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Shameless author here giving myself 5 stars (Lets be honest, who would give themselves less than 5 stars unless idk) Anyways, here's my analysis of my very first novel; Grammar, punctuation, and use of clever language I would say is my forte. (Please do point out any mistakes if you see then though) I would say the first 60 chapters or so could have been better and used a bit more polishing. However this is my first novel (Please don't kill me) Also, I'm dumb, so leave more reviews cuz I read all of them. (I do wish to improve my writing skills)

11mth 3

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LV 4

DEMON_LORD_0

the story is really a great hidden gem!!! would like the author to 1. make the chapter titles more expressive 2. put on a good book cover 3. make his writing style more dramatic 4. put on a good and interesting summary all to attract more readers... best wishes for future🙂 seeing potential in the story so dont disappoint (first time writing a review)

4mth 2

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LV 14

Resistant_Knight

So far I would say this novel has a lot of potential and is very good. I like a lot of things that the author is doing. For example the direction of the story. I also like the setting. Two bad thing I will say is that I hope for more character development for the mc. It seems he randomly just got a new trait that just didn't make sense but that could be explained in flashback if you want to do that. I am referencing about when he was saying he had no qualms about killing someone but added a justification about how he had a lot of negative karma which kind of contradicts itself. One last thing I don't like is the main characters reasoning on why he wants to ascended to higher realms. We are informed that his parents are dead and that later they may actually be alive. I have a problem with how the mc reasoning for what happened here. For example he is five years old at this time so I would expect him to be more immature in his thought process like it had been shown so far. When it was revealed his parents might be alive he kind of just shrugged it off and thought that he will go to meet them in the future. I would expect maybe some doubts instead of this. Like maybe he would think, did they abandon me or didn't want me. Maybe I am stretching a bit. Otherwise I think the novel is very good and I am enjoying it a lot. Hope for me chapters in the future. Also don't take the negatives I have said to heart I have been thinking authors would appreciate it more if I write more negatives about their novel so they could improve.

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1yr 2

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LV 11

Daynightdreamer

As a rookie author myself i hope your novel does well and you enjoy writing. All the best on the trails ahead. As a reader, I found the premise of your story to be very intriguing, especially with the heavenly tribulation origins. The world has potential for intrigue and grabbing someone's attention. I appreciate the creativity. As for the con, the conversations between the characters are not organic, making it feel unreal and stiff. Also, the transition between the different scenes seemed a little rushed. In my eyes, your novel has potential as long as you work on the interactions and the pacing. Those are my humble two cents as a reader. All the best!!!

1yr 2

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LV 4

sparks786

I really like the novel and I hope you will not drop it like your other novel There is so much nonsense on Webnovel these days so please don't drop your book and go on

8mth 1

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LV 15

FreezingPoint

Great book with great potential Good English grammars, didn't waste my time reading all chaps, waiting for more chapters.

1yr 1

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Suheil_Lakhani

Great book but small question. I've just passed ch 50 and it was said before that he could fight six major realms ahead. yet he struggles to kill people who can only fight 6-8 minor levels. how so?

3mth

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Lord_of_Endless

The grammar is perfect.the work epic.and you are legendary dear author

1yr

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Lucas_Santos_4643

A premissa e incrivel, o desenvolvimento e viciante, so falta a estabilidade das postagem de capitulos. 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