Reincarnated with an Analysis system.

LV 13

Kirito_K5

Yo, Author here, Kirito_K5, rewriting this review for new readers. The beginning chapter for about 30 chaps in, are not exactly impressive, but you have to understand, it was learning to write well at that point. I noticed my improvment from around the second arc, the vampire raid, and my story writing took a good turn during the war arc. I ask that you be patient enough and get to the 2nd arc before deciding if you want to drop or not. All love added.❤️

LV 5

Psan

Well... its not bad... but its filled wirh plotholes, inconsistencies and mistskes. He allows mc to do actions that should be impossible for him to acomplish... he was a regular highschool boy and he can dodge a veteran sword strike, catch arrows midflight from elves with his hands. Wield a sycth so well. He can block a rain of arrows from dozen epves with ease???? He did not had any combat skill at all... and mc is so confident lol... not even 1 day and he orders elves to bring him to a F phoenix to desl with thst has been terrorizing elves for hundreds of years?.... you must smoke a lot of wêęđ lol.

LV 15

Alanray64

Typical story line where MC dies and is reincarnated with a system. Low EQ male with a number of love interests and no clue on how to deal with them. Elements of kingdom building, though it is not to advanced at the moment. Overall it is an interesting novel, though the only negative drawback is that the author hasn’t taken time to proofread his novel. The number of grammar and spelling mistakes is not pleasant to the eyes. I recommend the author take some time out and check his writing in advance. Anyways, it isnt to bad of a read. 👍

LV 12

Innocent_Girl_5403

fabulous story.... great book..... well done

LV 12

Rafael_Loki

Slime but wo everything that makes it great. The plot is rushed and convenient. I love harem, but the sequence of events are ridiculous and mc actions are nonsensical. I know that there is some profound plot behind his actions, but there is no build up to that plot. The reader is throw out of the loop far to many times and a "notes" chapter shouldn't be necessary to fill plotholes.

LV 4

SnowApathie

A well done story .

LV 4

the_god_of_plot

while reading the synopsis should I read this or not, hmm saw "fan of rimiru tempest" yep def reading this

LV 4

Man_of_culture

There are so many grammar mistakes, or just mistaking a word for another. The story leaves a lot of essential things out. Hope the author will make a few edits on the first few chapters so at least the new readers could get invested in the novel.

LV 4

Tubbtle

thought it was reincarnated with anal'¡tic' and clicked on this

LV 15

StrangeLoopSleuth

fine if you don't mind another idiot MC.

LV 15

Greensgarden

I can't get over the extremely bad grammar. Normally I can over look it, but not when one line is "I need do take closer hearing." not only that but just because you're a fan of an anime, didn't mean you should directly rip off parts of the system. And the random one word Japanese exclamations is just garbage considering the people of the land don't apparently know what Japanese is, yet still use it. hope it got better but I don't pay for something I can find in the free bin.

LV 13

TrueDragonSoul

Overall a rather entertaining read, and I do recommend at least giving it a go. The premise is obviously heavily inspired from a few other novels, most notably Reincarnated Slime, but still retains a little uniqueness. The author has done a fairly good job, but obvious unfamiliarity with the English language has resulted in plentiful grammatical quality issues. A proofreader would significantly improve the quality, but till then be prepared for a plethora of...interesting word choices.

LV 3

K_Phynom

Really nice book................keep it up

LV 14

The_Sweet_Sparrow

Very well written book Author-Nim. I was drawn in from the start. The characters are interesting and the world building is excellent. The grammar and flow are great and very clean. Looking forward to reading more.

LV 4

VertiKalEl

I personally love this story. won't lie I came just to give a review. I ready promised to be strict but the only thing I can nitpick at is minor spelling errors but other than that this book is great. The beginning reminds me of Wiseman's grandchild.

LV 4

Reginleif

definitely my cup.of tea/coffee.... jokes aside I trust author story building I'm having high hopes on this after reading some chapters ( 30 or 50 ) will rewrite the review... thanks

LV 2

Dwi_Zirul

A novel whose world development background is unclear is very chaotic, in the first chapter it enters the world suddenly and is immediately captured by women who call themselves valkrye, they are humiliated and then After leaving the Valkrye village which was not too far away he was ambushed by a group of elves who wanted him to be a sacrifice to them and was mad again he accepted and faced the god alone and Crazy win. and this novel is a super bad bad copy of the tensura novel

LV 13

bangukilikiliko

Reading this novel have profoundly, surly and utterly broken my mind because of how utterly ridiculous the mc and the characters interact with each other.... the longer i read the smaller my brain become so I'm warning my brothers and sisters in GOOD FAITH to leave immediately and never look back....thats all❤️❤️❤️