Reviews of Star Wars system in marvel by Hunter931 - Webnovel

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Bob_Uchiha_XD

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Mauricio_mz

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malinizgeldii

all your brothers and sisters are like children. mc is like that too. I don't understand how this is the case when this novel should be a better version of a novel. I think the first novel was even worse.

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Neninho
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Grammar could be better, a lot of the mistakes are spelling mistakes that even some free online grammar check would find. (Like repeatedly writing blastor instead of blaster) Personally I don't like the current development (Chapter 13), it's completely overused by fanfics recently. Everything else so far is good, I quite liked the idea and implementation of the system.

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LaughingArkBuilder

I have high hopes for this. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

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Hunter931

This is the second version with a lot of plot holes fixed and a altered story with a different system.

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Bob_Uchiha_XD

Mc slave. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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Mauricio_mz

Lost time ,...........,.................................................mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

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malinizgeldii

all your brothers and sisters are like children. mc is like that too. I don't understand how this is the case when this novel should be a better version of a novel. I think the first novel was even worse.

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Neninho
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Grammar could be better, a lot of the mistakes are spelling mistakes that even some free online grammar check would find. (Like repeatedly writing blastor instead of blaster) Personally I don't like the current development (Chapter 13), it's completely overused by fanfics recently. Everything else so far is good, I quite liked the idea and implementation of the system.

2yr
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LaughingArkBuilder

I have high hopes for this. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

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Hunter931

This is the second version with a lot of plot holes fixed and a altered story with a different system.

2yr
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