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Hahaha! It's hard for me to give 5 stars after I critized a lot of other novels but I have no choice, until now this novel is very good. 140 characters llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll
A good story always pulls me. I won't even give it a read if the story is not to my liking. This book has a great many things to offer. The idea of a declining Democracy and a rise of the Nobility gives a refreshing take on the real world... World is based on our Real World US... It will be easier to relate. It will be an amazing read, I believe. Give it a try.
Insane story, your writing is captivating and it immersed me into the story so easily. I’m loving this read honsestly!
Intriguing! The story's futuristic concept and the revival of political and societal histories fused, makes one look forward to how the story will unfold. The pacing and organization of the story is good and the narrative is well-written. All the best!
Excellent quality of writing. It is so nice to read something without errors! Your story is paced well and you have a great idea. I will for sure keep reading, this is a great story! (Part of review swap)
Great story. Also you writing is amazing. I only could dream to write like that. Keep writing I would say. I am always jealouse if I come up to writers like you. A healty jealousy ofcourse. Keep the good work up.
I just read the prologue and the first chapter and it is really enjoyable. The characters have also emotions that can represent themselves. Overall, a novel with potential
Oh my God am so excited to see what next you will write. Am officially hooked. The MC is quite the character and the writing pace is good. Please Keep It Up.
9 chapters in, I genuinely enjoyed the story. There are no mistakes in writing, so there was nothing what would disturb me while I was trying to focus on the story. It’s really good and I took a liking in Zen, he is a well written character. Recomend 10/10!
The writing quality is good. Story development is nice. I love the character of mc. Looking forward to further updates. Fun fact: I love harem stories. Keep up the good work. 💓💓💓
This futuristic journey had some interesting elements, but it was a bit slow at times. The idea of a Mutant Human in a galaxy full of aliens was intriguing, though. Worth checking out if you're into sci-fi adventures.
Wow!!! I've read a lot of books about life in the future, with experiences beyond what we face presently, but this particular novel brightens the whole picture making it easier to actually imagine these sceneries in one's mind. Chefs kiss to this awesome novel. Dear author we need more chapters
There is very clear dialogue in this story, and the author gives a lot of care to the plot that flows well like a river. It's a book that you won't regret reading.
COOL NOVEL! Great story and well designed. The plot is awesome and outstanding. To the future beyond the boundaries, this is far more than you can expect to be. The writing style is clear and easy to understand. well explained. GRWTA BOOK. KEEP WRITING
I really liked how the MC is portrayed in this novel. Along with the impeccable world building that's been done, this was a good read so far. Only thing I wish for is more updates! I especially liked the part where he kept saying he's not a mutant xD it was almost funny. The fighting scenes could be a little more detailed, otherwise well executed!
Great work!! your characters writing is really good and each character have there depth. the story your writing is totally uncommon in this platform, even though foundation is same approach is different. i am looking forward to next chapter and waiting for existing moments to unfold. keep it up bro
The writing quality is amazing and I love the character design, this is actually a very good piece and I recommend it to everyone
This is truly a masterpiece. It is beautifully crafted, the characters are richly developed, and the story unfolds with breathtaking twists and turns. A literary masterpiece that will leave you awestruck and longing for another chapter. A must-read for all book lovers!"
I really love the world building of the story and how the characters are so unapologetically "human." As in they cuss and they have good and bad thoughts. Can't wait to see more of zen and Anna's adventures. Keep up the good work author-nim!
The writing quality is clear and good I really admire the mc The novel is good and enthralling. Can't wait for the author to release more chapters
The setting of your story is really great, author! I really liked Zen's determination to do something even though he is a commoner. The personalities of his parents and sister are also greatly written. And Overall it also has a great plot!
Thank god you are back! I was gonna give you a low star on stability but read that you were in an accident. I like this novel so I hope you continue with the updates regularly now.
Great world building and great cast of characters! I recommend this to readers who'd like to read great characters and their interactions, and are actually alive. No need for powers or a bunch of girls to make them cooler. 10/10!
I was sold at the dialogue - "we fall on our enemy's corpse". Awesome characters and a charming MC. I am really loving this novel. Cannot wait for moreeeee.
The author has set up a fascinating world that has so much potential I could imagine this story going on for hundreds of chapters. The characters are likable and it is always a joy to read a story about underdogs working their way up toward success. The writing quality could be improved at some points such as describing the environment and character expressions in more detail in order to supplement the well-written dialogue.
The updates are consistent now. The MC is really cool. I want to see more of the group (Tanya, James, Anna and Zen). Until now, the world building is good. I would like to see some personal interaction between the group.
The quality of this novel is really good. The pace is neither too fast nor to slow and the characters are fun to read. I really hope the author maintains the quality.
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Hey guys! Thanks for reading the novel. This is an early check for the story. The academy arc will be not too short not too long. I am making it a bit descriptive because I want to make you guys acquainted with the world, the mutation saga and the different races naturally. There will be tons of stuff you will witness in the academy arc. Some friends, enemies and some potential allies. Once academy arc is done, Zen will leave for a very exciting journey. So keep reading. Yours truly!
