In the movie worlds with my system

LV 13

Jati_Pradja

planet blue star ? my Chinese novel sense are tingling

LV 14

Krutch13

I couldn't make it past the first chapter. Grammar and punctuation are atrocious.

LV 3

Lord_of_cringe9000

This is beautiful , the sheer amount of quality is like fine caviar to my taste buds

LV 5

TheSystemFan

So I like the premise of the story. But there are no punctuations like fullstop or comma. So it's like you are reading one continuous sentence. Also I don't know if the Author wants to improve or not but he should really consider this stuff. I mean adding a fullstop after a complete sentence is a basic requirement to be an author.

LV 15

southgamez

I couldn't make it past the first chapter with how god awful the flow of reading went. I felt like I was reading an elementary school students fantasy story. Grammar is hardly used or just used incorrectly, and the sentences are hard to comprehend due to how unnecessary some of the lines are. I feel like the author was adding more words to a sentence to make it longer. (EX from ch1: My name is Alex Walker. I was a college student who led a normal life, except that I'm an orphan. Who grew up in an orphanage until school and moved to college dorms for college and doing part-time jobs for money. It all worked out well until today) this could have been way simpler as this instead. (EX: My name is Alex Walker, I was a full-time collage student getting by through part-time jobs. I grew up as an orphan, so there was little money to fund my living expenses, so I opted to live in the collage dorms. It all worked out well, until today, that is.)

LV 14

The_Puffer

Everyone else: "You have superpowers?!" Mc: "Yes I have powers but that is not important right now." Everyone else: "ah yes you right"

LV 10

Bostigking

El sentido del humor es malisimo, la calidad de la historia también el protagonista es repelente y te llega a entrar ganas de matarlo y nada tiene sentido en la historia no volvería a leer esta "novela" por llamarla de alguna manera y no volvería a leer la por nada del mundo parece un fanfic de un mal fanfic chino.

LV 4

LastGod

You get a truly OP MC for the first 2 worlds. Then at chapter 60 or around there. He suddenly acts like hes 15 and like a soy boy cuck and starts trying to have a relationship with a 15-17 year old girl. Even though its stated hes at least mid 30's. VERY NOT COOL! He goes from OP awesome fun guy to crying and bowing before a woman who is almost 20 years younger then him. And this is supposedly a DRAGON GOD?!?!?!?! This along with the badly written dialog I could get over because the author is not a native english speaker but along with how the story is going its too much to take.

LV 14

Quake_Midaro

Absolute garbage between the grammer the useless mc and the rushed writingthe fact the MC is just another garbage sideshow Chinese MC this is basically the movie's being copy and pasted and the MC adding obnoxious childish comments save your time and brain cells and just ignore this fic

LV 4

ShatteredMusic

character is stupid and gets needed every single world after getting a buff, absolutely ridiculous. Grammer bad.The story development can basically be represented as the flash with it basically being sped through with no lasting moments.

LV 3

Bilal_Irshad

my man I fully support you in writing this fanfiction please don't drop it incomplete [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

LV 4

Ramot

I will just say MC is not the MC, he just follows the story and original MC's like a NPC, no character development.

LV 4

Spike009

If I am being honest here it feels like a kid is writing this novel. But for some reason it works for me. Not my fav novel out there but still a good read though

LV 4

MarinXGrayfia

looks like a translation from Chinese. My IQ getting lower and my brain cell is roasted

LV 14

Has1ur

More please more please More please more please

LV 14

The_Puffer

The first few chapters and chinese is really strong with this one. I downloaded the chapters so I had no way of knowing if this was a translation or anything. And now Opened my limited İnternet Just to comment how bad this is.

LV 14

Anton_Shudder

it seems like it would be a good quality novel but the writing quality is so bad I just can't continue reading you can tell English isn't their first language and they didn't get a native English speak to edit and make it readable imo

LV 3

Zeroz7

No me gusta juzgar tan pronto, pero solo desde el primer capitulo la lectura ya es incomoda. Parece como si me estuviese contando un resumen rápido de los hechos que se supone e están ocurrieron do en tiempo de narración, lo cual quita toda la inmersión y sabor a la historia

LV 10

Alex_4407

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