon rud a tha a’ cumail an nobhail agad bho bhith co-ionann ri MTL Beurla reusanta, dh’ fhaodadh tu a bhith air ùine a chuir airson doimhneachd a chuir ris. a-steach don nobhail agad, tha na nobhailean agad a’ faireachdainn mar leth-bhreac agus pasgain de nobhail àbhaisteach Sìneach URBAN leis an ùghdar foighidinn leanabh 5 bliadhna a dh’ aois, agus mac-meanmna neach fo chreig, dìreach le bhith a’ faighinn 1 ùidh gaoil bidh thu a’ sgaradh bho na nobhailean bailteil eile , le bhith foighidneach agus ga dhèanamh gus an cosg e an t-airgead aige ann an dòigh ghlic dhèanadh e thu nas fheàrr na feadhainn eile, agus le bhith a’ dèanamh a phuing siostam air a thionndadh le bhith a’ cosg airgead le co-mheas de 1:10000 agus le bhith a’ faighinn planaichean & amasan nì thu. rudeigin a bhith a’ coimhead air adhart ris.
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Stupid mc. Trash novel. 140 characters mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm
The grammar is simply too bad !!! And some of the readers even pointed out some mistakes too but the author just ignored them after leaving a like ! tf ?
I'm a big fan of your book. I could reread this thing multiple times. keep it up man!!😊
after being tired of chinese nonsense money system i finnaly found something that can be ready thank for your hard work ![img=update][img=update][img=update]
This is so disgustingly trash full of drama reverse ra- pe and ra pe victim being lover you know where this is going the drama part the mc keeps on leaving women he slept with in dangerous situation mostly the married women and their daughter with trash or abusive husband (mom-daughter) they are so dumb more like retard just like the author. The authors keeps doing trash sh !Ts just for disgusting drama when mc can just end it with him bringing them to his home to those with whom he has slept with but nah he leaves the lanlord with the husband who will sell his own wife just for some penny (Mc knows her husband sold her to someone when he lost a beta to someone ) yet knowing that insteat of taking her with him he just gives her his number and leaves bro says he hates cliches yet is the one who is doing that just to create drama
A nice well-written story with a good writing quality that will entertain anyone who read it and you won't find many mistakes, I advice the author to get contracted soon so this work reach out to more people this book has a lot of potential and it's getting wasted by not getting contracted.
Only reason it's not 5☆ is because author said he will bring a little yuri in this at some point (even when i asked before he said no yuri😒)...I'm not a yuri fan not even a little bit but I've read just past 100 chapters before I saw the comment from the author and it was great story till then loved the characters, plus decent world building. Just had to stop because it's not my thing now.
Bardzo fajna historia. Miło mi się to czyta. Czekam na więcej. Proszę o dodanie bohaterek z innych krajów - wymiana studentów z Europy. Pozdrawiam serdecznie autora.
Welp.. Its a good story. However, with Author needs more experience, this will be better.. NGL I'm tired of this Chinese Cliche plots and the Heroines easily falls to MC just because of his overpowered Charm.. Many may enjoy this but some, like me, can't continue to read this story... Just not my Cup of tea..
Cliché story with cliché characters, nothing more nothing less. Girls and women alike falling in love with the mc easily thanks to his system. Every girl is a 'jade' beauty be it mature or young. The visual sense of their looks doesn't bring any realistic sense to readers because every one of them is a 'jade' beauty. Story development isn't exciting for any reason, just some girls got hooked up by mc due to poor circumstances, bad husbands, need of money etc.
hehehe...this is a very good fanfic and an interesting storyline...the mc doesn't become a sycophantic dog.. if only the system could also summon heroine female characters like xia qingyue or chu yuechan and ATG stories, or Yun yun from BTTH... surely the story will be more interesting because the character comes from a different cultivation world that can help mc increase his strength.... well...it's just my wishful thinking... 😂😂😂 keep up the spirit author
The word Cliché is an understatement for this fast as* plot, come on, put some depth into your novel, the only thing that's keeping your novel from being the same as MTL is the decent English, you could have put some time to add depth into your novel, your novels feels like a copy and paste of typical URBAN Chinese novel with the author having patience of a 5 year old, and imagination of a person under a rock, just by having 1 love interest you separate from the other urban novels, by having patience and making it so that he spends his money in a smart way would make your better than others, and by making his system point is converted by spending money with a ratio of 1:10000 and by having plans & goals you will have something to look forward to.
Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem
I give good review because I like to read this. But umm I would like a more concrete harem gathering soon and like a way to know who’s in the harem. Also hopefully the harem talk is had because I just feel it’ necessary for emotional stuffs
The characters were well-developed, the plot was engaging, and the writing style was really enjoyable. I found myself completely absorbed in the story from beginning to end. I would highly recommend this book to anyone
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i really like this novel, i haven't finished it but it seems fun and hot. the gramma could use some work thought, but in general great stuff.
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Top Quality work , I like how the author lets the Mc do what he wants and letting him go of his regrets by giving him the power to change it by himself .