Hahaha! It's hard for me to give 5 stars after I critized a lot of other novels but I have no choice, until now this novel is very good. 140 characters llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll
A good story always pulls me. I won't even give it a read if the story is not to my liking. This book has a great many things to offer. The idea of a declining Democracy and a rise of the Nobility gives a refreshing take on the real world... World is based on our Real World US... It will be easier to relate. It will be an amazing read, I believe. Give it a try.
Insane story, your writing is captivating and it immersed me into the story so easily. I’m loving this read honsestly!
Intriguing! The story's futuristic concept and the revival of political and societal histories fused, makes one look forward to how the story will unfold. The pacing and organization of the story is good and the narrative is well-written. All the best!
Excellent quality of writing. It is so nice to read something without errors! Your story is paced well and you have a great idea. I will for sure keep reading, this is a great story! (Part of review swap)
Great story. Also you writing is amazing. I only could dream to write like that. Keep writing I would say. I am always jealouse if I come up to writers like you. A healty jealousy ofcourse. Keep the good work up.
I just read the prologue and the first chapter and it is really enjoyable. The characters have also emotions that can represent themselves. Overall, a novel with potential
Oh my God am so excited to see what next you will write. Am officially hooked. The MC is quite the character and the writing pace is good. Please Keep It Up.
9 chapters in, I genuinely enjoyed the story. There are no mistakes in writing, so there was nothing what would disturb me while I was trying to focus on the story. It’s really good and I took a liking in Zen, he is a well written character. Recomend 10/10!
The writing quality is good. Story development is nice. I love the character of mc. Looking forward to further updates. Fun fact: I love harem stories. Keep up the good work. 💓💓💓
This futuristic journey had some interesting elements, but it was a bit slow at times. The idea of a Mutant Human in a galaxy full of aliens was intriguing, though. Worth checking out if you're into sci-fi adventures.
Wow!!! I've read a lot of books about life in the future, with experiences beyond what we face presently, but this particular novel brightens the whole picture making it easier to actually imagine these sceneries in one's mind. Chefs kiss to this awesome novel. Dear author we need more chapters
There is very clear dialogue in this story, and the author gives a lot of care to the plot that flows well like a river. It's a book that you won't regret reading.
COOL NOVEL! Great story and well designed. The plot is awesome and outstanding. To the future beyond the boundaries, this is far more than you can expect to be. The writing style is clear and easy to understand. well explained. GRWTA BOOK. KEEP WRITING
I really liked how the MC is portrayed in this novel. Along with the impeccable world building that's been done, this was a good read so far. Only thing I wish for is more updates! I especially liked the part where he kept saying he's not a mutant xD it was almost funny. The fighting scenes could be a little more detailed, otherwise well executed!
Great work!! your characters writing is really good and each character have there depth. the story your writing is totally uncommon in this platform, even though foundation is same approach is different. i am looking forward to next chapter and waiting for existing moments to unfold. keep it up bro
The writing quality is amazing and I love the character design, this is actually a very good piece and I recommend it to everyone
This is truly a masterpiece. It is beautifully crafted, the characters are richly developed, and the story unfolds with breathtaking twists and turns. A literary masterpiece that will leave you awestruck and longing for another chapter. A must-read for all book lovers!"
I really love the world building of the story and how the characters are so unapologetically "human." As in they cuss and they have good and bad thoughts. Can't wait to see more of zen and Anna's adventures. Keep up the good work author-nim!
The writing quality is clear and good I really admire the mc The novel is good and enthralling. Can't wait for the author to release more chapters
The setting of your story is really great, author! I really liked Zen's determination to do something even though he is a commoner. The personalities of his parents and sister are also greatly written. And Overall it also has a great plot!
Thank god you are back! I was gonna give you a low star on stability but read that you were in an accident. I like this novel so I hope you continue with the updates regularly now.
Great world building and great cast of characters! I recommend this to readers who'd like to read great characters and their interactions, and are actually alive. No need for powers or a bunch of girls to make them cooler. 10/10!
I was sold at the dialogue - "we fall on our enemy's corpse". Awesome characters and a charming MC. I am really loving this novel. Cannot wait for moreeeee.
The author has set up a fascinating world that has so much potential I could imagine this story going on for hundreds of chapters. The characters are likable and it is always a joy to read a story about underdogs working their way up toward success. The writing quality could be improved at some points such as describing the environment and character expressions in more detail in order to supplement the well-written dialogue.
The updates are consistent now. The MC is really cool. I want to see more of the group (Tanya, James, Anna and Zen). Until now, the world building is good. I would like to see some personal interaction between the group.
The quality of this novel is really good. The pace is neither too fast nor to slow and the characters are fun to read. I really hope the author maintains the quality.
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Hey guys! Thanks for reading the novel. This is an early check for the story. The academy arc will be not too short not too long. I am making it a bit descriptive because I want to make you guys acquainted with the world, the mutation saga and the different races naturally. There will be tons of stuff you will witness in the academy arc. Some friends, enemies and some potential allies. Once academy arc is done, Zen will leave for a very exciting journey. So keep reading. Yours truly!