The Shopkeeper of Konoha

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Iceyunderground

Ok, so I've read up to ch. 133. This review will be based on that progress. I'm no professional reviewer or anything, just jotting down my own 2-cents is all I'm doing. Hope it helps. Writing Quality: 4/5 - There are a few instances, and I mean very few instances, where I have to re-read a section due to incorrect spelling or grammar or something else like that. Very good in this aspect but not perfect. Stability of Updates: 4/5 - Updates are pretty consistent at one chapter every 1-3 days. It's just that the chapter lengths are abysmally short, so yes, I'm docking a point due to short chapters. Story Development: 4/5 - Story revolves around Aoto (the MC) running his shop and the struggles wherein that occupation deals with. Simple, yes, but not super engaging just on it's own. Even with some Ninja elements thrown in often enough, it just feels like the story .... drags or just gets boring at times. Admittedly this issue is only shortly lived I feel it's still something that needs to be acknowledged. Character Design: 4/5 - I like Aoto as a character. His objectives are pretty clear. He understands his own limitations and wants to overcome them in his way in regards to the normal Ninja way. I also like the way the side characters are implemented as well, kinda different to how other novels do it. Other Ninja world specific characters do feel true to their character for the most part, as do the added side characters (though sometimes they seem to be leaning more towards a caricature than a true representation, we'll have to see if this gets corrected or not down the line). World Background: 5/5 - Not the biggest Naruto fan so I can't say if things happening in the background are exactly as they should've happened, but I feel like things are fine. Overall: Should you spend your time reading this novel? If you're looking for something action packed, then no, skip this. If you're willing to 'let the author cook', then sure, enjoy the read. Also, incase anyone is wondering, so far there is no romance or anything like that .... at least not yet, not sure if there will be in the future.

LV 10

Batwaz

Read up to chapter 41(the latest update currently). -This story is currently during Naruto/Saukra/Sasuke academy Era , not any or much interaction with them yet. -Mc has a system related to operating a shop with a gacha mechanic -More of a comedy and business like story, but can change later -Currently slow pace and building up -Novel has slow updates, but has been getting better SPOILER POINTS \\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\ -Mc can summon other characters to help him manage the shop from other worlds -Mc has little or no chakra -Mc is self-insert or person from our world & has knowledge of this one -Currently after the 9tails attack but before Uchiha massacre

LV 15

Tevin_Persinger

A bit of a disappointment compared to your other stories. The quality is far below your other stories. It reads like it is a translated novel. While the grammar is good and has almost no mistakes there are times when you can see that the characters have low IQ and parts that ignore common sense. His outlook on drugs aren't based on reality and often states drug facts that are just not true.

LV 4

Humbuub

talking system is a big red flag for me. It also takes up so much space in content, it also make MC overly reliant just by simply asking the system and voila he got his answers. Shame I was kimda interested on the premise, I just don't see the need of a system or worse, a sentient system.

LV 13

TheFooL

Early chapter was good but after the talking drug lord system not my type anymore. For someone just want something to read then this will be yours

LV 15

Louis_reader_0001

good start i m Happy about the system but cant say much until now (ch3) but Hope that you keep writing 😁

LV 13

TheOneWithoutName

Arthur thank you for accepting my wish and creating Naruto fanfic.i hope you can continue your novels and give us best ending of Naruto, Marvel,one piece novels and as always good work keep going. 🙂

LV 4

TrashHeap

It isn't bad, but there are several contradictions with basic info from the Naruto series that could be corrected with a simple Google search. Once or twice isn't a big issue, but eventually the holes create an unstable tower, if you catch my drift.

LV 11

hero4hire

Its a great ff with a shop manger system and the story so far have been amazing too but author i think the summoning thing is a mistake. You have already summoned 3 people from GOT and it feels overwhelming to keep track of things. It doesnt help that they are big named character so they'll need their own place in story which'll take away from the main plot.

LV 4

Dino_me

don't mind me I am just here to drop this 🤣🤣

LV 4

LastsonofZod

Writing Quality:(4) Feels great to read, there isn't much in term of grammatical errors. Story Development:(4) Feels smooth most of the times but can end up feeling quite forced due to the system. Character design:(3) System naturally hampers character development, still much better than the average fanfic. Updating stability :(5) Pretty regular updates. World Background:(5) Cause it's Naruto.

LV 1

Anas_AsBEIY

A story about the world of Ninja (Naruto) The main character is an orphan child, the timeline after the incident of the kyubei, the idea is special, the story looks interesting قصة تتكلم عن عالم النينجا (ناروتو) الشخصية الرئيسية طفل يتيم الجدول الزمني بعد حادثة الكيوبي الفكرة مميزة القصة تبدو مشوقة

LV 3

Empe_ror99

The story is interesting, it is quite entertaining. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

LV 14

Captain_Apocalypse

good story, very little problems with grammar and its pretty immersive