This is the first story I read when the application was installed, and I loved it.
literal definition of trash , it's sooo bad that even Chinese novels (which he has taken style from) will look gold in front of this
There was already homophobia in the first chapter and in the comments, not really for me, also it was so incredibly cliche, hope you get better author, good luck
a question to author before reading this novel..-does this novel contains racism towards other countries like Sakura[ Japan] country, beautiful country /Eagle Eye country (America), bear (Russia) Nation. just asking because I don't like dropping novel in the middle.just giving 5 stars before reading it . hope it's good .
tha am facal Cliché na fho-aithris airson a’ chuilbheart luath seo mar *, thig air adhart, cuir beagan doimhneachd a-steach don nobhail agad, is e an aon rud a tha a’ cumail an nobhail agad bho bhith co-ionann ri MTL Beurla reusanta, dh’ fhaodadh tu a bhith air ùine a chuir airson doimhneachd a chuir ris. a-steach don nobhail agad, tha na nobhailean agad a’ faireachdainn mar leth-bhreac agus pasgain de nobhail àbhaisteach Sìneach URBAN leis an ùghdar foighidinn leanabh 5 bliadhna a dh’ aois, agus mac-meanmna neach fo chreig, dìreach le bhith a’ faighinn 1 ùidh gaoil bidh thu a’ sgaradh bho na nobhailean bailteil eile , le bhith foighidneach agus ga dhèanamh gus an cosg e an t-airgead aige ann an dòigh ghlic dhèanadh e thu nas fheàrr na feadhainn eile, agus le bhith a’ dèanamh a phuing siostam air a thionndadh le bhith a’ cosg airgead le co-mheas de 1:10000 agus le bhith a’ faighinn planaichean & amasan nì thu. rudeigin a bhith a’ coimhead air adhart ris.
Revelar Spoiler Stupid mc. Trash novel. 140 characters mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm
The grammar is simply too bad !!! And some of the readers even pointed out some mistakes too but the author just ignored them after leaving a like ! tf ?
I'm a big fan of your book. I could reread this thing multiple times. keep it up man!!😊
after being tired of chinese nonsense money system i finnaly found something that can be ready thank for your hard work ![img=update][img=update][img=update]
This is so disgustingly trash full of drama reverse ra- pe and ra pe victim being lover you know where this is going the drama part the mc keeps on leaving women he slept with in dangerous situation mostly the married women and their daughter with trash or abusive husband (mom-daughter) they are so dumb more like retard just like the author. The authors keeps doing trash sh !Ts just for disgusting drama when mc can just end it with him bringing them to his home to those with whom he has slept with but nah he leaves the lanlord with the husband who will sell his own wife just for some penny (Mc knows her husband sold her to someone when he lost a beta to someone ) yet knowing that insteat of taking her with him he just gives her his number and leaves bro says he hates cliches yet is the one who is doing that just to create drama
A nice well-written story with a good writing quality that will entertain anyone who read it and you won't find many mistakes, I advice the author to get contracted soon so this work reach out to more people this book has a lot of potential and it's getting wasted by not getting contracted.
Only reason it's not 5☆ is because author said he will bring a little yuri in this at some point (even when i asked before he said no yuri😒)...I'm not a yuri fan not even a little bit but I've read just past 100 chapters before I saw the comment from the author and it was great story till then loved the characters, plus decent world building. Just had to stop because it's not my thing now.
Bardzo fajna historia. Miło mi się to czyta. Czekam na więcej. Proszę o dodanie bohaterek z innych krajów - wymiana studentów z Europy. Pozdrawiam serdecznie autora.
Welp.. Its a good story. However, with Author needs more experience, this will be better.. NGL I'm tired of this Chinese Cliche plots and the Heroines easily falls to MC just because of his overpowered Charm.. Many may enjoy this but some, like me, can't continue to read this story... Just not my Cup of tea..
Cliché story with cliché characters, nothing more nothing less. Girls and women alike falling in love with the mc easily thanks to his system. Every girl is a 'jade' beauty be it mature or young. The visual sense of their looks doesn't bring any realistic sense to readers because every one of them is a 'jade' beauty. Story development isn't exciting for any reason, just some girls got hooked up by mc due to poor circumstances, bad husbands, need of money etc.
hehehe...this is a very good fanfic and an interesting storyline...the mc doesn't become a sycophantic dog.. if only the system could also summon heroine female characters like xia qingyue or chu yuechan and ATG stories, or Yun yun from BTTH... surely the story will be more interesting because the character comes from a different cultivation world that can help mc increase his strength.... well...it's just my wishful thinking... 😂😂😂 keep up the spirit author
The word Cliché is an understatement for this fast as* plot, come on, put some depth into your novel, the only thing that's keeping your novel from being the same as MTL is the decent English, you could have put some time to add depth into your novel, your novels feels like a copy and paste of typical URBAN Chinese novel with the author having patience of a 5 year old, and imagination of a person under a rock, just by having 1 love interest you separate from the other urban novels, by having patience and making it so that he spends his money in a smart way would make your better than others, and by making his system point is converted by spending money with a ratio of 1:10000 and by having plans & goals you will have something to look forward to.
Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem
I give good review because I like to read this. But umm I would like a more concrete harem gathering soon and like a way to know who’s in the harem. Also hopefully the harem talk is had because I just feel it’ necessary for emotional stuffs
The characters were well-developed, the plot was engaging, and the writing style was really enjoyable. I found myself completely absorbed in the story from beginning to end. I would highly recommend this book to anyone
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Revelar Spoiler i really like this novel, i haven't finished it but it seems fun and hot. the gramma could use some work thought, but in general great stuff.
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Thanks, man pagpatuloy moyan ah, pag hindi sapakin kita hayp ka haha!...