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- Qualidade de Escrita
- Estabilidade das atualizações
- Desenvolvimento de Histórias
- Design de Personagens
- Antecedentes do mundo
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As long this story isnt becoming a harem story. It will become a great novel. I think, if you give the mc a bit more Character development And more insight in the characters this can be one of the best novels out there. Keep it going!
Me gusta como llevas hasta el momento la historia 😃😃🙂🙂😃🙂🙂😃🙂🙂😃🙂🙂😃🙂🙂😃🙂🙂😃🙂🙂😃🙂🙂😃🙂🙂😃🙂🙂😃🙂🙂😃🙂🙂😃🙂🙂😃🙂🙂👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
Nice Beginning so continue to write and about the surprises that the MC wanted just add new branches of magic that only he can use or he teaches to his friends from the book knowledge that he got from the wish, make him a business tycoon with lots of money that he made him self like stocks, businesses & shares in both muggle and magical world please make him have a status screen as extra gift from god.
Me encanta, ojalá el MC quedé en Slytherin mi casa, porfavor siga actualizando y subiendo más capítulos. Es muy buena tu historia, no se siente cargada y es muy fluida, también la parte en que se conecto con Olivia me sorprendió no pensé que la aceptaría sin más pero no quedó mal.♥️😊💖
As long this story isnt becoming a harem story. It will become a great novel. I think, if you give the mc a bit more Character development And more insight in the characters this can be one of the best novels out there. Keep it going!
Me gusta como llevas hasta el momento la historia 😃😃🙂🙂😃🙂🙂😃🙂🙂😃🙂🙂😃🙂🙂😃🙂🙂😃🙂🙂😃🙂🙂😃🙂🙂😃🙂🙂😃🙂🙂😃🙂🙂😃🙂🙂😃🙂🙂👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
Nice Beginning so continue to write and about the surprises that the MC wanted just add new branches of magic that only he can use or he teaches to his friends from the book knowledge that he got from the wish, make him a business tycoon with lots of money that he made him self like stocks, businesses & shares in both muggle and magical world please make him have a status screen as extra gift from god.
Me encanta, ojalá el MC quedé en Slytherin mi casa, porfavor siga actualizando y subiendo más capítulos. Es muy buena tu historia, no se siente cargada y es muy fluida, también la parte en que se conecto con Olivia me sorprendió no pensé que la aceptaría sin más pero no quedó mal.♥️😊💖