Immortal Kingdoms

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Alex_7892

Writing quality is excellent. You will come across the occasional grammatical errors other than that sentences flow well and it's an easy read. One thing I found difficult early on was when reading about the cultivation realms or intents the author never clarified or went into to much depth early on like most authors do. All I can say is don't stress out like I did because the author eventually weaves all the necessary information you will need. Another thing worth noting is the there's a lot of information to absorb in this novel mainly pertaining to the unique world background and among a few other things. MC is great. No beta no simping. I would describe him as intelligent, ruthless, and cunning. Author maybe when you get sometime you could make a AUX chapter full of information.

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Percy88_

I have never been so captivated by a web novel or story or book like it besides best sellers I pray u keep updating this the story is slightly complicated but it makes more sense the more u read

LV 3

Magical_Finger

Interesting novel you got here.. After reading the first 5 chapters my heart was captured. Keep writing author

LV 13

GetOffMyDickTho

I’m not good at reviewing, but i’m going to try because I want the author to know that someone is really enjoying his book because it is really amazing even though it has some cliché things. It still have a unique twist on things, really loving every single chapter of it and I’m so sad that one day I’m going to get to the end of a incomplete story, Ik I’m going to be so sad, that’s why in hopes of making this with you we can come back to continue his work so I can see the ending of this amazing novel anyway enough of my yapping.. if u see this I hope you doing good and having a good day see ya✌🏾🤘🏾

LV 14

Kolwmn

A really good story. I‘m really invested in the development of Leonardo and Nier. The universe it takes place in is slightly complicated, however it functions well. But sadly it seems like this gem of a novel has been dropped. I hope that someday it will get picked up again.

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Dino_reader

pretty interesting, and excellent writing quality. i really like where the story is going, the first chapters really got me hooked. can't wait to read more.

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M0R1

BRO IS THAT FURATA ON THE COVERRR.........................................................................................................................